Doomsday Evolution Global
About This Novel
Hello readers, Mr. Yu's first new book has been officially uploaded. It is also a doomsday novel with a new superpower structure and plot structure.
What Readers Think
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Official(4)Scraped 7d ago
This apocalyptic novel is so beautiful, I was hooked at first glance😗, I must recommend it and add it to your collection
☣️☢️🔞☢️☣️🔞🛐⚛️🕉✡️☸️☯️✝️☦️☪️☮️🕎🔯🔯⚜️🔱💱💱It's okay. Did you write it?
The writing is not bad, great, my colleague wrote it
come on!
I have read a few chapters, and overall it is a very classic doomsday novel, with good scene descriptions, and it reads like a doomsday novel, with a fast pace. But I personally think that more novel settings or more contradictions are needed. After all, the competitive pressure of apocalyptic novels is still quite high. Settings such as upgrades, corpse cores, upgrades, betrayal, revenge, etc. Are relatively common. In addition, you can focus on promoting the storyline. Blindly defeating monsters and upgrading will make readers feel a little slow no matter how well the combat situation is portrayed (maybe because I have not seen the back, this suggestion is for reference only). This is my personal opinion, and overall it is very good. Keep at it!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 7d ago
This apocalyptic novel is so beautiful, I was hooked at first glance😗, I must recommend it and add it to your collection
☣️☢️🔞☢️☣️🔞🛐⚛️🕉✡️☸️☯️✝️☦️☪️☮️🕎🔯🔯⚜️🔱💱💱It's okay. Did you write it?
The writing is not bad, great, my colleague wrote it
come on!
I have read a few chapters, and overall it is a very classic doomsday novel, with good scene descriptions, and it reads like a doomsday novel, with a fast pace. But I personally think that more novel settings or more contradictions are needed. After all, the competitive pressure of apocalyptic novels is still quite high. Settings such as upgrades, corpse cores, upgrades, betrayal, revenge, etc. Are relatively common. In addition, you can focus on promoting the storyline. Blindly defeating monsters and upgrading will make readers feel a little slow no matter how well the combat situation is portrayed (maybe because I have not seen the back, this suggestion is for reference only). This is my personal opinion, and overall it is very good. Keep at it!
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