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New book Battle Mage Raphael has been released The pit of Holy Light must be filled!
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Official(8)Scraped 3d ago
When I saw the job transfer section, I wanted to give some personal advice to the author.
After reading Chapter 40 or 50, I can feel that the author is better at describing fighting scenes. But in contrast, it feels lacking in overall rhythm control. The content of these chapters about career change gives people the feeling of being rushed to finish writing. The pace is too fast, and many details are not described in place, or there are no details at all. For example, after the protagonist enters the first job change scene, he suddenly realizes that he has turned back into the warrior he was during the closed beta. I feel that if the character attributes can be explained clearly through the system panel, book friends may be able to understand what the mission is about faster when reading it (without explaining the mission in advance). Then these few missions were just fights, and in the end I didn't quite understand why I had to fight. In order to practice the spirit of chivalry? To protect the people who are instinctively protected? I think it is best to make these clear. And the most important thing I want to say is that the author is really not good at writing emotional scenes. . . When seeing the protagonist's clone disappear, the protagonist suddenly feels sad. . . . It's really baffling. . . Only later did I realize that it was the protagonist who sympathized with the clone's short life. . . . To be fair, if the author can't write such a sensational scene, it's best not to write it. You can not give the clone the emotions of the protagonist at the beginning. . . . It would be nice to just be a puppet who knows all the fighting skills of the protagonist. . . This will be much more natural. Also, I hope that the author will not be deliberately humorous when writing character cards. . To be honest, I felt so "cold" watching it. . . . I originally wanted to say a few words and forget it, but ended up saying more and more. . . Just think of it as the bbd of an old bookworm who is bored because of the lack of books.
It seems that he is already a eunuch.
Give it a good review. . . . .
The author lied
It's been a long time since I updated it. It makes me come to see it every now and then. Can't you be more diligent? It's rare to see such a good book written by such a hateful author.
Author, do you know? I heard that several authors have been disabled in the past few days, just because of not updating (crazy hint) Please be aware of it...
Come on
This book is very interesting, the fights are particularly exciting, thank you so much for the author＾0＾~
Good hahahahahaha
Red, red, red, red, red, trance, trance, trance
The introduction looks good.
This book is very burning, slow to burn, 3000 hours of bookworm identification
It may not seem like much at first, but after 100 chapters, I started to get excited. There are very few books that can keep me up all night reading. The author cheats from time to time. After all, he is an old pigeon. He is used to it. Maybe the author wants to make a fortune by selling blades?
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Official(8)Scraped 3d ago
When I saw the job transfer section, I wanted to give some personal advice to the author.
After reading Chapter 40 or 50, I can feel that the author is better at describing fighting scenes. But in contrast, it feels lacking in overall rhythm control. The content of these chapters about career change gives people the feeling of being rushed to finish writing. The pace is too fast, and many details are not described in place, or there are no details at all. For example, after the protagonist enters the first job change scene, he suddenly realizes that he has turned back into the warrior he was during the closed beta. I feel that if the character attributes can be explained clearly through the system panel, book friends may be able to understand what the mission is about faster when reading it (without explaining the mission in advance). Then these few missions were just fights, and in the end I didn't quite understand why I had to fight. In order to practice the spirit of chivalry? To protect the people who are instinctively protected? I think it is best to make these clear. And the most important thing I want to say is that the author is really not good at writing emotional scenes. . . When seeing the protagonist's clone disappear, the protagonist suddenly feels sad. . . . It's really baffling. . . Only later did I realize that it was the protagonist who sympathized with the clone's short life. . . . To be fair, if the author can't write such a sensational scene, it's best not to write it. You can not give the clone the emotions of the protagonist at the beginning. . . . It would be nice to just be a puppet who knows all the fighting skills of the protagonist. . . This will be much more natural. Also, I hope that the author will not be deliberately humorous when writing character cards. . To be honest, I felt so "cold" watching it. . . . I originally wanted to say a few words and forget it, but ended up saying more and more. . . Just think of it as the bbd of an old bookworm who is bored because of the lack of books.
It seems that he is already a eunuch.
Give it a good review. . . . .
The author lied
It's been a long time since I updated it. It makes me come to see it every now and then. Can't you be more diligent? It's rare to see such a good book written by such a hateful author.
Author, do you know? I heard that several authors have been disabled in the past few days, just because of not updating (crazy hint) Please be aware of it...
Come on
This book is very interesting, the fights are particularly exciting, thank you so much for the author＾0＾~
Good hahahahahaha
Red, red, red, red, red, trance, trance, trance
The introduction looks good.
This book is very burning, slow to burn, 3000 hours of bookworm identification
It may not seem like much at first, but after 100 chapters, I started to get excited. There are very few books that can keep me up all night reading. The author cheats from time to time. After all, he is an old pigeon. He is used to it. Maybe the author wants to make a fortune by selling blades?
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Chuanhuo? Chest strap, it makes my blood boil.
Holy Light, that enemy is worth fighting.
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A very good book
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