The Sword Master from the Lost Belt

Recently, some readers have made it clear that this book has too many problems. For this reason, the author wanted to make changes without thinking or sleeping. But any changes that need to be made cannot be thought of by the author alone. For this reason, a suggestion building has been specially established here to recruit all book friends who have read this book and have opinions on its problems. The author is a newbie and his writing style is still very immature. He really needs suggestions for improvement. Since you have spent a few precious seconds of your life clicking into the book review and reading the words written by the author, why not help the poor, weak and helpless author improve his writing style?

This book is awesome, I like it. Although your writing is not good and your knowledge is not extensive, I just like the book you wrote. Why is it so beautiful? I give you a recommendation ticket so you don't have to look for it.

What is written is a mess (although I won't complain like this, but this is a true thought from the heart) Can the boss tell me briefly what story is written?

Just say a few words and your enemies will become your lovers, awesome

The book starts from today, and the plot of the first chapter has been modified to make the book better. If you have any opinions, please don't be stingy with your pen and ink and feel free to correct me.

You know it's too watery, you know what you wrote. . . . You have to write two chapters to start a fire. I have written almost twenty chapters to start a fire. Brother, you can write it in a funny way, but you can't write it in this way.

The author is so good at telling the plot so quickly