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I read a good tomb robbing novel before, but in Chapter 33, I started to practice the Tao Te Ching and practice Qi Transformation into God, Shattering the Void. I wanted to read a tomb robbing novel, but then you started writing a Xiuxian novel, Wan Duzi.

I can't stand Hua Ling being the heroine...

I have read more than ten or twenty chapters, and the female character in the book fails as soon as she sees the protagonist. It is very embarrassing to read here. This is also the shortcoming of many novels nowadays. I would say that if you can't write emotional scenes, you don't need to write them. There are still many authors writing novels like this. I would say this was a routine more than ten years ago and is now outdated. In addition, the strength and speed of the protagonist are really too exaggerated. From the beginning, it is twenty times that of ordinary people. Not to mention those skills, there is basically nothing that can stop the protagonist behind his current ability. Since the main character is so awesome at the beginning of writing a tomb robbing novel, there is nothing to look forward to when it comes to tomb robbing, and we can only watch the main character show off.

I think it's better not to have a heroine. You're going to rob tombs, and you want a heroine. What on earth are you going to do? And during the tomb robbery, can you always protect the heroine? So it's better not to have a female protagonist in such a dangerous place. If I don't want a female protagonist, I can at least get five stars. Moreover, when the protagonist sees a woman, it seems that he has never seen a woman in his previous life. The sight of that flower spirit made me sick to death. You are going to rob tombs, not to travel and vacation to cultivate immortality. Even if you have a golden finger, it is better not to do this. If you lose your golden finger, wouldn't you become a useless person? Without the golden finger, can you still protect the heroine? You can't even protect yourself in a tomb robbing picture, and you still have to show off your affection to the heroine. Moreover, the girls written by the author are almost the same, and they are all negative. Where has their aloofness gone? Was it eaten by a dog?

If the author doesn't know how to write about emotions, then he shouldn't get involved in emotional scenes. It would be a bit poisonous to be ambiguous like this.

Writing this kind of novel is already a waste of time, just like a rotten fish or a rotten shrimp. It really has no value. I'm going to give you full stars. I haven't read your book, and I'm not going to belittle your book. I'm just saying unilaterally that this kind of novel is already bad.

I couldn't watch "Japan is named after the sun" and it made me feel sick for no reason. The plot was not good.

The Hua Ling in this book is written like a nymphomaniac

What about Hu Bayi and Zhang Qishan from the same period?