
The Elf's Heavenly Responsibility
About This Novel
[The new book "The Trainer from Kaji Town" has been released, please support! ]Yun Ning woke up and found that he had returned to the past. Different from the original world, this world has an additional creature called "Elf". It is precisely because of the existence of these creatures that this world is completely different from Yunning's previous world. The four major families of Liu, Li, Zhao and Zhu took turns to rule. Many years ago, the Elf Alliance was established. However, the influence of the family on the world has not faded, but has become stronger. If the alliance were a company, the Maison would be the shareholder and the chairman of the alliance would be the CEO. The children of aristocratic families can learn the best elf cultivation plan and let their elves eat energy cubes to grow, while the children of common people cannot even become trainers. By chance, Yun Ning learned how to make energy cubes and embarked on the path of a trainer. However, Yun Ning discovered that everything was not that simple. ... Book club group 729872669
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Official(43)Scraped 11d ago
How should I put it? I feel like the introduction you wrote is a bit unrealistic.
When the protagonist grows up and becomes a wealthy family, will the protagonist's descendant be willing to be an ordinary person? It's simply impossible. They will only get more and more powerful, waiting for the next person to clean up the rich families again, and so on. It is impossible to open the elves to the public. As long as there is civilization, there will be monopolists and capitalists. The writing is okay, but the introduction is a bit off-putting, unrealistic and toxic.
shock! A certain author actually...
The author's writing is very good! The plot is good! Poison points are rare! Reading smoothly! I, Uchiha... I would like to call it a good book! When you see the title, you will definitely click in! I can tell you very responsibly! I don't know about the above... (Actually just water experience)
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I couldn't stand it after watching two games. The biggest problem is the lifespan. Mo Haima can only live for five years and will die if it doesn't evolve. It's quite different from the Pokémon I know. As a species with an energy system, it is quite ridiculous that the lifespan of animals in our world is the same. This point dissuaded me, so if you can accept it, continue reading.
Don't like it very much
The protagonist's IQ is a bit low, and the main thing is that he doesn't like the Virgin Bitch
The first hundred or so chapters are okay
It's too dark at the back, and it feels awkward because of the issues of the times. I think it's much better to have an ancient background
The warrior who slays the dragon will eventually turn into an evil dragon. Only the devil kills the devil.
Can the author write the protagonist as someone like Sakaki? After all, the family described in your book leaves many people at the bottom with no chance. At this time, wouldn't the dark group born from the bottom forces like Team Rocket play a role? Although this is a rebellious group.
The front is fine, but the back is a complete mess.
It was fine when I first became a trainer, but things started to get messy later on. There were some idiots selling cute mythical beasts, and some fast dragons that killed a group of people at once. You should first look at how the big brother in fantasy-themed novels appeared and how he was positioned. Your writing was too poor. I thought he was a big brother, but he became a younger brother after writing it.
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Official(43)Scraped 11d ago
How should I put it? I feel like the introduction you wrote is a bit unrealistic.
When the protagonist grows up and becomes a wealthy family, will the protagonist's descendant be willing to be an ordinary person? It's simply impossible. They will only get more and more powerful, waiting for the next person to clean up the rich families again, and so on. It is impossible to open the elves to the public. As long as there is civilization, there will be monopolists and capitalists. The writing is okay, but the introduction is a bit off-putting, unrealistic and toxic.
shock! A certain author actually...
The author's writing is very good! The plot is good! Poison points are rare! Reading smoothly! I, Uchiha... I would like to call it a good book! When you see the title, you will definitely click in! I can tell you very responsibly! I don't know about the above... (Actually just water experience)
Give me a Samsung
I couldn't stand it after watching two games. The biggest problem is the lifespan. Mo Haima can only live for five years and will die if it doesn't evolve. It's quite different from the Pokémon I know. As a species with an energy system, it is quite ridiculous that the lifespan of animals in our world is the same. This point dissuaded me, so if you can accept it, continue reading.
Don't like it very much
The protagonist's IQ is a bit low, and the main thing is that he doesn't like the Virgin Bitch
The first hundred or so chapters are okay
It's too dark at the back, and it feels awkward because of the issues of the times. I think it's much better to have an ancient background
The warrior who slays the dragon will eventually turn into an evil dragon. Only the devil kills the devil.
Can the author write the protagonist as someone like Sakaki? After all, the family described in your book leaves many people at the bottom with no chance. At this time, wouldn't the dark group born from the bottom forces like Team Rocket play a role? Although this is a rebellious group.
The front is fine, but the back is a complete mess.
It was fine when I first became a trainer, but things started to get messy later on. There were some idiots selling cute mythical beasts, and some fast dragons that killed a group of people at once. You should first look at how the big brother in fantasy-themed novels appeared and how he was positioned. Your writing was too poor. I thought he was a big brother, but he became a younger brother after writing it.
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The Pokémon article is quite satisfying for its understanding of some Pokémon and the settings for the evolution of elves. It would be better if more words were written on the appearance of elves.



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