My Check-in System is a Little Different

Those who abandon books should not leave a mess on the ground.

The author is great. Many people in the comment area are now saying that "the heroine should not be written to death in the early stage" and "the subsequent heroine is not the heroine but just a look-alike". I believe you have also seen these contents. As a reader, I still like the first forty chapters. The relatively novel plot sequence really attracted me. I have an idea (for reference only) that I can add some plot later to remind Bai Xi of the memories of his "past life". The other thing is my personal feeling, because it is a written novel (not like a TV series where you can see two people are exactly the same, even if the name is changed like this, the audience will think that he is he), so I think the name that Baixi changed after his reincarnation is very uncomfortable for me. I always feel like a different person (I feel that some of the characters have also changed). Of course, if the author has laid a lot of foreshadowing, just pretend that I didn't say it, haha. I don't know how the author will explain the origin of Tang Xiaobai, but I think it is a bit inappropriate for his age. A 20-year-old couple has a 6-year-old child. When I think about it, I can only think of something like time travel. Haha, the author should explain this well. If the explanation is unclear, it will feel like this child is dispensable. Although I don't know how long the author can last, I will definitely keep going as long as I have time. Come on author.

If resurrected, the following bridge section will be set up. Bai Muxi fell into a deep coma due to the activation of the diamond ring, and changed back to Bai Xi after waking up. Emotional status: After waking up, Bai Xi's relationship returned to the state before his death. He and Tang Mo still cherish each other and have a relationship of strangers to each other. All memories have been recovered including Bai Muxi's, and the marriage certificate is authentic and valid. There is no need to change the story outline, background, elements, or original intention. Can everyone accept this arrangement? ? ? If you still can't accept it, you can only continue to maintain the new Bai Muchi plot. Let's draw a line between black and white!

I have to say that Bai Xi failed in the first article, and the author successfully aroused public outrage. I was led here by the author, why should I abandon the book? Well, the dialogue between the male and female protagonists is very down to earth. The author's writing style is not bad, I must continue to maintain it in the future.

I don't want to read it. They were a good couple, but now they are dead, and they have an extra son inexplicably.

This book currently only has more than 50 chapters, but the sudden death of the heroine in more than 20 chapters made me stupid, so that I skipped to read later, wanting to see the "real heroine" recover her memory, but it can be seen that the current heroine and the previous heroine are indeed recovering their memories, and I believe that all memories will be restored soon. The above is my intuitive feeling when reading the book, and the following is my thoughts after reading it. First of all, the death of the heroine is indeed very, very hard to accept, but it is not completely unacceptable (as far as I am concerned). This is why I gave it four stars, because writing a daily novel is still such a refreshing article. The readers are here to relax, but the plot setting is so twists and turns, it is true It will dissuade many people (probably not when the number of chapters increases). After more than 20 chapters of warm daily life, it is a dead heroine. Even if they know it will be a good ending, there will be people who can't adapt to it, because Bai Xi's image has been preconceived, and Bai Muxi's identity as a latecomer is indeed a bit embarrassing. These are some ideas for the female protagonist. At present, it can be seen that the core of the full text guide is the female protagonist. All in all, it is quite good💩. (Ps: If there are any unforeseen changes later, such as a plot twist or something, treat my comment as non-existent)

It felt very good at first, and the character design of Bai Xi was also very good, but the author should not have written the heroine to death😊😊 Even if she was written to death and then resurrected using the system, it would be good. But in the end, another person came out to inherit the memory. It always felt weird. After all, the person who inherited the memory was no longer Bai Xi. I didn't have the memory that I personally experienced before.

I just forgot about Baixi and replaced it with Baimuxi. Then a son came along, and the person involved didn't even know he had a son. I can only say that the writing is not average.

You actually write Baixi to death, it's so uncomfortable, and I can't understand the rest. One son is five or six years old, and the male protagonist should be a junior high school student at the time. This timeline is wrong. There is also a male protagonist who said that he had a car accident in junior high school. Someone who is interested will find out after a careful investigation. You should write that the male protagonist in Baixi's car accident was extremely sad and fell asleep for five or six years before adding it to the timeline.

What about his family members? Where is her best friend? Where have they all gone? Also, when I look at the chapters you wrote, I feel like there are a lot of differences in the middle. I'm reading this novel here, and I feel like it's very taxing on my brain. Isn't the novel supposed to be enjoyable to read?