Mutated Little Spider

Mutated Little Spider

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About This Novel

Muchen, a high school student, was bitten by a small spider during an extracurricular trip and gained special spider-like abilities...

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Moon over the Stream80mo ago

This year's readers are a bit naughty, they laugh to death without paying for their lives.

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Impetuous Cocoon80mo ago

good

I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

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I'm so Kind74mo ago

Come on, author

The author finally updated it. I thought this book was just so eunuch. Come on, author!

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Suggestions

I couldn't bear it after reading Chapter 10, but after thinking about it, I might as well come back with some suggestions. The subject matter is very good, the writing style is also good, but the routine is too old. The first few chapters are not very toxic. They are all about eating barbecue and it is a bit unbearable. The gap with reality is a bit big. To be honest, girls nowadays are really not that superficial, right? When they meet someone with good skills, they will be fascinated. This is not consistent with the cold image before! In reality, the most you can do is be surprised, add something like WeChat, make friends, etc. As for answering questions, it's true. If suddenly a bad student in our class answered a difficult question correctly, the people in our class would never have such a big reaction. After all, people who are going to take the college entrance examination have never seen anything. And I remember that there seemed to be someone here who started to hate the protagonist for no reason, which felt a bit like forcibly subduing the protagonist. There is also the problem of gangsters. I don't think this is okay, but I definitely can't be as mentally retarded as those gangsters in previous urban novels. That will dissuade many old bookworms. Then there is the question of the protagonist's character. I feel that the protagonist's personality is not very distinct and has no characteristics. Since he was bitten by such an awesome spider, it must have had some impact, such as his personality becoming darker or something. Or something more subconscious. Of course, if the author likes positive energy, that's fine too, it depends on the author. I won't say much about the plot, I guess the author also has his own ideas. The heroine problem. This is very critical. Personally, I recommend 2 to 3, which will not offend old bookworms and make it enjoyable for new readers. After all, there is a person who has been reading for a year or two and has seen so many harem stallions and the like that he almost vomited. That's pretty much all there is to it. Let's talk about the consequences of these problems - the audience is small, and those who like this book now are newcomers, because it is more enjoyable to read. But people with a certain amount of reading will find it quite poisonous. Internet writing has been developing for so many years, and there are still more old bookworms, with stronger spending power and more votes. So if we can attract more old bookworms, the results will definitely be much better. That's all the advice! If the author hopes that this book will have good results, he can refer to it, revise the first few chapters, and think about the subsequent plot. I hope to see this book on a list one day.

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After Dusk, at Dawn80mo ago

Please improve

That's right, I was inspired by others, who could exchange a five-star review for an excellent book review. I thought about it, three recommendation votes, plus a five-star review, it should be there, right? ^Ω^

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Moon over the Stream80mo ago

Thank you for your great support

Thank you for your recognition of me.

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. Month after Month80mo ago

nice

Chinese version of Spider-Man, but will this cause infringement? The author should be careful about the lawyer's letter.

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Smooth Sailing80mo ago

good

It's very novel, but the writing is a little rough, but overall it's pretty good!

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Impetuous Cocoon80mo ago

chapter

Why is the author missing Chapter 7?

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ꦿ❧﷼first Visit ོꦿོꦿ❧80mo ago

Come on, the author!

Your book reminds me of Taishang Buyi's Spider novel. Yours is similar to his book! Say, what's the relationship between you two?

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