Rebirth of the Strongest Glory

The author is a bronze war god At the beginning of human life, nature is slow Isn't the author even more of a bad guy? If you don't update, I don't like it. Let's see what you do next!

How do you, who have never experienced the age of dropping out of school, know the sadness of being forced to drop out of school at the age of ten? When you are still thinking about which girl to date today, how do you know the hard work of teenage children carrying bricks on the construction site? How do you know the hard work of those thirteen or fourteen-year-old girls in the factory grinding out calluses on their tender hands! How can you understand their longing for school?

This time I am giving feedback on the worldview issue. The author's setting of the worldview is too hasty. The kings are rare and the game is very popular. This is not logical at all. When there are more people playing, masters will naturally appear. Even if only a small number of them are able to give birth to kings, instead of almost none like now. If the author has other ideas when writing this way, then I think the world view should be enriched so that readers can feel the plot is very clear at this stage, instead of being unable to understand the development of the plot after watching it for a long time. If I understood it wrong, I apologize to the author. I hope the book will get better and better

Not bad, not bad, much better than Xiaobaiwen! Recommendation has been given!

Bronze master comes to learn!

Pesticides are so poisonous that they have reached another world?

There are many backgrounds in it that are the same as those of "All-round Game Designer". Also, can the author revise the previous chapters more? It's too rough. I don't have that exciting feeling after reading it. It's like keeping a running account. It writes about the bad sides of many characters, but this is a game novel, not a fun novel. Things like slapping others in the face should not happen, especially since the writing is not very good. I hope it can be revised in the future. The communication between the characters is also too fake. Such extreme communication is impossible in reality, and the thoughts of the characters are also very irrational. For example, when conflicts arise, the people here will not be rational and are very stupid. Other characters are overly weakened, allowing the protagonist to suddenly rise. It does not look as disgusting as the "protagonist halo", but it is too fake and too unenthusiastic. After watching it, I can't say what's wrong with it, but I just don't like it. I've finished my feedback, thank you

When will our way of life come back? When will our way of life come back? When will our way of life come back? Our life

0 points, negative review, author, think about it, Mulan was revised before the S4 season? , As soon as I saw this, I just stopped looking at it.

It's so well written that I specially used my grandpa's phone to review it! ????????????????