Everything Starts with Baozhilin

You wrote it well in the world of Once Upon a Time. The protagonist was killed by a musket, no problem. But you don't even have a transitional chapter between Chapter 51 and Chapter 52? I feel like that one is missing a plot point. Didn't you write that it's easy to lose fans like this? Even if you lose, you have already written so many, should you make up for it?

After reading a few pictures, I didn't want to read anymore. It's a good subject matter, but it's written like this.

He has the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, the Nine Yin Manual, and the Nine Yang Manual. He can't beat Yang Xiao, and he hasn't opened up the Rendu and Du Meridians. So what kind of skills can he practice to open up the Rendu and Du Meridians, and then he can be considered a master?

Alas, the most unpleasant thing about this book is that the protagonist is always dressed as a sick man. Isn't this a pleasant setting? It is difficult enough for the protagonist to survive in these worlds where martial arts are respected, and to make him look like a sick man, tsk tsk, if he were not the protagonist, I believe he would not survive a few worlds.

The male and female protagonists in Longmen Inn are both unlikable. The female runs a black shop and murders and eats people. The male is cold-hearted. You write him as a good guy and you are speechless. . . .

Don't take reading novels too seriously, as it will affect your mood.

Since no one has posted anything, I'll post one. Ask, which ones are from Guishishou

Why do you keep dying? It feels like every world is half-written. There is also the wild man. I don't know why I wrote it. He went on a treasure hunt and found so many things. Why did he get nothing?

A little more time to read than downstairs

Look at my time and ask who else...