
I Am Refining the Elixir in the Human World
by Layman Under The Starry Sky
About This Novel
He and his father-in-law called him brothers and sisters, and he called his mother-in-law sister-in-law, but she was so happy that she didn't want her...
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Official(2)Scraped 12d ago
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Hello, author. I get it, why isn't your book not popular? The plot of the first 50 chapters is very interesting. When you write about the cannibal village later on, you have no idea what you are writing about. Messy. There is no causal relationship either. There is not even a single name in the village. It feels weird and irritating to see it like this, you know?
Toxic, retreat quickly
It's highly poisonous, but the poison resistance is low. Say goodbye.
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Official(2)Scraped 12d ago
Want more people to read your book?
Hello, author. I get it, why isn't your book not popular? The plot of the first 50 chapters is very interesting. When you write about the cannibal village later on, you have no idea what you are writing about. Messy. There is no causal relationship either. There is not even a single name in the village. It feels weird and irritating to see it like this, you know?
Toxic, retreat quickly
It's highly poisonous, but the poison resistance is low. Say goodbye.









