The Queen Has No Desire to Live

The storyline is very good, but there are some small details (it makes me uncomfortable to watch it for personal reasons) This book has a plot, but its plot is still a bit immature (I haven't read much yet) For example, in the scene where the heroine is looking for someone in a brothel, the heroine directly takes out the wolf fang that symbolizes status at the gate. The author has set that it is the time when the brothel is open in the evening and the gate should be crowded with people. However, the heroine not only takes out the token directly, but the brothel madam also directly calls out the word "Pavilion Master". The heroine can completely disguise herself as a man and inadvertently show the token to her boss. (And I don't know if the madam is the connector.) The author's setting is that the heroine's development and facial problems are difficult to deal with as a boy (you can give him an ability setting that can be disguised). Furthermore, the heroine's martial arts is very strong, and she can sneak into the brothel by herself, which makes it less likely to attract attention (the heroine used the identity of her cousin to hide her identity without attracting attention, but as soon as she arrived at the door of the brothel, her identity was exposed🤗) There is also Yi Shu, the little daughter of his bun selling family, although she knows some boxing and kicking skills, she broke through the bamboo forest formation alone (or the formation that protects the Red Moon Pavilion). She was able to break in without getting hurt, and there was a problem. Moreover, the heroine didn't have any suspicion that she might be an undercover sent by others? They didn't even check and took her with them as a confidant! Even if the heroine didn't think so much because she was young or had a common enemy and was impulsive (this is not in line with the status of a Machiavellian heroine), even so, the second child of Chiyue Pavilion should have thought of this and reminded the heroine or privately checked Yi Shu's identity. I suggest that you think more about Machiavellian plots, or change your approach. Don't make the heroine too smart to capture people's hearts. It would be good to write her as a stubborn, innocent little girl who only wants to find her brother. If you really want to write about Machiavellian plots, then the author should think more and pay attention to details. This review is just to help the author write a better article. Not a swipe. (A little suggestion from an old bookworm.) I hope the author will write better and better. Bye-Bye!

When will the update be released? I'm looking forward to it. It's good to watch. It seems that Yu Chiyuan knows that his Jiaojiao has been lying to him. Will he still like his Jiaojiao?

Hello, author, I am your fan. I feel really uncomfortable when I see some people making fun of you. In my heart, you are a kind person who keeps working hard for your goals. I will always support you, so can you kiss me? I hope you will not be ignorant of praise.

I couldn't understand the author's setting. It was quite interesting at first. I originally thought I would keep watching it. As a result, you suddenly show me your master who has been kissed by others, possesses martial arts and internal strength, and cannot even defeat a prince. It's like it's useless. So, I decided to give up and continue chasing.

When I read this book before, I seemed to have seen the later story, where the heroine kicked the hero out of bed during their wedding, but now I can't find it.

Martial Arts: Yu Chiyuan＞Xu An＞Ning Yanshan＞Ye Jinghe＞Everyone Internal Strength: Ye Jinghe＞Yu Chiyuan＞Everyone

Finished with flowers~~ Love you, mom~[emoji=1f495][emoji=1f495][emoji=1f495]

Ah ah ah, don't be too pretty, this is the most different heroine I have ever seen. I only updated one chapter yesterday, which is not enough [emoji=1f62d][emoji=1f62d]

The writing is good, there is no exaggerated plot, it is frank, and I really like the author's way of writing. The heroine's indifference at the beginning is well written, and it doesn't feel too dramatic, and the heroine's final change is also written in a bland way. What I mean by bland is a compliment. A few words can make readers feel her changes, unlike some authors who keep repeating the changes of the protagonist, and then feel a bit overexerted. The male protagonist likes her very much and has always loved the female protagonist. This is the best book I've ever read that doesn't have a bloody plot and is just right. I recommend it.

Why is the heroine just a concubine😴😴😴 Can't accept it