Plain Girl Looking for Immortality

Comment: This book repeatedly analyzes the psychology of the heroine. Cultivation is lonely. Rational. Time is fleeting, and recalling the past brings a touch of sadness. The background of the heroine is that of an ordinary person. The later understanding of the heroine's time travel is more like the separation of soul and spirit. At a certain time. A dividing point is formed. Two different lives. In the world of cultivating immortals. The heroine's values, outlook on life, and world view. Received repeated shocks. Little by little, I am changing, but I am still unable to integrate into this world. In the early stage, in order to survive, I had no time to take into account the loneliness in my heart. Reality forced her to improve her strength. Later, with Xiaobao's protection and no longer the pressure of reality, the tight string in my heart relaxed. Then he fell into the nightmare of his previous life. No one can understand her. What Xiaobao understands is only part of her heart. She was lonely and sad about this melancholy that no one understood. Run the cave with all your heart. Just like mortals. That period was her happiest. But Fan's arrival broke her peace. The oppression of reality made her heart tighten again. At the same time, her ideas were impacted again. Once again, I deeply saw that the strong are respected. Her heart is getting harder and harder. Looking at the past indifferently. There was no touch at all, only sighs. She thought she was more like a person in this world. The trial at Linglong Tower freed her from the nightmare of her previous life. She became even more indifferent. Except Xiaobao and Jiuwei. No one could make a ripple in her heart. Later she met Hibiscus, which made her happy. Meeting is nothing more than acquaintance, acquaintance is nothing more than acquaintance, confidant, getting it is life, cherishing it is blessing, between love and friendship, understanding each other, feeling each other deep in the heart, setting up a small space for each other, quietly holding on to that beautiful purity, The one who understands her best is Hibiscus. The one who reassures her the most is Xiaobao. Mu Jin knew that he knew Zhang Xiaohan too well. She was a woman who refused to accept any charity. She would not allow her Taoist companion to approach her for profit, nor would she allow her Taoist companion to use or deceive her in the slightest. As a friend, Zhang Xiaohan can tolerate a lot, and can even tolerate some requests for benefits. As long as it is on the surface, she doesn't care if she suffers a small loss. But as a Taoist monk, that is absolutely impossible. What she wants is perfection. Therefore, he also regarded her as a friend, a friend for whom he could talk about anything and sacrifice everything for her. It's a pity that so few people understand her. Because of her pursuit of perfection, the heroine has no Taoist companion. When she was young, she might have had a crush on Song Chensha and Fan Xiufan. Because what she wants is perfection. So with experience and psychological maturity. The distance between her and them is getting further and further. The heroine never thought that one person would be superior to ten thousand people. As she said herself, she is not a suitable person in power. There is no lofty ambition and no passionate fighting spirit. Whether she wanted to be or not, current events pushed her to become the leader of the clan. She had no intention of managing and became a hands-off shopkeeper. After ascension, helpless to the reality, she continued to fight... Love is precious, but life is more valuable. If it is for freedom, both can be thrown away. It is better to have broken jade than to have it intact. This has always been the bottom line and belief of the heroine. In the eyes of other immortal cultivators in this world. This sentence is so ridiculous. Life is gone, why do we need freedom? So there are very few people who understand the heroine. In summary, this book is a journey of a lonely person. Confused about the journey ahead, I hesitated to take steps forward. I feel melancholy about the road I have traveled and look at the past indifferently. A person walks through this road called life arduously. May be accompanied by others at times. But they are always passers-by. Appear inadvertently, and then disappear quietly. In my opinion, this book is of great value. There is no comparison with those cool articles created just to cater to readers. Our world is becoming more and more prosperous and impetuous, and there are fewer and fewer such valuable books. Although looking at the entire text, there may not be a male protagonist in this book. It is written as the heroine's journey of cultivating immortality alone. But I still hope that the author can give us a male protagonist in the later stage. The heroine is too lonely. It's sad to be lonely. I believe the author was writing this article. There must have been many times when I cried quietly. Book reviewer: Guyan

I think the writing is very good, and the writing style is very mature. It is much better than some Lei Wen who can only use cheats to gain temporary pleasure. The fairy tales are basically slow-burning, which is not unacceptable. If you think it doesn't look good, just turn right when you go out. Don't curse, after all, everyone's style is different.

I saw in the comments that the author said that you wrote too many inner monologues and was too wordy, but I still like this novel. When I read a novel, I am enjoying the process of reading, rather than rushing to find the results. Anyway, you write slowly, and I read it slowly. After reading it, I have to look for good novels everywhere. As long as the quality is good, I hope to keep reading. I am a science student and I failed in Chinese. If your sentences are wrong, please don't laugh

A very good hand of cards turned out to be a mess for the author. I even stayed up all night to watch the first half, and occasionally watched it in the middle. After reading the ending, I wanted to curse. It has a very good subject matter, a very delicate writing style, and a very fantasy concept. The only flaw is also a fatal flaw. Wenwen does not have a male protagonist. No matter how exciting the novel or movie is, I think it is very attractive to add a little beautiful love in the middle. No one wants to see a single cast, even if it is all played by first-class actors, it will not attract people's attention. Similarly, a cast of all women will be boring. The author chose to write the heroine to have a strong personality and then die alone. Was the author emotionally frustrated when writing the article?

