Reborn in the Madhouse of the Underworld, the Evil God is Actually My Boyfriend
by The Autumn Mood Never Tires Of Drinking Wine
About This Novel
[Double clean + horror copy + double strong + relaxed and funny] Her workaholic boyfriend only focused on work and lost contact with her for half a month. He Wangning couldn't bear it anymore and rushed to his laboratory to ask for a breakup. Unexpectedly, as soon as he finished speaking, he fell into the copy of the Underworld Mental Hospital. Copy 1: Mental Hospital The underworld mental hospital is full of patient imps. The imps will identify the same kind and food through the pollution value on their heads. The pollution value is lower than 50, and they will all eat according to the food. He Wangning: "?" The pollution value on her head is 6 at the beginning. Every ghost here can kill her instantly, but it doesn't matter. Her boyfriend raised the pollution value to 99 in two days and became the boss of the little ghosts. The task is to survive, the pollution value reaches 100, and the supervisors, doctors and nurses cannot find out that he is not a mental patient, find the BOSS and kill him. Copy 2: Secrets of the Deep House In City A of the underworld, two major families, He and Song, are getting married. However, after three months of marriage, his wife mysteriously disappears one day and then appears inexplicably. As a disguised wife, He Wangning has no memory of the original owner, but she must be careful not to be discovered by her husband and find out his secrets. But... Isn't this role allocation a bit strange! ? How did her boyfriend become the brother of her husband in the game! ? It's over, the copy has become a Shura field. Boyfriend: You and I are not even married! He will become your husband as soon as he comes up! He Wangning: Calm down, calm down! It's just a game! ! Facing his brother in the game, he clenched his fists: I can bear it! But if you dare to touch my baby, even if you risk your life, I will be smashed by this game! He Wangning: No, what kind of forbidden love is this? ? So exciting! ? [Copy three, copy four... To be continued]
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I give you a five-star review. Writing a book requires persistence!
Feeling pretty good
The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work, but when will the six-fingered doctor show up? 😑😑I still want to watch it go crazy😑
Very beautiful, I recommend adding more
1. Synesthetic descriptions that can add details of the environment, such as "the smell of rotten flesh mixed with the smell of rust sticks to the nasal cavity" and "the wind passing by the dead trees makes a sound like fingernails scraping on a blackboard" to make the eerie feeling more impactful; the part about the black crow can be written as "the wings are condensed with dark red blood scabs, and the claws scratching the bark of the tree make a harsh sound" to enhance the tension of the picture. 2. When Song Jincen is protecting someone, you can add subtle movements such as "the veins in her neck bulged" and "heavy breathing on the top of her hair" to highlight the tension; when He Wangning is protecting her, add descriptions of her eyes, such as "the pupils glow with a cold golden luster, and dark purple lines ooze from the nails" to hint at her hidden power and create suspense in contrast to the low pollution value. 😘😘😘
Pretty good
There are elements of horror in the comedy, and I feel that it is quite immersive. The descriptions of the scenes and actions are good, but it can be refined a little, so that it will not be too stiff. Also, pay attention to filling in the pitfalls, and some pitfalls are still missing😑
It's beautiful, especially the beginning, it's very graphic🖐️🖐️🖐️
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Official(6)Scraped 4d ago
Keep updated
I give you a five-star review. Writing a book requires persistence!
Feeling pretty good
The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work, but when will the six-fingered doctor show up? 😑😑I still want to watch it go crazy😑
Very beautiful, I recommend adding more
1. Synesthetic descriptions that can add details of the environment, such as "the smell of rotten flesh mixed with the smell of rust sticks to the nasal cavity" and "the wind passing by the dead trees makes a sound like fingernails scraping on a blackboard" to make the eerie feeling more impactful; the part about the black crow can be written as "the wings are condensed with dark red blood scabs, and the claws scratching the bark of the tree make a harsh sound" to enhance the tension of the picture. 2. When Song Jincen is protecting someone, you can add subtle movements such as "the veins in her neck bulged" and "heavy breathing on the top of her hair" to highlight the tension; when He Wangning is protecting her, add descriptions of her eyes, such as "the pupils glow with a cold golden luster, and dark purple lines ooze from the nails" to hint at her hidden power and create suspense in contrast to the low pollution value. 😘😘😘
Pretty good
There are elements of horror in the comedy, and I feel that it is quite immersive. The descriptions of the scenes and actions are good, but it can be refined a little, so that it will not be too stiff. Also, pay attention to filling in the pitfalls, and some pitfalls are still missing😑
It's beautiful, especially the beginning, it's very graphic🖐️🖐️🖐️
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