Pokémon Begins with a Charizard

Pokémon Begins with a Charizard

by Yanyan Is Really Not Handsome

Length:
28Kwords14chapters
Latest:
Ch. 14完结
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The game starts with a fire-breathing dragon with king-level strength, the heroine Serena.

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Official(5)Scraped 1mo ago

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Mo Jing58mo ago

The relationship between the male protagonist and Serena is too fast, and the original Serena liked Xiaozhi when she was a child.

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Yi Ren Raises a Cat59mo ago

After reading it, the author takes a reader's perspective and looks at this novel.

First of all, the most classic one in the original book has a trainer level, which is Ash Ketchum's Charizard. Because the trainer level is not enough, he can't command it. It is said that it evolves too fast. It is said in the original book that the relationship between the male and female protagonists develops too fast. They kiss in the third chapter. So at your pace, will they have sex in the fourth chapter? Compared with the original work, the male protagonist has been changed. The Citron brothers and sisters have not joined, and the Pokémon is left behind. The translation behind the language is basically just a low word count. After reading it for a minute or two, you may still resist it. After reading it for a long time, it really doesn't feel immersive at all. Serena's text, so make some changes. For example, change the fire-breathing dragon to a small fire dragon and let the male protagonist cultivate it by himself. The emotional line of the male and female protagonists should also be slowed down. For example, change the number from ninety-three to about sixty and let the male protagonist slowly cultivate it. Change it. I will give it three stars, mainly because Serena's text is too little, otherwise one star is enough.

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Book Friend 2023052320531625903501354mo ago

It's very beautiful. I believe that the protagonist Yan Ling will marry Serena and Sirona in the end.

Would you mind making the protagonist more of a goddess?

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Yangyang53mo ago

Niu Niu Niu 666

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Traceless_da38mo ago

The book is great, please update it quickly and add a back-track killing feature!

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