The Peasant Queen Has Some Land

I discovered this book during today's flash sale and was attracted by the introduction. I have just read about 50 chapters now, and I feel that I have some issues that I would like to express to the author. 1. I always feel that the character image of the heroine is a bit too much, right? Is it really okay for a five-year-old child to be so smart? Although she is a pseudo-child. This is not to say that there were no prodigies in ancient times. Cao Zhi, King Luo Bin, etc. Were all prodigies. This is also related to family environment and education. However, the heroine... Is good at martial arts and can split stones into powder; she is good at medicine and saved the county magistrate's son, who other doctors said was hopeless; she is good at planting and can increase the yield by thousands of kilograms... Isn't this too powerful? I know that the heroine's hidden identity is a god, but this is the mortal world, and even if there is a master as an excuse, there will be flaws. Check carefully, has the heroine had any contact with her master? The ancient secret guards were very powerful. At least hide the heroine's abilities! Or you can arrange for a master on the surface for the heroine to give outsiders a reasonable explanation. It's okay for the heroine to tell her family about her fairy-like ability, but she can't tell outsiders, right? The big tree attracts the wind! 2. Damn, you are writing about ancient times! Although it was an imaginary dynasty, it was also an era where imperial power was supreme! Some of the heroine's little moves are full of flaws! In other words, some things the heroine does are beneficial to the imperial power, but she will also be jealous, right? In other words, the emperor of Fengqi Kingdom is a good one, and it would be over with a narrow-minded heroine. Then what will happen if the emperors of the other four countries discover the heroine's ability? Is it to win over or kidnap? After all, Feng Qiguo won't be allowed to develop too much, right? It will be a threat to other countries. 3. I quite like the setting of the heroine traveling through time and becoming an embryo😊. It would be better if more description could be given of her performance as a baby. Some of the ideas are quite good, but the writing style is immature, and some of the story lines always feel like they are not so perfect. It feels a bit weird when you look at it, but you don't think of the heroine as a child, and her age doesn't match it. If she was a teenager, she might not feel this way! I also saw the comments. It's your first time writing a book! It's easy to understand! You can read more other similar novels. If you read more, you will find some minor problems with this book. Growth requires a process. I hope you can write more perfectly. I look forward to your next book! (PS: I'm being picky and a bit too serious, but I really really don't mean anything else! After all, writing a long review takes time, so please don't criticize me! 😘Thank you🙏)

Let's just say that when the heroine was five years old, she became rich by selling ginseng. She spent a lot of money on this and that, but her family didn't feel bad about it. She felt that everything she did was right. However, the author, please consider that the heroine's family used to be from rural areas, and their ability to accept things was too fast. Also, your pace is really too fast. The heroine has too many brothers to remember, which makes people feel dizzy.

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The subject matter of the book is very novel. I like the subject matter of this book. The characters are not complicated. Although there are some minor flaws, this is your first time reading this book after all. Come on.

Now I read readers' comments every day. Whether they are good or bad, the author will accept them with an open mind, and the author is also working hard. In the early stage, the author didn't understand many things when writing an article for the first time, and he didn't know how to write it. The writing was relatively stiff. Later, the author also worked hard to change himself. But dear friends, if you don't like it, you don't have to read it. This is your right, but please be merciful. Don't give a low score because you think the book is not suitable for you, and say that the author is stupid. The author doesn't owe you anything. You write a book to increase your own income, and at the same time, it also makes people who like it happy to read it. The author works hard every day to think about how to structure the plot, and sometimes he thinks that he may not sleep well all night. When he thinks of the plot, he immediately starts coding. However, there are no readers who say that the author plagiarized. So please read the book in a civilized manner and refuse to criticize the author.

It would be great if the author writes about women wearing men's clothes. More people will read this type of novels, which are attractive.

I think it's exaggerated that the heroine is five years old. Look carefully. Let a person with twenty-eight years of past life memories pretend to be a little loli. You can imagine the scene in your mind, and the book is originally made up. Is it interesting to compare it with normal things? The author writes books to make people feel happy to read them. This is a cool novel, and he does not abuse the heroine. The author is a biological father, and anything is possible for his daughter. If you can accept it, read it. If you can't accept it, go find the book you like. Don't look for a sense of presence here.

Let me make it clear here that the writing at the beginning of this book is indeed not good. You can read it if you want to or not. Your comments, suggestions, and errors pointed out will be corrected by the author, but the premise is not to give low scores maliciously. You can give comments without giving any points, but if you give low scores maliciously and find faults, the author will fight back. It is not easy for authors to write books, so please respect each other. If you don't like to read it, turn right and walk slowly without seeing it. If you don't read it and give it a low score, the author will fight back.

The jump is too fast and there is no moving plot. It's like copy and paste.

I liked it when I first watched it, but then I lost interest. The heroine is a bit too perfect, Then she talks about everything. Although it is awesome, she should also consider whether it is feasible. Shouldn't a person be low-key? Well, even if we adopt this style, there are still contradictions. Furthermore, there are too many details describing side branches in the article, which I personally dislike [although it can be skipped] Then there are too many detailed descriptions, such as cooking a meal or treating a person. Why should the details be described so clearly? It takes up a whole page and is not divided into paragraphs. This kind of paragraph makes my head hurt just by looking at it. At first, I would read it, but later I realized that it was really a waste of time! Thank you for your personal opinion.