To clear things up, the author has too many psychological descriptions and is too negative, and the author thinks it is completely normal. I am more sympathetic. I even guessed that the author is a single mother. At least the family is not happy. I guess that the author is powerless about family and feelings. The book is not very good, but it is not bad. I hate being influenced by this book. If I want to get deeper, I can naturally read classics. There are also people who are brainless. I don't mean that everyone appreciates it differently. It's so obvious that it can even be called a dangerous author's writing. If you don't think so, it's hard for me to blame you. There are some advantages, the imagination is good, and some characters are three-dimensional, but it can also be said to be inconsistent. Well, the web version is not important. The characters are more cautious. The plot is good, the author wrote it with passion, and you can read it. However, the more you read into it, the more you will be affected by the author's negative psychology (mainly through psychological description to promote the plot, and detailed psychological description to rationalize immature and even unreasonable outlook on life and values). The heroine's extreme self-confined loneliness and laissez-faire weakness still feel completely reasonable. How can I say that it has affected my mood at least for now? I thought the author's writing style was enough, and that was enough. But the wrong outlook on life and values ​​are precisely the most terrifying thing. So to disarm you, don't read this book.

I don't know why, so many people complained about Zhang Xiaohan's solo journey. First of all, she is not untouchable, but she is also the kind of "disloyal once, never used again" type. The first thing that moved me was my senior brother, that sunshine boy. But a person can't only have sunshine, so when she sees the dark side, she doesn't think she will become that exception, and she won't trust her destiny to the mercy of others, so she stays away. At that time, she already knew that she had acquired the ultimate furnace cauldron body. Just think about the fate of Wuji Sect's two furnace cauldrons (Hibiscus and Junior Sister Xia). Later, Fan wanted to take her as his concubine from the very beginning. He would rather die than obey ("Life is really precious", but she values ​​freedom above life, which is also her Taoist heart, "I would rather have a piece of jade than be ruined."), And Fan got more resources from her. Fan is extremely selfish. She still remembers a plot where Zhang Xiaohan used spiritual stones to auction off a soul-enhancing medicine. She took it. Fan's first reaction was that Zhang Xiaohan had eaten his stuff. Oh. As for Hibiscus, she regarded her as a confidant at first and never thought of going further. Simplicity, she regards as her big brother. In the later stage, her enemies were descendants of emperors, even Phoenix or the Emperor of Heaven. In order not to implicate others, she would even take the initiative to bear the cause and effect, so how could she take the initiative to make the cause and effect. Moreover, although her age is in the Chaoyang period, she is a time-travelling soul. She has never forgotten that she does not belong to that era. Her mentality has matured and she does not have the idea that female cultivators of that era must find a Taoist companion. She is not the protagonist of the greenhouse either. She does not lack the halo of the protagonist, but she also has a lot of life and death experiences. Being used again and again has long since worn away her innocence. As for cultivation novels, one of the protagonist's laws is that he is fast and meets different Taoist friends at different times, but not many Taoist friends can accompany him to the end. There are more than three thousand avenues, each with different paths and many different destinations. And Daocheng is not only a huge amount of resources, but also a background. (Looking at the final battle, it is either the emperor's son or his clone, as well as the emperor's grandson and the clone of the Heavenly Emperor. On the one hand, Zhang Xiaohan is a pawn in the game of the Heavenly Emperors, and on the other hand, he is Huang's quasi-furnace.) And the only person who can achieve success over a period of time is people. (Those with two protagonists or multiple protagonists are mostly the beneficiaries of the achievements of "one person", which is more like "one person achieves enlightenment and chickens and dogs ascend to heaven")

The heroine is like a pig, even though she has such a good fairy house, she still knows how to buy things. She deserves to be beaten to death, and she deserves to have her mask taken away, which is a waste of time.

Is Zhang Xiaohan still the same Zhang Xiaohan? When the Zhang family was a slave, he worked hard to pursue freedom. At that time, I really thought it looked good. Later, he slowly started to enslave others, and then he became more and more superior and even looked down on others. I seemed to see the shadow of the domineering second lady of the Zhang family at the beginning of the novel in Zhang Xiaohan. I didn't like White Lotus, even if the protagonist used cruel methods to kill those who wanted to kill her, I also liked watching it, but I always felt that she had changed, maybe to prepare for a high position. But I can't stand it anymore. If I just read it as a novel about upgrading and fighting monsters, I won't have so many ideas. Also, the paleness of the characters and whether there is a male protagonist actually have little to do with it. But for some readers in heat, it is indeed very important. Although I don't know why they don't read romance novels where there are many male protagonists.

Is the author very masochistic? Do you like to be plotted by others, and do you like to sacrifice yourself to help others? After reading the whole novel, I feel that I grew up well in the early stages. After arriving in Nine Cities, I kept begging for self-abuse, begging to be plotted, dedicating everything I had, and fulfilling others. In the end, I was plotted by others again and again, and then let others go again and again. This is a typical symptom of trembling. If you are sick, you need a "psychiatrist." Also, you, the author, are like this, so why do you still charge money for this novel? Just make it free. I like to let the heroine fall into plots and desperate situations. She will be alive when the time comes. But in the end, she will get angry and take revenge, and then wait for others to plot again and again, let others go again and again, and help others wronged her. The author doesn't like to write about dead people. Maybe there are too many dead people at the beginning, and basically no one will write about dead people in the later period. Is this cultivating immortality? The benevolence of a woman, I know that you treat the world with your benevolent hospital...

I feel like the heroine is like a fool. She doesn't understand the rules on the road after eight years of training. She doesn't know how to put a ten-year elixir in a jade box. Even in modern times, everyone knows this! And I am not familiar with elixirs at all. I don't even know the uses of elixirs for eight years. I still look like I can't stand the world of cultivation, pretending to be a holy mother.