Surrender Beyond the Bounds

Surrender Beyond the Bounds

by Not As Good As Yanxiang

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615Kwords255chapters
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Ch. 255Extra 8
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8.4QD Score

About This Novel

The new article "Sniper Heartbeat" has been published Rewritten after Chapter 160, the web version is in a mess. At the age of 28, Xu Jin plotted against Qi Yuchuan, who was talked about by everyone in Yebei City. She took every step carefully, planned and controlled, and was confident that she could escape unscathed. Unexpectedly, there were a lot of changes. She guessed the process but not the ending. * 32-Year-old Qi Yuchuan has been in the business world for many years, but he never thought that he would fall into Xu Jin's hands. He played a game of cat and mouse with her, trying to get everyone and money. In the end, he fell deeper and deeper into the world, to the point of eternal destruction. Someone said: "Xu Jin looks harmless to humans and animals, but he is actually ruthless." Qi Yuchuan shouted: "Fart." * Qi Yuchuan spent many years recuperating and recuperating to solve a problem. He could talk but never do anything. One day, someone saw him beating someone half to death. He wiped his hands calmly and explained: "He is disrespectful to my Buddha and needs education." Two days later, his relationship with Xu Jin was revealed. From then on, the big devil, who was not a womanizer, showed off his affection without shame. One day, the big devil had his hair cut and his ears pierced. He appeared in front of Xu Jin with a ruthless look in his deep and bright eyes: "Does he look like that spring breeze boy of yours?" Xu Jin stretched out his hand to twist his red and swollen earlobe, smiling like a flower: "Are you belatedly rebelling?" Qi Yuchuan hugged her waist and said in a low and caring voice, "I'm obviously crazy about love." "Tsk, tsk." Qi Yuchuan hated marrying: "Sister An, when do you plan to accept me?" That night, Xu Jin was forced to ask about the wedding date by his relatives and friends. She was confused, and in a blink of an eye she saw Qi Yuchuan's Weibo, which boldly wrote: Dr. Xu's private property, no teasing. Xu Jin: "..." He not only loved her, but also respected her.

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Book Friend 404683943748mo ago

Highly recommended, highly recommended! ! !

Both the male and female protagonists are so exciting to me! When they first met, he thought she was a little yellow-haired girl who didn't understand anything. Who would have thought that the thousand-year-old fox would be plotted by her. In the confrontation between the two, the heroine was so sassy that she didn't lose a bit in terms of momentum. In the process of getting along with each other, he saw her strength and sobriety, and also saw the darkness in her character, and he still fell in love with her. She is not a pitiful little white flower who needs protection. She knows that human nature is sinister and has her own principles and methods of dealing with people and things. She strongly defends the dignity of women, dissatisfied with worldly prejudices, and disdains being associated with a group of high-sounding men. She is proud and unconventional. After experiencing hurt, she knows the world but is not worldly. She was the independent light that spread into his world. Therefore, it fell deeply. He respected her complete independence of personality, sincerely apologized for his shallowness and ignorance when they first met, and used a kind of love that seemed to look up to her, trying to tear down the walls that had been built up in her world. I cannot express the tenacity of the heroine and the elegance of the hero in specific words. I like the author's words: He is not a believer in this mortal world, but he is willing to become her believer. I just want to say that the heroine deserves it! Finally, author, come on!

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Book Friends 20230124457_ba47mo ago

Editing, suspending updates

After two days of careful consideration, I plan to rewrite this article starting from Chapter 161, and revise the text before Chapter 161, in order to present the plot in a more rich and three-dimensional way. In fact, during this period of time, the further I wrote, the more I felt that I had lost the charm I originally wanted. I analyzed the reasons in detail and found that I was indeed a little impatient because of it and wanted to end the story quickly. Especially in the past two days, I have basically been coding very mechanically, but I will not give up on this story. Therefore, I decided to revise + rewrite. I have talked a lot with my sister in the past two days. She said that a person who truly loves writing should have his own style. Even if no one is watching, you have to understand it. Your original intention of writing articles is out of hobby, don't start treating it perfunctorily because you have no income. This would be a disservice to both yourself and the readers. After Chapter 161, the more I thought about the plot, the more I realized the logical problems and the lack of details. Although I will use some reasons to round it back, in the end I still can't convince myself. I took a rough look, and basically almost 100,000 words were to be scrapped. However, re-publishing the article after revision will not affect the reading of readers who have already purchased it. It takes about 2-3 months to revise the article. At this time, the main text is almost finished. Since I promised that this story would not be unfinished, I will definitely do it if I don't give up. If you are willing to wait, I would be extremely grateful. In addition, if new readers are interested, you can temporarily read Chapter 160. Finally, thank you again to those who liked this article. I will give you a story that is the most real, warm, sincere and satisfying with all my heart, and I don't want to treat it perfunctorily. You can understand me, and you can also feel that this is my respect for you and the stories I write. I would like to express my apologies! Thanks again to those who liked this article!

