Taking Stock of the Top Ten Mortal Immortals, I Can't Hide My Identity

I had this experience with a grandson: At seven years old, you enter elementary school. On the day you entered school, you were bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. Thirteen years old, you are at the peak of sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the aura of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet "the strong ones in the junior high school realm. Even the weakest junior high school strong men, their strength is definitely not matchable by you. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy chips! It's so scary. So you make up your mind to enter the junior high school realm. At the age of sixteen, you have achieved the junior high school realm. Through years of study, Study hard. You no longer look down on your classmates at the same level. The usual high school level is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the realm of university. Those who fail will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could become the most powerful people and obtain the Great Dao. It's almost difficult. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. In their eyes, your girlfriend who has been in love for four years is like an ant. The family promised your girlfriend to a young man from a big family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You only remembered that Lihua Daiyu had made a three-year appointment with you. You recalled the shame you experienced that day in elementary school. The veins on your hands were roaring. When I return, I will stain the sky with demonic blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you choose the Internet. From then on, you joined a big company and spent your time studying on the toilet. From then on, you discovered a shocking secret and started your own business. , Encountered dangerous situations. From Beijing to Shanghai and then to Shenzhen, I met strong people who worked hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from college. Three years later, the situation is calm, do you think he will come to the woman's home? At this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter. She had refused many blind dates arranged by her family in the past three years. Now she was almost at her limit. The sun was about to set. Is it just a disappointment? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's house. The mother-in-law's face turned slightly - - Change, their family has been in business for many years, but in the end it is just a small branch of the family. She has never forgotten the voice of Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, but this voice is different. Suddenly something came to mind, and his face turned pale. This is impossible. Even if I try hard for half my life, I can't do it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are all right. A man's voice came out. Suddenly, the house was silent. The mother-in-law asked cautiously where the residence was. The mother-in-law lowered her head in shame to prepare for the wedding. Needless to say, a year later, a man named Ma with glasses was riding. - A penguin visited. After some greetings, you were invited to enter the new map Zhengdao League (Internet Conference). When you entered, you found that there were about dozens of people present, and they all had unfathomable abilities. You could hear that I had no interest in money. I had not received a salary in a month. I was blind, and I didn't know whether it was beautiful or not. You couldn't help but be stunned when you recalled what you saw along the way.

The description is pretty good, but it has to be a disgusting protagonist. I really feel that after taking stock, I really shouldn't have added a protagonist. Let the characters we like very much serve as a foil to the protagonist's strength. It's really disgusting.

No, I wonder if they have a protagonist who affects their subsequent achievements? Why do some people like this kind of meaningless thing?

The man takes the initiative to give guidance in every experience of the mortal fairy, which gives those of us readers who know it a feeling that he has lowered the level of these people. Originally, they could grow up on their own, but he has to give guidance in a self-righteous way. I feel like I can't do it without his guidance.

What the hell is all this? I just wanted to ask him if he had seen it? Covering the sky with perfection If a serious person had read it, he would not have written this book whose content is too nonsense.

Are you crazy about money?

Forcibly inserting a character and constantly raising your own status in the text is nondescript. How can you make fans who have read the original work feel uncomfortable? It will only appear alienated. Why not just be a tool to take stock?

It's a bit disgusting. I have to add a protagonist. His quality is so low.

Shi Hao, you actually wrote dozens of chapters about his daily life as a child. I really vomited.

Are you sure this isn't perfectly written? You can write so many chapters for just one Shi Hao, but why won't I read Perfect? It's a waste. I thought it was good at first. Let's go to the factory.