After Listening to My Voice, the Villain Became Addicted to the Plot

Pass by, don't miss it The tyrant who speaks up and criticizes the villain VS the cannon-fodder concubine who always goes crazy It's fun to slap the face, never stay overnight, don't play cards according to the routine, and lead the villain's family to fight back. All the villains are mind-reading heroines, fake cannon fodder, and the real group favorite. Please vote and collect it😹😹😹

I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long time. I beg the author to make more updates. The heroine is not a love brain, nor is she a virgin bitch. She has both business interests online. She goes crazy from time to time, which is so funny. There is also a time-traveling girl who slaps her face, which is so cool to see. The interaction with the male protagonist was so funny. On the surface, he was submissive and respectful, but in his heart, he was scolding her more harshly than anyone else. I wonder what the female protagonist would do after she knew that the male protagonist could hear his voice. Also, the heroine's family is very nice. Although there are no good people around her like a big villain, it's interesting to see them uncover the bad guys. Especially the heroine's father and the heroine's brother, the father and son are too similar. It looks good. If you like it, please read more!

It's good to read, but there are a lot of irregularities and typos in the article.

No need to go to court? Just two days to pass?

The needle does not poke, the needle does not poke. . . I feel that the second male lead, Pei Yu, is a bit miserable. He and the heroine were childhood sweethearts, and they were only one step away from getting married. However, when the heroine entered the palace, he gave her up to someone else. . . I think the author should give him a better ending. . . .

. . Don't know what to say. You say the heroine is cautious. She pulled the emperor's hair, bumped his head and punched him. You say she is imprudent. She knew at the beginning that she was a cannon fodder and she had to be careful with her words and deeds to avoid sending away her whole family. . So what? Are you not afraid of death now? After realizing that the male protagonist's attitude was wrong, he still stereotyped the male protagonist as a tyrant and didn't think about anything else. What did he rely on to act like this? I'm thinking about it, it's not a problem for your family to die a hundred and eighty times if the tyrant is really a tyrant. How can you scold the tyrant in your heart and at the same time do things that come before you as if you don't have the slightest fear? The reader knows that the male protagonist can hear her voice, but the female protagonist doesn't know the problem. Why can you be so scared of death and at the same time be afraid that your family will not die fast enough? And at the beginning of the poisoning, I clearly heard that the emperor was poisoned, but I didn't want to see it. But then I was able to act with the emperor and arrest people. Why are you so active this time? It turned out that I saw that the emperor was not in the right state, and I also explained to her. The result: I don't listen, I don't listen, I don't listen, I don't believe it, I don't believe it, I don't believe it, oh, you'll be happy with one knife, you're not worried that the emperor will kill you, I'm stupid. Why can we be so divided, teacher? I don't know, teacher, I don't understand.

The novel is very interesting, and the overall writing style is good, but some details are not very good. For example, the heroine "Rong Guifei" should be called the imperial concubine, not the imperial concubine. The imperial concubine is one level lower than the imperial concubine. The female supporting character Qu Wanxin is "Hui Guiren". On the surface, she is the beloved concubine brought back from the palace by the male protagonist. Everyone should call her Guiren. "Miss Wan" is a bit nondescript. Her current identity is a concubine, so she should be called a concubine according to her status. There are typos (the author is actively correcting them.) Some sentence fragments are too long and can be added with a comma, such as "Chu Chengye standing outside the door listened to the movement in the room and Cheng Jin's noisy heart. He frowned in confusion. "The sentence is too long, you can add a comma, "There are movements in the room, and..." It seems simple and clear. The overall novel is still very good. If I give it a score of 8.5, It would be fine. If the details are handled better, I could score it a score of 9 or above. These are my personal thoughts, just for reference, I hope you don't mind. How to write a novel depends on the author.

Not bad. I'll update it soon. It's not enough.

It's a very good book. It's very sweet and the plot is not that cliched. In fact, before I thought the female protagonist was a bit too stupid and didn't understand the male protagonist's thoughts at all. Later I slowly realized that as a time traveler, it is not easy to fall in love with a person in the book. Moreover, the emperor always has a harem of three thousand people. What he may face is sharing a man with many people. This is unacceptable in modern times. All in all, the process of falling in love between the male and female protagonists is still very sweet. It is just bitter for the second male lead. I hope this book will become more and more popular. Remember to correct typos😹

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