Moe Academy Stars Are Everywhere
by I Am The Handicapped Person
About This Novel
Things go back hundreds of years. The war between the Quarks and the Darks continues. This war often destroys people's families. The Quarks, Elves, Auroras, Soli, Elves, Darks and other races that suddenly appear are enemies or friends. How can the Quarks protect the earth?
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
Come on💪
After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to send you an unsatisfactory book review of mine... Come on, Neyuki! You have a good understanding of the analysis of details, and you also have your own ideas on the writing of characters, which is great. But I would like to make some suggestions. There are too many redundant words in the language description of one chapter, and the confessions are also a bit sudden. If you can add some detailed descriptions and psychological activities appropriately, and then the confessions come step by step, you will achieve twice the result with half the effort. Try not to have too many words in a chapter, which can be counterproductive. Finally, I hope you get better and better! I also hope your book can be read by more cute friends! (If the above text is offensive in any way, please forgive me!) --Jugang's little Arnold left his name 9.13
come on
This book is so good. Please update it every day. I'm waiting for it.
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
Come on💪
After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to send you an unsatisfactory book review of mine... Come on, Neyuki! You have a good understanding of the analysis of details, and you also have your own ideas on the writing of characters, which is great. But I would like to make some suggestions. There are too many redundant words in the language description of one chapter, and the confessions are also a bit sudden. If you can add some detailed descriptions and psychological activities appropriately, and then the confessions come step by step, you will achieve twice the result with half the effort. Try not to have too many words in a chapter, which can be counterproductive. Finally, I hope you get better and better! I also hope your book can be read by more cute friends! (If the above text is offensive in any way, please forgive me!) --Jugang's little Arnold left his name 9.13
come on
This book is so good. Please update it every day. I'm waiting for it.
