
The Little Maid of a Retired General
by Polysalt And Polysaccharide
About This Novel
I traveled through time and was sold to the home of a retired general to help him take care of his children. What was originally a simple job has become increasingly difficult for some reason. For example, when I was telling a story to the little milk baby, a voice always interrupted me: "No, this is unreasonable. How could a prince marry a commoner?" For example, when I was making food for the little milk baby, there was always a person lingering at the door of the kitchen, lingering for a long time. For another example, when I want to put the baby to sleep, a three-year-old boy who is more than two hundred and two hundred months old always pesters me to sleep with him? It's unbearable, I'm here to be a maid! There is no such service as sleeping with you! A certain boss: A maid who doesn't want to be his wife is not a good maid! Me: ヾ(*???*)! !
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Official(47)Scraped 2mo ago
A little suggestion
Can you let the heroine calm down for a while? Oh my god, a series of assassinations, kidnappings, and stabbings. The fate of the heroine is too tragic, and she was slapped many times. Can't she resist? It seems a bit frustrating to watch
So 🐶
One word for dog, two words for real dog, and three words for real dog. What motivated me to read on was to see how much of a dog he is.
Is this a fucking novel?
Are you sure this isn't a rant? I'm confused.
If written in the first person, it feels like many plots cannot be fully written, like a diary. But the plot is pretty good! It would definitely look better if it was in third person!
writing
The author used the wrong method in writing this novel. You probably used the first person method. You should write in the second person. If you write in the first person, it feels like you are writing a diary. I just made a small opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Thank you.
According to me, the author's writing style is very nice, but the heroine of this article is too lackluster.
The heroine is too courageous. She does everything without thinking. She is simply simple-minded and has well-developed limbs. It really disappoints me. I hope the author can make the heroine more decisive. She should be decisive when she refuses. Also, she is a modern person with modern thinking. Even if we consider that this is ancient times, she will never be a third party or take concubines. Generally, girls in the 21st century do not approve of it. There are still many loopholes that need to be fixed.
The female protagonist stretched her hips, and the male protagonist was even more speechless.
The heroine's brain is a little bit troubled. She doesn't remember to eat, but she doesn't remember to fight. She is speechless.
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It's all a psychological activity, which gives people a feeling of chaos and annoyance. . . . I can't accept it. I can still read the first few chapters, but not the rest. . .
The heroine has so many mental activities that she is speechless
I feel like this book is supported by psychological activities. There are more psychological activities than plot.
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Official(47)Scraped 2mo ago
A little suggestion
Can you let the heroine calm down for a while? Oh my god, a series of assassinations, kidnappings, and stabbings. The fate of the heroine is too tragic, and she was slapped many times. Can't she resist? It seems a bit frustrating to watch
So 🐶
One word for dog, two words for real dog, and three words for real dog. What motivated me to read on was to see how much of a dog he is.
Is this a fucking novel?
Are you sure this isn't a rant? I'm confused.
If written in the first person, it feels like many plots cannot be fully written, like a diary. But the plot is pretty good! It would definitely look better if it was in third person!
writing
The author used the wrong method in writing this novel. You probably used the first person method. You should write in the second person. If you write in the first person, it feels like you are writing a diary. I just made a small opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Thank you.
According to me, the author's writing style is very nice, but the heroine of this article is too lackluster.
The heroine is too courageous. She does everything without thinking. She is simply simple-minded and has well-developed limbs. It really disappoints me. I hope the author can make the heroine more decisive. She should be decisive when she refuses. Also, she is a modern person with modern thinking. Even if we consider that this is ancient times, she will never be a third party or take concubines. Generally, girls in the 21st century do not approve of it. There are still many loopholes that need to be fixed.
The female protagonist stretched her hips, and the male protagonist was even more speechless.
The heroine's brain is a little bit troubled. She doesn't remember to eat, but she doesn't remember to fight. She is speechless.
.
It's all a psychological activity, which gives people a feeling of chaos and annoyance. . . . I can't accept it. I can still read the first few chapters, but not the rest. . .
The heroine has so many mental activities that she is speechless
I feel like this book is supported by psychological activities. There are more psychological activities than plot.










