White Moonlight Dressed as a Traitor

After reading the introduction, I thought Yu Wenqian was the male protagonist, but it turned out not to be the case. I feel like I was deceived.

The more you write, the more outrageous it gets. At first, it was a normal house fight and palace fight, but the fictional plot later became more and more outrageous. There was even some fantasy, some dragon, some magic power, and all kinds of messy things. The author didn't even think about these things at the beginning, right? But towards the end of the writing, he suddenly let himself go, right? It's really getting more and more outrageous. It feels like the donkey's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong. The front style and the back style don't seem to be unified at all. The whole style is completely different, which makes people feel very awkward and uncomfortable. Moreover, all the male characters in it are insane. There is no normal person. A man will fall in love with the female protagonist. I think this kind of plot is the setting of Shuangwen. I can understand it, but there is no lovable character and there is no halo of a normal female protagonist. It's so big Outrageous, some Mary Sue novels are within a reasonable range, but the heroine's character is really outrageous, and the character of the heroine in the later stage, I feel a bit broken. At the beginning, she was just a weak, but strong, she just wanted to be in peace with her family, and later even As for the princess protecting the country, wanting to be the empress, and other nonsense, it is getting more and more outrageous, and it is not in line with the character of the person who only wants to keep her family safe. Then when something happened to her family, she was accused of not taking care of it. He himself was accused of treason. After becoming famous, his family members were also implicated, and some were even exiled. He and she also wandered around the world on their own, and acquired some unparalleled magical power. The living relatives of her family are now in danger, and she still took two swords and put them there to inquire about information and look for clues to revenge. It's really getting more and more outrageous. The plot needs twists and turns, and the characters need to grow, but these must be within a reasonable range. I really can't see anything reasonable here. It's getting more and more outrageous. From a terminally ill Taifu's daughter, she slowly turned into a princess protecting the country, and then what? The plot of the martial arts world's most powerful children comes to this kind of rivers and lakes again. The whole article is a hodgepodge. When writing the article, you always choose a theme, either modern campus youth or urban ancient times. You either make it a fantasy, or it is fantasy or martial arts Jianghu. You choose a theme and a background, and you have to set up your story as a whole. In a big frame and a big background, if you really want to soften it, this thing must be combined well. I feel that this is a setting that does not include a previous bloodline for the heroine at the back. I really hold back at the back. I want to see how outrageous he is behind, but I really can't stand it. I can't, I can't stand it anymore.

That's it, I haven't had enough of it yet! Moreover, many of the foreshadowing things were not even finished before it was over!

Why did it end like this? ? ? ? ? ?

The title of the book obviously refers to sex, but I didn't expect it to refer to obsession. Secondly, the author wrote that the original heroine had the halo of being a heroine, so all the male supporting characters with status liked her, but the same is true for the heroine, right?

At first I thought the male protagonist was Yu Wenqian, then I thought it was Fu Li, but in the end it turned out to be Dongfang Zhi! ? I don't understand, but I'm shocked...

At first I thought the male protagonist was Yu Wenqian, then I thought it was Fu Li, but in the end it turned out to be Dongfang Zhi! ? I don't understand, but I'm shocked...

It started out great, fell apart in the middle, and ended badly. Love can't be said so quickly. If you fall in love with someone else, you still miss someone else. In the blink of an eye, no matter how fast it is, it still takes a while. There's no foreshadowing, it's too hasty.

It was okay at the beginning, but fell apart in the middle, and even the male protagonist changed in the end. The book title, introduction, and book content are also very different. There are also many typos. There are also many places where the logic is illogical and the relationship is forced.

Okay, okay, if the male protagonist doesn't appear, I'll have to make fun of Fu Li and Fu Shu.