Immortal Martial Arts: Going Against the Current

It's been several years since I read your book. I support you.

The protagonist basically tells all the passwords to others like an idiot! At best, it sounds selfless; at worst, it sounds like a stupid, brainless virgin bitch. Her thoughts are too simple, she has no purpose, and she cannot achieve great things. The author is forcibly adding the aura of the protagonist!

After reading Chapter 70, the protagonist has the ability to destroy the Yuan and the ability to change, but he turns a blind eye. Because all it takes is one more chapter at the end.

Dugu Qiufei's swordsmanship actually has three realms. The sharp sword, heavy sword and soft sword are one realm, the wooden sword and the swordless sword are one realm, and the Tiandi Wuwei sword is one realm. Is the Dugu Nine Swordsmanship the swordsmanship of his youth? His swordsmanship is similar when he is fifty years old. He pays attention to the sword of the heart and the sword of the mind. He can do whatever he wants and use his mind to destroy the energy. Sharp swords, soft swords and heavy swords are still in the sword strokes, wooden swords are in the state of mind, and no swords are in the artistic state. Everything in the world can be the sword and the way.

Nowadays, everyone likes to write Jin Yong's novels, why not Gu Long's? I think the Cologne one looks better. Jin Yong's protagonists are all idiots.

Make some soy sauce first, I don't know if it looks good or not.

The biggest problem with this book is that it has no logic! Reality does not follow logic, but novels do. Only logic can create the "reality" of the world in the book. The protagonist gets the martial arts inheritance from the ancient tomb ruins, which falls within the logic of the original work. It is a bit outrageous but not much, and it is acceptable! The problem is that the protagonist moved a complete cold jade bed from the ancient tomb alone. The protagonist is only 12 years old... The logic here is already broken! Later, the protagonist forcibly practices the evil-repelling sword manual. The reason given by the author is that he wants to quickly achieve internal strength, but Jiuyin itself has a quick method, and the Jade Girl Heart Sutra itself can speed up the movement speed. If it is a complete Sunflower Book, it is still acceptable, but the incomplete sunflower's evil-proof sword manual is not worth forcibly practicing! The author couldn't give a reasonable reason. It was entirely because the author wanted to fix it, so he forced the protagonist to fix it. This lowers the protagonist's IQ, which seriously affects the viewing experience. Readers will feel like their IQ has been insulted! The protagonist took the initiative to go to Huashan and forcibly participated in the grievances between the Sword and Qi Sect. It was completely out of trouble. The author wanted to make up a story, but it was unreasonable, so he made it up randomly and made the whole world revolve around the protagonist. This directly caused the already shaky sense of reality to collapse into a mess!

Personally I think it looks pretty good. Come on

The writing is poor, the protagonist is like a fool, and the protagonist's IQ is even lower than 99.99% Of the readers' IQ. How does it make people feel connected? As for those who say good things, they are in the 0.01% Category.

The writing is the same, whether it's dialogue or character description, it's like a primary school student's composition.