Fishing Tycoon System

I can't stand it anymore when I see Zhang Lin going to the Magic City to have a meal every day. I don't know why the author arranged such a character (for the sake of the harem?), But this character is really annoying, and it overturns some of the previous things in the book. First, the protagonist. Facing such a person, just because she is a beauty, the protagonist gives in at every turn, and his weak and unassertive character is undoubtedly exposed. I really can't imagine that this is the upright and upright protagonist described by the author in the previous article. Second, the two female supporting characters in the front, Ouyang Yufei and Wu Yan. Wu Yan, the author uses a lot of writing to explain that she is a relatively traditional woman who likes the protagonist and will focus on the protagonist. Ouyang Yufei is a pretty person with a slightly strong personality and a little bit of jealousy (the protagonist always smells the scent of perfume when he comes back from an errand). They both like the protagonist. When faced with Zhang Lin, a beautiful woman, not only did they not be wary, but they took the initiative to get in touch with the protagonist? A normal person wouldn't be able to do this, okay? Even if you help them, your personal relationship is a personal relationship, and if your IQ is above the level, you will take advantage of the fact that two people dislike each other to make them reduce contact, right? Are you invited to your house to eat and hang out together all day long? It's no exaggeration to say that system writers can be very imaginative, but only for systems. No matter what type of novel you write, a person's character must withstand scrutiny. In modern literature, people's character should conform to modern characteristics. Characters can have flaws, but they cannot be obviously contradictory. I'm not against stallion stories, but I hate stallion stories where the female characters are stupid. Go and see how many women can stand men and other women? My family background is not good, but you have helped me, so I don't care if you have another woman and are willing to get along with you? You and I bicker all day long and enjoy being friends. I just like you. I don't care about your status or how many women you have. Talk to your wife and see if she can slap you. I have read a novel (I won't mention the name so as not to mention the advertisement, but I actually forgot about it). There are 3 or 4 female protagonists in total. The author handled the emotional line of each female protagonist quite well, not to say it is perfect, but at least the readers can accept it after reading it. Each of them experienced a very special story before they came together with the protagonist. There are beautiful neighbors, school beauties, classmates, police beauties, beautiful doctors, etc. Unless the writing is particularly good, it will not retain readers at all.

1. The writing is very good. Hundreds of people have hundreds of opinions. The author does not need to be popular with people who pretend to understand. If you really show up (eunuch), then people who like this book will really look down on you. Second, you really hurry up and update. If you keep updating so slowly, you may not finish the book in three to five years. Who is still interested in staying and waiting to read it? You will really lose people's hearts. Don't let readers feel disappointed.

Can anyone introduce me to this book? There is something I want to see, but I am too poor, so I have to think carefully. The front is pretty good, but I don't know what the back is like?

I didn't want to give it a star, but I couldn't do it.

This is not an advertisement, this is my sincerest regards.

The author made the protagonist have the same emotional intelligence as an idiot! You graduated from elementary school, right? Worse than a composition written by a primary school student!

It's very beautiful, but updates are slow.

Are you still a coward? When people see that you are unemployed, they will definitely suspect that you cannot pay the rent. Is it wrong to urge you? ? Pig's feet are so shameless

There are relatively few system stories and too many character development and realistic stories. Gives people fatigue. Personally, I suggest that there be more stories in the system, which are at least similar to reality.

From the introduction, I knew it was about a stallion, but I didn't read it and didn't want to read it.