Female Craftsman from Da Jin Dynasty

However, as for the plot development, for example, I can understand the slow growth of the heroine, but the heroine did not say at first that she was going to deal with the two aunts, but in the middle she said that she was going to deal with them, and so on. Doesn't that expression mean that before now and for a period of time afterwards, she was laying the groundwork for something big later, or a transition, according to this model, to I haven't written about taking care of my aunt yet, which I think is understandable... But the most important thing is that we can't just say that we are going to take care of our aunt in the middle, and then finish it in the end... There is a lot of foreshadowing between the two. I didn't see it at all. I just saw that no matter how big the trouble is, everyone will The heroine accepted it well and accepted it completely without any dissatisfaction. She picked it up high and put it down gently... It was very confusing... If you didn't say that you wanted to deal with your aunt, I felt nothing happened. I think it's normal... I can justify myself, this heroine may be the Holy Mother. Or maybe it's Buddhist... But I can't put it here... The plot cannot be driven by expressing the conflict of events. The emotions caused by each conflict must keep up... Taking a step back, it really doesn't work. If you give the swaying of the lights, the micro-expressions, and the freeze-frame of the scene, I can also think that this is foreshadowing... But this... Is... Really... To be honest, I really think the subject matter is quite novel, and some of the settings and ancient knowledge in it are unconventional and quite good... As for the protagonist, I really can't put my finger on it... And Mr. Huan Lang, to be honest, I feel strange every time I cut to him and always skip it... Of course, this may be due to different personal perceptions... There are also some typos in the article, please pay attention...

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Fangtang Waterside Pavilion is located in the middle of Prince Gong's Mansion Garden West Road. It consists of a rectangular pond with an area of ​​about 200 square meters and a pavilion in the center of the water. There is a stone-carved dragon head embedded in the bank of the pond in the three directions of due west, south and southwest of the Fang Pond, leading spring water to flow into the pond from the dragon's mouth, trickling continuously. The pavilion in the center of the pond is composed of three open halls, surrounded by benches and railings. The pavilion is surrounded by water on all sides, and is connected to the shore by a boat-shaped wooden bridge on the west.

This is her when she grows up, I don't know if she looks like her~(￣▽￣~)~