Perfect God in the City

The writing is too exaggerated and lacks a sense of empathy. Based on my experience as a bookworm for ten years, this book is destined to be a hit on the street.

I have a suggestion. I hope that the protagonist can be ruthless sometimes, and be ruthless to those who provoke him, instead of giving the other party a chance to retaliate. Especially when the other party is a woman, it is more obvious. For example, when Chen Qianqian was tripped by Gu Yi, the protagonist just said a few words and stopped taking action because the other party said a woman. Although he banned her in the end, this was not pleasant at all and made it a bit frustrating to watch. Regardless of whether she is a woman or not, her family members have been bullied and she did not take action. This is not pity for her, but a cowardly behavior. The same happened to Zhao Xueying that time. Although she was repeatedly ridiculed and was designed to be insulted, it did not hurt the protagonist, but this was not a reason to help her. She also said that we are classmates, does she think you are a classmate, why should you be so warm and cold?

When this book was published, I didn't think much about the single heroine, because most of the things in life are not what you want, so forgive my YY and my skin. Let's talk about the order of the heroines first: Zhang Wenqing appeared first, and now Yaya, but Yaya is the childhood sweetheart, and Yaya is older than Qingqing. Let's talk about the heroine's character again: Zhang Wenqing is gentle and belongs to the softness of spring. Yaya is simple, but she dares to love and hate, and she belongs to Xia Zhizhi. So, can you understand what I mean? There are definitely multiple heroines, but... Four at most. And they are the four most perfect... Friends who like Qingqing, I think you will like Yaya more. Dare to love, dare to hate, wait for eight years, and your infatuation will not change. I wish to win the heart of one person and never be separated. Just like what is said in the article, I have failed you in this life, but in the next life, I wish to be two white mice in front of the Buddha, dependent on each other in life and death. As for who the male protagonist loves the most... Yes, that's right, it's the system! He made a PY transaction with the system...😛

The author writes very well! It's fun to watch. It's also great to write about it occasionally during live broadcasts. I support you! I vote for you every day, come on!

I remember that my cousin and I were the only two people at home that day. She was lying on the bed in a very seductive posture. I walked to the bed and her body fragrance filled my nose. I pinched her thigh and she looked at me doubtfully. Then I took off her pants. She seemed to understand something and started crying. Finally, she had no strength and no resistance. She was just crying. I succeeded and successfully changed her diaper... It's not a poisonous weed. You can see it by searching for the poster's name or nodding at the picture. Thanks again!

The book hits shelves next Tuesday! After it is put on the shelves, it will be updated five times a day! The helmsman adds an update! The leader adds ten updates! Well, if this book ranks among the top three weekly hits, I will keep my promise! Ten updates every day! The methods to increase popularity are as follows: post, reply, vote for recommendations, vote for monthly votes, etc.! Thank you all for your support!

The writing style is very good. Although it is the same routine in the early stage, it is very well written and the characters are well created. From the systematic explanation at the beginning, it can be seen that it is going to the universe. If you keep reading, you will see a different world. I suggest that the author does not pace too fast in the early stage and slowly builds up the personalities of different characters. Otherwise, in the later stage, you will not remember who they are. This is a common problem with Internet novels. Finally, I wish the author this novel will become more and more popular!

① This book got good grades, I was swollen, and then I quit! ②The boss is my buddy, and he and I are both sad about my leaving. ③My body couldn't bear it anymore. I went to bed after three o'clock every night for a month and got up at seven o'clock to go to work. I was very tired! ④ Let me tell you, I will start coding tonight, code two chapters, and then send them out. I will write the eighth update during the day tomorrow! Do you want to publish it all at once or chapter by chapter? ⑤Tell me about future updates, today, tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, three days in a row, guaranteed to be six chapters! Afterwards, in addition to rewards from the leader, there will be no explosive updates, and a minimum of two updates! Well, you can add one update every day! ⑥I'm out of work now and I'm under more pressure, so if you want me to make more posts after I put them on the shelves, please support me by putting them on the shelves!

I have only read a dozen chapters, and I don't have a deep sense of immersion, because the system flow progresses too fast, millions and billions, almost one by one. The introduction should take the earth as the starting point and buy out the universe. But you, the author, may not know that the earth chapter is the most interesting one. Don't look at the writing style to look at the plot. Beyond the earth chapter, it should depend on your own writing skills, because the earth chapter should be the first stop of your novel. Just like cultivation, the human world, cultivation, and ascension to immortality World, the world of gods and even the world of saints, the first stop is a foreshadowing of the future. You can't do it so hastily. After all, the urban system flows and is close to modern life. Take your time. Well, let's just say this. This is the advice I give you after nearly 20 years of reading experience. I think it is a personal suggestion. This is purely done by hand, please don't bother me with trolls, thank you!

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