She Took the Script of Cultivation of Immortality Cannon Fodder
by A Penny
About This Novel
Mo Yuheng had no idea that he would become a cannon fodder female supporting character in a book, or a stepping stone to provide the heroine with spiritual roots. In order not to be cannon fodder, she escaped through the prophet and practiced hard to seize the opportunity. Faced with the heroine's various tricks, Mo Yuheng swung his sword in all directions. Although you have the aura of a lucky heroine with a large number of followers, but rob her of her treasure? Come on, take care of me.
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Official(62)Scraped 4d ago
When will it be updated every day? Can you update a few more pictures?
good
I need to write down the classification of cultivation levels and the levels of magic weapons.
How did the sect that Yu Heng joined become one of the two top sects in the Cultivation Continent?
How did the sect that Yu Heng joined become one of the two top sects in the Cultivation Continent? Yu Heng was either targeted by the disciples of the sect or by the elders of the sect. I think Zhenjun Yuan Ying was more or less mentally retarded. The elder of the sect, Zhen Jun Yuan Ying, kept targeting Yu Heng, a disciple in the Qi refining stage. It was enough.
Things started to get messy from behind
The overall idea and plot line are quite good, but later on the narrative felt a bit messy.
The story is good and the plot is good, but the author's writing is not good
The story is good, but the author's writing style is not good and it is difficult to read. The expression is not good and continuous.
There are many details that are not handled properly
For those of you who like to pick out words carefully, this book is cautious. The author's writing style needs to be improved, and many details are not handled well. I may have read the first 5 chapters, but there is already too much confusion, too many unsound sentences, and repetitive redundant things. I really can't bear it. No, giving four stars is my best effort. The introduction of this book really attracted me. I was happy to find a good book, but I didn't expect that I was persuaded to give up in the first 5 chapters. The author doesn't like to add subjects. Sometimes the heroine has a lot of psychological thoughts and other names are added in the middle. , Which leads to sometimes not being able to tell whose idea it is, which greatly affects reading. The most fatal point is that in these chapters, there are many words and sentences that are inappropriately used, resulting in many meanings being repeated, and some of the heroine's actions feel very jumpy and are only the behavior of the heroine. Because it cannot be connected with the front of the article, it feels very abrupt, which is intolerable to me. Unfortunately, the story in the introduction is very attractive to me. However, I hope that the author's ability to choose words and sentences and write in some details can be strengthened. I believe the effect of the work will be better.
There are many typos, please correct them.
I finished it in one breath. The assignment was very well written, but there were a few typos in the previous article. I hope the author can correct them🌹🌹
The miraculous descendant of a high-level monk. No one in the sect or family wanted to wait for the spirit root test before taking action. They all chose to ignore this descendant of a high-level monk without the foresight. Oh, the descendants of high-level monks whose parents are high-level monks have very good spiritual roots. They would not do this for no other reason than to save face. I feel that such a big family can be so bad. It is amazing. The sect is also amazing. They are all magical beings.
Good health, good health, good health
Come on (update update update update)
Chapters that are always repeated are paid.
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Official(62)Scraped 4d ago
When will it be updated every day? Can you update a few more pictures?
good
I need to write down the classification of cultivation levels and the levels of magic weapons.
How did the sect that Yu Heng joined become one of the two top sects in the Cultivation Continent?
How did the sect that Yu Heng joined become one of the two top sects in the Cultivation Continent? Yu Heng was either targeted by the disciples of the sect or by the elders of the sect. I think Zhenjun Yuan Ying was more or less mentally retarded. The elder of the sect, Zhen Jun Yuan Ying, kept targeting Yu Heng, a disciple in the Qi refining stage. It was enough.
Things started to get messy from behind
The overall idea and plot line are quite good, but later on the narrative felt a bit messy.
The story is good and the plot is good, but the author's writing is not good
The story is good, but the author's writing style is not good and it is difficult to read. The expression is not good and continuous.
There are many details that are not handled properly
For those of you who like to pick out words carefully, this book is cautious. The author's writing style needs to be improved, and many details are not handled well. I may have read the first 5 chapters, but there is already too much confusion, too many unsound sentences, and repetitive redundant things. I really can't bear it. No, giving four stars is my best effort. The introduction of this book really attracted me. I was happy to find a good book, but I didn't expect that I was persuaded to give up in the first 5 chapters. The author doesn't like to add subjects. Sometimes the heroine has a lot of psychological thoughts and other names are added in the middle. , Which leads to sometimes not being able to tell whose idea it is, which greatly affects reading. The most fatal point is that in these chapters, there are many words and sentences that are inappropriately used, resulting in many meanings being repeated, and some of the heroine's actions feel very jumpy and are only the behavior of the heroine. Because it cannot be connected with the front of the article, it feels very abrupt, which is intolerable to me. Unfortunately, the story in the introduction is very attractive to me. However, I hope that the author's ability to choose words and sentences and write in some details can be strengthened. I believe the effect of the work will be better.
There are many typos, please correct them.
I finished it in one breath. The assignment was very well written, but there were a few typos in the previous article. I hope the author can correct them🌹🌹
The miraculous descendant of a high-level monk. No one in the sect or family wanted to wait for the spirit root test before taking action. They all chose to ignore this descendant of a high-level monk without the foresight. Oh, the descendants of high-level monks whose parents are high-level monks have very good spiritual roots. They would not do this for no other reason than to save face. I feel that such a big family can be so bad. It is amazing. The sect is also amazing. They are all magical beings.
Good health, good health, good health
Come on (update update update update)
Chapters that are always repeated are paid.
