Hp: Mixed up in Hogwarts and Became the Group Favorite
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The cursed time turner threw her into Harry Potter's 1981, and by chance she became Malfoy's "second daughter who never existed" Lena. At Hogwarts, Lena Malfoy is a famous figure that everyone knows. If a new student asks, the older seniors will usually think about it for a second and then answer cautiously. "Very beautiful... But a real devil." Sitting at the dining table with Baiyou in her arms, Lina smiled and raised her head, "This is called outsmarting, baby." [Food Guide] 1. Daily record of the heartthrob's career 2. The CP is not determined, and which one is written is which 3. The characters should be as non-OOC as possible, and the plot is close to the original work
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Brace Essay
A small essay I wrote before is not suitable to be placed in the main text, so I put it in a book review. I hope it will not disturb everyone's mood of reading the main text. The following is Brace's first perspective. --That day I stood on the terrace on the second floor of Malfoy Manor, my fingertips unconsciously rubbing the edge of the crystal cup. On the dance floor downstairs, my mother was chatting and laughing with the lady of a certain pure-blood family. I could only understand how much calculation was hidden in that smile. "Another boring party." I raised my head and drank the red wine in the glass, and the bitterness spread on the tip of my tongue. These so-called ladies from famous families were like exquisite marionettes, saying the same compliments, but their eyes sparkled with disgusting ambition. Especially when I think about hearing Draco bragging about his sister later, I feel my temples pounding. That spoiled young master always talks about "my sister" every time they meet, as if he is the only sister in the world. "That's enough." I turned around to find a quiet place, but I bumped into Ole. The girl had tears in her eyes and asked me why I was avoiding her. I sighed and said the breakup words I had said countless times. The moment red wine was splashed on my shirt, I could hardly control my anger. "Damn it." As he walked quickly to the bathroom, he bumped into a figure at the corner of the stairs. The sunlight filtered through the stained glass, casting a colorful halo on her long, light-blond hair. The girl tapped her fingertips lightly, and the moment I got closer, I smelled a faint scent of dragon blood ink. "Not bad, Mr. Zabini?" I froze and lowered my eyes to notice that the wine stain on my shirt had disappeared. I was sure that I had never seen her before, but those gray-blue eyes felt strangely familiar. It wasn't until she mentioned Draco that I suddenly realized that maybe she was the pampered Miss Malfoy. "But I know you, little scumbag Zabini." This sentence may annoy me, but I find it interesting. The cunningness in the girl's eyes was like a dancing flame, which instantly ignited my boring life. I don't know when the rain started to fall, hitting the colorful windows in a steady patter. I stood in front of the window, watching the raindrops forming a river on the glass, and suddenly realized that, for the first time, I was expecting Draco to mention his sister again.
I hope the male protagonist is Theodore, please.
Character introduction baby
Thanks for reading. If you have any questions, you can read the comments or contact me at any time. I will reply when I see it. I love chatting with babies😹
Have you finished writing this book?
I haven't read it yet. Is this book finished? Does it mean that the comment is not finished yet (?
Why does it keep repeating itself?
What's going on in the next chapter?
Fill the hole
Babies, please fill in the blanks. I changed Damian's surname to Shafiq. In the original setting, Damian's parents also died, and there were foreshadowings in the chapter of rescuing Barty. The previous chapters have also been revised, just know it when you see the baby in the back. Thank you for your understanding and support.
Update soon, author! Who is the male protagonist?
There is a little flaw
Overall, it has more of an original flavor than other novels, but the dialogue is not handled very well. One sentence per person is okay, and some are two sentences per person. There is no speaker yet, and there are ambiguities. Every time there is a dialogue, I have to stop and see who is speaking.
Good looking. If you like reading the author, hurry up and update.
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Official(11)Scraped 7d ago
Brace Essay
A small essay I wrote before is not suitable to be placed in the main text, so I put it in a book review. I hope it will not disturb everyone's mood of reading the main text. The following is Brace's first perspective. --That day I stood on the terrace on the second floor of Malfoy Manor, my fingertips unconsciously rubbing the edge of the crystal cup. On the dance floor downstairs, my mother was chatting and laughing with the lady of a certain pure-blood family. I could only understand how much calculation was hidden in that smile. "Another boring party." I raised my head and drank the red wine in the glass, and the bitterness spread on the tip of my tongue. These so-called ladies from famous families were like exquisite marionettes, saying the same compliments, but their eyes sparkled with disgusting ambition. Especially when I think about hearing Draco bragging about his sister later, I feel my temples pounding. That spoiled young master always talks about "my sister" every time they meet, as if he is the only sister in the world. "That's enough." I turned around to find a quiet place, but I bumped into Ole. The girl had tears in her eyes and asked me why I was avoiding her. I sighed and said the breakup words I had said countless times. The moment red wine was splashed on my shirt, I could hardly control my anger. "Damn it." As he walked quickly to the bathroom, he bumped into a figure at the corner of the stairs. The sunlight filtered through the stained glass, casting a colorful halo on her long, light-blond hair. The girl tapped her fingertips lightly, and the moment I got closer, I smelled a faint scent of dragon blood ink. "Not bad, Mr. Zabini?" I froze and lowered my eyes to notice that the wine stain on my shirt had disappeared. I was sure that I had never seen her before, but those gray-blue eyes felt strangely familiar. It wasn't until she mentioned Draco that I suddenly realized that maybe she was the pampered Miss Malfoy. "But I know you, little scumbag Zabini." This sentence may annoy me, but I find it interesting. The cunningness in the girl's eyes was like a dancing flame, which instantly ignited my boring life. I don't know when the rain started to fall, hitting the colorful windows in a steady patter. I stood in front of the window, watching the raindrops forming a river on the glass, and suddenly realized that, for the first time, I was expecting Draco to mention his sister again.
I hope the male protagonist is Theodore, please.
Character introduction baby
Thanks for reading. If you have any questions, you can read the comments or contact me at any time. I will reply when I see it. I love chatting with babies😹
Have you finished writing this book?
I haven't read it yet. Is this book finished? Does it mean that the comment is not finished yet (?
Why does it keep repeating itself?
What's going on in the next chapter?
Fill the hole
Babies, please fill in the blanks. I changed Damian's surname to Shafiq. In the original setting, Damian's parents also died, and there were foreshadowings in the chapter of rescuing Barty. The previous chapters have also been revised, just know it when you see the baby in the back. Thank you for your understanding and support.
Update soon, author! Who is the male protagonist?
There is a little flaw
Overall, it has more of an original flavor than other novels, but the dialogue is not handled very well. One sentence per person is okay, and some are two sentences per person. There is no speaker yet, and there are ambiguities. Every time there is a dialogue, I have to stop and see who is speaking.
Good looking. If you like reading the author, hurry up and update.
