When You Bathe, You Are the Light

When You Bathe, You Are the Light

by Shen Luoyue

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I am full of joy Except the world is too crowded The moon above my head, you in my eyes

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许若
许若繁86mo ago

I'm glad you've become ill, but time can't cure it

Like it's simple. When I saw him, my heart moved slightly. It was just a whim, but Sleep for thousands of years. / Lin Sen probably did the same to Yu Ge. He was so handsome, free-spirited and perfect as a god. Just one look at him was enough to make her, who was a complete face-controller, fall into love. She fell deeper and deeper into love, unable to break away and not wanting to break away. Just that moment in Mingbin can touch a person like this. At that moment, my nerves were extremely excited, my breathing accelerated, my heart beat faster, I was nervous, joyful, and beautiful. / But love is not simple. Love may start in a moment, but it is never just a moment. Love needs to be tempered. They are obviously two different people, but they are entangled by a band called love. It is not only the excitement and excitement of that moment, but also the tacit understanding after the passion of the next skirt. Everyone has different situations, different personalities, and different playing skills. Two people who love each other need to run in, and the running in period is long, and the tacit understanding needs to be cultivated little by little. The magic of love is that people are willing to change for the person they love, just to make themselves more suitable to stand by his side and grow old with him. / Like Lin Sen, in order to be able to stand side by side with him, and also for my own dreams and pride, Ao, she worked hard to solve seemingly unsolvable problems. She became confident and proud, and was finally able to stand beside him. And his support and companionship finally made her understand true love. They are all changing quietly / Love not only contains Chaxi Lielie's lingering affection, but also trust and companionship, understanding and support. The momentum does not need to be huge, only they can understand the indescribable contract. They have gone through a long running-in period and finally reached old age. When the nerves calm down, the overexcitement disappears like a tide, leaving behind a love that can grow old and a beauty that can last together. / Love is not a fleeting firework But it is as soft and moving as a long stream of water. / 2019.2.8 Xu Ruofan, comment

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兔斯
兔斯基_db80mo ago

When you bathe, you are the light

Time flows slowly and gradually turns into your appearance

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LI
Lingwu Kongxianxian.80mo ago

Biu is a monster here!

I love it so much, come on Ningqiu, long live Ningqiu!

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AP
Apfel80mo ago

You are my little joy

Lin Sen met a person who always had a quiet tenderness in him. From childhood to youth, he had always been the most beautiful star in his eyes. When Yu Ge falls in love with someone, she always has the power to attract everything. From the neighborhood to the campus, she has always been the warmest sunshine in his heart. Maybe it is because of this kind of common growth that they are willing to walk hand in hand through thick and thin, and then look at the future scenery and you around them together. This article has a strong sense of youth, but the writing style is a bit immature, and the rhythm of the short story is difficult to grasp, so some plots seem to be dragging, and do not even play a role in promoting the plot. There are also some places that have been briefly touched upon, resulting in a lack of coherence between the plots. If you want to have appropriate rhythm and rigorous logic, you need to think more about the plot. For example, in the plot where the heroine suddenly sprains her ankle, it only describes the male protagonist taking care of her, but does not mention the process of the heroine spraining her ankle. However, this plot can well set up some specific plots to promote the emotional development between the male and female protagonists. But overall, writing a complete story is a success, but I hope the author can work harder and write many excellent works for readers.

BO
Book Friends 2023122525925980mo ago

Linglong Dice An Hongdou.

- I really like this type of book, it gives me the feeling of youth rushing in my face. The confused feelings of youth and the awkward thoughts that both boys and girls have, this should be the feeling of first love. - Lin Sen×Yu Ge Lin Sen and Yu Ge grew up together and can be said to be childhood sweethearts. But unlike other childhood sweethearts, Lin Sen was full of hatred for Yu Ge at first. The reason for hating him is very simple, just because grandma always praises him and always brings him delicious food. This is the mentality that any little girl will have. I thought the same thing when my mother praised my neighbor's brother. - But the turning point later should be that Yu Ge was particularly good to Lin Sen. In elementary school, Lin Sen was a scumbag in mathematics. When he failed in the exam again, his grandmother locked him in a small dark room and deprived him of food. Lin Sen must have been touched by Yu Ge's offer of helping her with tutoring and giving her food. If it were me, I would agree to it. - One of the things I like most about Yu Ge is that he always silently calculates how to get to her. Lin Sen went to the city for junior high school and rarely came back during holidays. Yu Ge missed her very much and always tried his best to get news about her from his grandma. Knowing that she would come back after the high school entrance examination, Yu Ge started to plant melons and promised his grandma that she would cook them well. During the high school entrance examination, he calculated the scores and deliberately got similar scores to hers, so he went to the high school she was going to. - The quarrel between Lin Sen's two best friends over the question of whose family Lin Sen belongs to was really brilliant. The phrase "Don't disturb my family" that Yu Ge said in an instant, I wonder if Lin Sen was moved when he heard it? - I love this novel so much that I decided to collect it.

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温畔
温畔86mo ago

The moon above my head and you in my eyes

During the rainy season. The pitter patter. There were very few people on the streets. Or whisper, or smile. The oden shop on the roadside is filled with mist. The water droplets condensed on the eyelashes, Covering the depth of his eyes. Holding an umbrella. Go round and round. A long wait at the crossroads. Or red light, or green light, Confusingly intertwined. I'm waiting, You. You who are in the same mood as me. I don't know, Will you stop for a moment for me? If you are lucky, Then, I will definitely smile - "I don't have wine, but I have a story. Do you want to hear it?"

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温畔
温畔86mo ago

"Secret love is also a good confession"

What flows from the tip of your pen is the throbbing of youth and a touch of melancholy. Everyone has had a big fish that they can't catch. It's just a dream. In the dream, there are many twists and turns. When I wake up from the dream, I just laugh at my own absurdity and delusion 💔

JU
June. June🍃73mo ago

Is this the end?

Like the title. . . . . . . . . .

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JU
June. June🍃73mo ago

Is there any extra story?

As title. . . . . . . .

原夜
原夜76mo ago

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May you be treated gently by the world.

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