
Two Apocalyptic Worlds: Traveling Through the Modern World for 60 Seconds Each Time
About This Novel
Zombies are rampant and civilization collapses. Xu Mo traveled through time and became the most ordinary survivor in the apocalypse. But his golden finger is a little different - a door that can only be opened for 60 seconds every 48 hours. Behind the door is the entire still, empty modern world! The author is still trying to survive in the apocalypse, it is absolutely true~~~
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Official(7)Scraped 2d ago
No, it's so disgusting, and it's so weird, I can't stand it anymore, I vomited
He didn't feel the apocalypse, as if he had found a place to practice martial arts. The focus was on how to defeat monsters and upgrade his martial arts. The apocalyptic environment was more like his back garden for martial arts training.
60 seconds is enough for anything, even peeing is not enough
objective evaluation
Although the first part is single-player, you can still watch it. If you still write like this in the second part, the author is probably about to enter the palace.
Very good apocalyptic article
Very good, well paced and well written! It hangs just right!
Pretty good,
The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. I suggest you read more about other similar themes for inspiration. The plot can also be sped up a bit.
1. Water, insignificant things, unnecessary moaning, repetitive descriptions, there are too many words for water. 2. In the part of killing wolves in a small town, I left the shelter directly without confirming what was going on. Without the halo of the protagonist, I already received a box lunch. 3. It seems silly to interact with other survivors in a small town. 4. After arriving in Jiangcheng, it was completely impossible to tell whether it was the end of the world or the same environment as before the end of the world. Let's put it this way, let alone the end of the world, right now, even if a city wants to produce a one-dollar lighter alone (the raw materials and accessories cannot be replenished). As a result, in this doomsday city of hundreds of thousands of people (who will be gathered later), they can produce whatever they want. There are as many modern products as you want, such as drones, planes, tanks, firearms, walkie-talkies, and computers. Funny? 5. The survivors encountered in the early stage didn't even have a weapon or shield (a wooden stick was considered a weapon). Is this enough to live in the end of the world? 6. You, an ant, dare to enter and explore the zombie lair that neither superpowers nor missiles can defeat? This is because he is certain that he is the protagonist and cannot die, right? 7. Before resuming production, it would be good if Jiangcheng could stabilize more than 100 or 200,000 people. How dare you bring together millions of people? How dare those survivors go? Think about the time when masks were used, how much material support did a city need from outside? You are in the last days and you have nothing, but you can still feed millions of people? You said there are plantings? For you as the author, just say yes. 8. During the straw burning period, a city with millions of people has no input of natural gas, oil, and coal. These things as fuel can be burned at will. The reason was reasonable before the apocalypse, but it will be a joke after the apocalypse.
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Official(7)Scraped 2d ago
No, it's so disgusting, and it's so weird, I can't stand it anymore, I vomited
He didn't feel the apocalypse, as if he had found a place to practice martial arts. The focus was on how to defeat monsters and upgrade his martial arts. The apocalyptic environment was more like his back garden for martial arts training.
60 seconds is enough for anything, even peeing is not enough
objective evaluation
Although the first part is single-player, you can still watch it. If you still write like this in the second part, the author is probably about to enter the palace.
Very good apocalyptic article
Very good, well paced and well written! It hangs just right!
Pretty good,
The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. I suggest you read more about other similar themes for inspiration. The plot can also be sped up a bit.
1. Water, insignificant things, unnecessary moaning, repetitive descriptions, there are too many words for water. 2. In the part of killing wolves in a small town, I left the shelter directly without confirming what was going on. Without the halo of the protagonist, I already received a box lunch. 3. It seems silly to interact with other survivors in a small town. 4. After arriving in Jiangcheng, it was completely impossible to tell whether it was the end of the world or the same environment as before the end of the world. Let's put it this way, let alone the end of the world, right now, even if a city wants to produce a one-dollar lighter alone (the raw materials and accessories cannot be replenished). As a result, in this doomsday city of hundreds of thousands of people (who will be gathered later), they can produce whatever they want. There are as many modern products as you want, such as drones, planes, tanks, firearms, walkie-talkies, and computers. Funny? 5. The survivors encountered in the early stage didn't even have a weapon or shield (a wooden stick was considered a weapon). Is this enough to live in the end of the world? 6. You, an ant, dare to enter and explore the zombie lair that neither superpowers nor missiles can defeat? This is because he is certain that he is the protagonist and cannot die, right? 7. Before resuming production, it would be good if Jiangcheng could stabilize more than 100 or 200,000 people. How dare you bring together millions of people? How dare those survivors go? Think about the time when masks were used, how much material support did a city need from outside? You are in the last days and you have nothing, but you can still feed millions of people? You said there are plantings? For you as the author, just say yes. 8. During the straw burning period, a city with millions of people has no input of natural gas, oil, and coal. These things as fuel can be burned at will. The reason was reasonable before the apocalypse, but it will be a joke after the apocalypse.