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Moci_6745mo ago

Thoughts after viewing

After the author explained the initial character design of the male protagonist, he expressed his understanding. I quite like the heroine design, it's pretty good. The hero's younger brother Qi Yusheng, I quite liked his character at first, but later on he liked Zhou Zhou and I didn't like him at all. It's okay to like people, but for the person you like, you hurt the heart of your brother who has raised him since childhood. It makes me uncomfortable to read, I am just a love brain 😎 (I have an emotional mysophobia, and I don't like people who are physically or mentally unclean. Whether you think I am pedantic or backward, or whatever, I just can't stand it. If it were a male protagonist or a female protagonist, I would abandon the article directly 😜) Among the people I didn't like were Lin Qingqing (she was so disgusting, she didn't even go offline, and even hugged the male protagonist twice😓😓) and another woman, I don't remember her name, she seems to be named Su Lai? I don't like her either. These guys have been jumping around in front of the male and female protagonist🤔 Actually, I personally like to end things directly. I really want those annoying people to go offline. When the male protagonist needs to be ruthless, he should be ruthless. What happened to the sudden withdrawal? (Every time the male protagonist starts to take action, someone always comes to stop him. 🤔For example, the male protagonist's father, such as Qi Yusheng) stopped before he even started to teach others. I'm heartbroken😊, what kept me going to watch it was the scenes between the male and female protagonists. There is also the secret of the heroine (drugs, Ps: the children in Lu Bei) which makes me curious. I almost want to jump to watch it😷 I felt so bad when I read it today that I almost gave it a low score😇, but I thought that it is not easy for the author to write a book (I have written it before, but it fell apart😻), the characters can make readers so annoying, and the writing is awesome. Come on, author (slip away👋).

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Book Friends 20230124457_ba48mo ago

Into the pit, children who have not yet entered the pit

This article is definitely not abusive, it is warm and affectionate, the male and female protagonists interact smoothly and smoothly, the female protagonist is not a virgin, not a noob, she is strong and sober. The male and female protagonists are equal in emotional personality, equal in strength, and evenly matched. The male protagonist is absolutely favored by his strength! The male and female protagonists are absolutely not bad, the plot is not bad, and the protagonist and supporting characters are not too clever. Welcome to the pit!

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Star ⭐️light Eyes4mo ago

There are really not many good articles that you insist on writing to the end. Thank you for not giving up on the article. 👍👍

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Book Friend 404683943749mo ago

Why can't comments be displayed?

Why are comments not displayed? ? ?

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Book Friends 20230124457_ba47mo ago

If you are not into the trap, look over here!

The writing and plot of this article are online, the characters and storylines are full, interspersed with love, family affection, friendship, loyalty... It's not a loss if you enter the trap! Walk by and take a look! If you like it, add it to your favorites and keep following it; if you don't like it, just delete it!

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Cat Kitten49mo ago

good looking

Finished it in one go, looks great. The writing style is mature, the characters are full-bodied, and the male and female protagonists are cold and arrogant yet humane.

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Joyce_ba44mo ago

Great author, why is it completely different from what I read on the website after chapter 160?

The content is different. I felt dizzy when I saw it.

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Joy79248mo ago

Fortunately, someone remembers her as the third lady

A faint smile appeared on Qi Maochang's face that had always been indifferent: "Miss Third, Asheng will leave it to you." The sound of "Miss San" made Xu Jin fall into a trance. No one has called this name for many years. Everyone was also surprised, why was Qi Maochang so polite to Xu Jin? And call her Miss Third?

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