Horror Game, Survival and Candy
About This Novel
Just after taking a shower, Chu Jingluo unexpectedly entered a horror game called the World of Po Fei, a bizarre world including a funeral parlor, a playground of death, hospital horrors, and strange tropical rainforests. She tried her best to survive with her friends, but unexpectedly she fell in love. In a game world similar to the one before, Mo Yunfan saw Chu Jingluo for the first time, but found that his eyes began to follow this new person until his love was so deep that he could no longer pull away. The adventurous journeys and dangers one after another seemed to be insignificant with her. Different lives intertwined because of games spark sparks in danger and trust. Survival and love must be grasped by Chu Jingluo with both hands. Small theater: Mo Yunfan held up the back of Chu Jingluo's scratched hand, frowned in pain, applied medicine and bandaged it, and moved cautiously: "Tell me if it hurts." Chu Jingluo nodded obediently, and said coquettishly: "Kiss it and it won't hurt anymore." Opposite, the cursed girl with a terrifying face looked at her bloody arm helplessly. Is this cloying sweetness in the wrong scene? Are you here to survive or to fall in love?
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Official(12)Scraped 3d ago
Let's just talk about the heroine Zhu Jingluo.
In the first game, I was careful and couldn't find anything wrong. After that, something started to go wrong. I started to meddle in my own business and seemed to be in a leadership position🤗 Kind reminders can be said to be kind, but to help people who have malicious intentions towards me again and again, isn't it a bit of a saint? May I suggest that the heroine can be rational in the future? A little, or there is a certain degree of kindness. Also, the male and female protagonists fall in love at first sight. The relationship between the two of them is a bit fast, uh, there will be a very sudden feeling. You haven't experienced that much, so it's up to you. The advantage is that the plot design is very good, and the updates are also good, four updates a day, right? It would be nice if the heroine's character could be changed a bit, comparatively It looks a little uncomfortable. I'm not saying this to find fault. After all, good advice may offend your ears and it may not sound nice😍I'm not a troll. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)งThe new book will be great in the future😽😹
The heroine, the Holy Mother, is too cowardly. She wants to steal her clothes, but also protects the man named Xu. She is incompetent.
The first chapter was good... But the characters and the plot collapsed later. The heroine always likes to meddle in other people's business... She has her share in everything, as if the male and female protagonists have been dehumanized.
generally
The author couldn't write an emotional line and wanted to give some shit. For example, he wrote the male and female protagonists as lovers from the beginning. In the third chapter, it was said that the heroine doesn't like to meddle in other people's business. What happens next? The character design is completely to pieces. Seeing that the reviews are all five stars, I feel a little embarrassed about the three stars, but I feel a little sorry for myself for the five stars.
Thoughts on the latest chapter
The logic and story of the previous chapters are pretty good. But now the plot logic is getting more and more weird, especially the recently updated game plot, which is not scary at all, and the key points of breaking through the levels are inexplicable and have no focus. It's like anesthetics appeared out of thin air, the male protagonist knew where the door was without any evidence, the fight with the animals was not described, and the game background was not dealt with and ended hastily (a single illegal research was gone? The reason for the animal's rage was not written?) In short, the latest version of the game is full of plot flaws, and there are many logical irrationalities, which are different from the previous chapters. I hope the author can adjust himself first.
The heroine is a bit like a virgin
After seeing 124, I feel that the heroine's performance is getting worse and worse. Not to mention the tokens of each game. In the end of the world chapter, doesn't there be a storage space mentioned earlier? It seems that they have all been forgotten. Overall, it's okay, but I feel like it's a little off.
Think you look good
The relationship line is too early. In a survival game, survival is the first priority. The heroine should be strong first. I looked at the previous article and felt that her best friend is just a soy sauce.
Good
How should I put it? There are good points, but there are also shortcomings. But overall I still like this plot setting very much.
Sister Li is very outrageous here, right???????? She boarded a pirate ship and took the initiative to save people? You might say she has a bad personality and refuses others, but the heroine has felt from the beginning that Sister Li is not a good person and is selfish, not to mention that she actively asked the heroine to change ships with her. Normal people would be somewhat wary of people who endanger their own interests, so why would they take the initiative to save others? ? So willing to help? ? It means that she is too Virgin Mary, is this still a strong woman? A brainless strong woman?
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Official(12)Scraped 3d ago
Let's just talk about the heroine Zhu Jingluo.
In the first game, I was careful and couldn't find anything wrong. After that, something started to go wrong. I started to meddle in my own business and seemed to be in a leadership position🤗 Kind reminders can be said to be kind, but to help people who have malicious intentions towards me again and again, isn't it a bit of a saint? May I suggest that the heroine can be rational in the future? A little, or there is a certain degree of kindness. Also, the male and female protagonists fall in love at first sight. The relationship between the two of them is a bit fast, uh, there will be a very sudden feeling. You haven't experienced that much, so it's up to you. The advantage is that the plot design is very good, and the updates are also good, four updates a day, right? It would be nice if the heroine's character could be changed a bit, comparatively It looks a little uncomfortable. I'm not saying this to find fault. After all, good advice may offend your ears and it may not sound nice😍I'm not a troll. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)งThe new book will be great in the future😽😹
The heroine, the Holy Mother, is too cowardly. She wants to steal her clothes, but also protects the man named Xu. She is incompetent.
The first chapter was good... But the characters and the plot collapsed later. The heroine always likes to meddle in other people's business... She has her share in everything, as if the male and female protagonists have been dehumanized.
generally
The author couldn't write an emotional line and wanted to give some shit. For example, he wrote the male and female protagonists as lovers from the beginning. In the third chapter, it was said that the heroine doesn't like to meddle in other people's business. What happens next? The character design is completely to pieces. Seeing that the reviews are all five stars, I feel a little embarrassed about the three stars, but I feel a little sorry for myself for the five stars.
Thoughts on the latest chapter
The logic and story of the previous chapters are pretty good. But now the plot logic is getting more and more weird, especially the recently updated game plot, which is not scary at all, and the key points of breaking through the levels are inexplicable and have no focus. It's like anesthetics appeared out of thin air, the male protagonist knew where the door was without any evidence, the fight with the animals was not described, and the game background was not dealt with and ended hastily (a single illegal research was gone? The reason for the animal's rage was not written?) In short, the latest version of the game is full of plot flaws, and there are many logical irrationalities, which are different from the previous chapters. I hope the author can adjust himself first.
The heroine is a bit like a virgin
After seeing 124, I feel that the heroine's performance is getting worse and worse. Not to mention the tokens of each game. In the end of the world chapter, doesn't there be a storage space mentioned earlier? It seems that they have all been forgotten. Overall, it's okay, but I feel like it's a little off.
Think you look good
The relationship line is too early. In a survival game, survival is the first priority. The heroine should be strong first. I looked at the previous article and felt that her best friend is just a soy sauce.
Good
How should I put it? There are good points, but there are also shortcomings. But overall I still like this plot setting very much.
Sister Li is very outrageous here, right???????? She boarded a pirate ship and took the initiative to save people? You might say she has a bad personality and refuses others, but the heroine has felt from the beginning that Sister Li is not a good person and is selfish, not to mention that she actively asked the heroine to change ships with her. Normal people would be somewhat wary of people who endanger their own interests, so why would they take the initiative to save others? ? So willing to help? ? It means that she is too Virgin Mary, is this still a strong woman? A brainless strong woman?
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