Elegant Style

I read the first chapter of "Pian Pian Feng Cai" tonight, and I would like to make some suggestions from my own perspective. I think the plot unfolds a little hastily: when introducing cases and characters, the amount of information is relatively large, which can easily overwhelm some readers with poor logical skills and poor understanding skills. Secondly, there are too many characters appearing at one time, and each character is not introduced enough, which can easily make readers confused. It is recommended to slow down the pace of the plot and deepen the characterization of the characters, background, and identity. Finally, I think the author did a good job setting up suspense and stimulating readers' interest in reading. Since I have only read the first chapter, my suggestions may be a bit abrupt and insufficiently based, so I hope you can understand me. However, after reading it overall, I thought it was very good, and the details were appropriately depicted, especially the micro-movements and expressions of the characters. I hope the author will continue to work hard, write more and more excellent works without being impatient and in a happy mood.

I feel like there are a bit too many characters, the paragraphs are long, and the plot is okay. Come on!

Ideas are thoughts, not written words. Therefore, imitating other people's ideas is generally not considered plagiarism. If you copy an entire paragraph from someone else's novel (as long as it is in written form), or copy a sentence from a chapter of someone else's novel, or copy dozens of sentences from someone else's novel, you have changed the names of people and places, which is generally considered plagiarism. Copying of entire chapters is directly considered plagiarism.

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No, tomorrow is Friday, and I just changed a chapter this week. It's like getting ready to move into a new house, only to find that the material used for the floor is not environmentally friendly, and the wires embedded in the wall are unscientific... Anyway, it was uncomfortable to look at, so I smashed the floor and shoveled the tiles... Only then did I realize that the finished draft was not easy to revise. Dear masters, please give me some advice. What's better?