
Beyond the Dust
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Ever since Ye Xinyi was hit by a strange person in the supermarket and cut his hand, everything became abnormal. The wound that was supposed to be healed was only covered with a thin film, and the pink flesh exposed by the wound had a tendency to gradually bulge and turn blue. When she habitually looked out the window in the afternoon, the black cat that often climbed up to her balcony to take a nap clung to the window and stared at her greedily. There are countless such strange incidents...
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Official(2)Scraped 4d ago
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Originally, this book was written on a whim. It was published last year. It was originally written as an escape room novel without a protagonist, but it was revised and revised later and it has been shelved in WPS. Recently, I don't know why I suddenly wanted to write it down, but because I'm lazy, I can only post the revised part of what I've already written, and then update it bit by bit. Because it was written casually, it may not be rigorous in many places, and there may be some problems when it is revised. Just like many places where I want to add the psychology and detailed description of the characters, I feel that the sentences are a bit cumbersome. For example, in the first round, the relationship between Gao Yu and Du Yu was obviously taking advantage of each other, but the confrontation between the two in the end was a bit too sloppy. Gao Yu's character is a bit broken. Knowing that only one person will survive in the end, his character should be more delicate and should not directly confront Xie Ming, leaving the heroine who is recognized as a waste to Du Yu. There are many more about this (because I also secretly read the written text hehe). Of course, I will try my best to pay attention to this aspect later, but I am not a professional writer, so I hope you will be merciful, but I will read and accept your opinions. Also, I am very happy to see everyone's recommendation votes and collections, so please like me more! I will work harder to write it myself!! Believe me, it will be better in the future! Chirmi~
I won't write it here anymore.
Because it's too stand-alone, I can't see the reading volume, I vote by robot every day, and I haven't passed the signing process, so I won't write it here.
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Official(2)Scraped 4d ago
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Originally, this book was written on a whim. It was published last year. It was originally written as an escape room novel without a protagonist, but it was revised and revised later and it has been shelved in WPS. Recently, I don't know why I suddenly wanted to write it down, but because I'm lazy, I can only post the revised part of what I've already written, and then update it bit by bit. Because it was written casually, it may not be rigorous in many places, and there may be some problems when it is revised. Just like many places where I want to add the psychology and detailed description of the characters, I feel that the sentences are a bit cumbersome. For example, in the first round, the relationship between Gao Yu and Du Yu was obviously taking advantage of each other, but the confrontation between the two in the end was a bit too sloppy. Gao Yu's character is a bit broken. Knowing that only one person will survive in the end, his character should be more delicate and should not directly confront Xie Ming, leaving the heroine who is recognized as a waste to Du Yu. There are many more about this (because I also secretly read the written text hehe). Of course, I will try my best to pay attention to this aspect later, but I am not a professional writer, so I hope you will be merciful, but I will read and accept your opinions. Also, I am very happy to see everyone's recommendation votes and collections, so please like me more! I will work harder to write it myself!! Believe me, it will be better in the future! Chirmi~
I won't write it here anymore.
Because it's too stand-alone, I can't see the reading volume, I vote by robot every day, and I haven't passed the signing process, so I won't write it here.







