
Yin and Yang Control People
by The Pen Points To The End Of The World
About This Novel
(The new book "Once Upon a Time There Was a Demon" has set sail! I look forward to your review, thank you from the end of the world.) A hundred years ago, the underworld was in turmoil. Ghosts and gods such as the King of Hell and Po Meng disappeared, and endless dead souls were raging. At the same time, Lord Yama of the Ten Palaces was born, taking charge of the underworld, suppressing all ghosts, setting up - Yin and Yang are responsible for the people, responsible for the two realms, and assisting the management of Yin and Yang! And this... Is just the beginning! - I have a stroke that can cut off the ends of the world, I have an ink that can stain the rivers and seas, I have an order that... Can judge Yin and Yang!
What Readers Think
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Official(24)Scraped 28d ago
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Why does every urban novel have to have an idiot woman who is weak and always holds her back?
Is there no follow-up???????
Ending and Part 2
Alas, the ending has too much meaning. It leaves a suspense, but I still want to watch. The West has not yet ruled, and there are many stories, If you want to make a second part, you can add it to the real-life love story There is no talk of ghosts and gods. The second type is to train children just like the old man adopted them. Although there are young children, they can be ignored. The above are my suggestions, you can also open another book. I hope your second book will be more exciting Come on^0^~
It feels like crap. . . . . . . .
I want to know if Sikong girl is his first love
If the male protagonist accepts Sikong girl, and Sikong girl is not his first love, I will abandon her.
sequel
The ending touched me a lot. I hope there will be a sequel. I will give my full support.
The ending is really touching☆☆
Come on^0^~
The second, third, and fourth books I think about you
The character of the protagonist in the next book can be changed a little from this one. For example, he is also a ghost hunter, but his character can be cold and iron-faced. He was born with a cold body, because he had a pair of different glasses since he was a child, one yellow and one red. The villagers thought it was unknown. His mother died in childbirth and his father went crazy. It was better to escape from the village and go to the county town. Then he lived there, saw the harshness of the world, and saw too many magical things. Because he mistakenly entered the ghost market and was cut into pieces, his soul remained and entered the underworld. Later, because his mother was a ghost, the underworld gave him a half-job, so that he would not suffer the pain of reincarnation. This is the first one, from ancient times. I have mentioned a few sentences about catching ghosts in ancient times, because this is the third part and a sequel. The second part is modern. It's just that there are some things here why they need to be done. Why should you help some people. Commitment for what. This is the pitfall of the third part. You need to write it yourself. And then each of these three is a book. Each book does not need to be 500,000 words long. But the content of each book must be fully thought out. The idea must be good Every foreshadowing must be well laid. Believe that you can do it. Come on^ 0 ^~
Be careful not to get exhausted from writing a book
The author must take care of himself. If you fall ill, you book friends will not be able to read such a good novel.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(24)Scraped 28d ago
. . .
Why does every urban novel have to have an idiot woman who is weak and always holds her back?
Is there no follow-up???????
Ending and Part 2
Alas, the ending has too much meaning. It leaves a suspense, but I still want to watch. The West has not yet ruled, and there are many stories, If you want to make a second part, you can add it to the real-life love story There is no talk of ghosts and gods. The second type is to train children just like the old man adopted them. Although there are young children, they can be ignored. The above are my suggestions, you can also open another book. I hope your second book will be more exciting Come on^0^~
It feels like crap. . . . . . . .
I want to know if Sikong girl is his first love
If the male protagonist accepts Sikong girl, and Sikong girl is not his first love, I will abandon her.
sequel
The ending touched me a lot. I hope there will be a sequel. I will give my full support.
The ending is really touching☆☆
Come on^0^~
The second, third, and fourth books I think about you
The character of the protagonist in the next book can be changed a little from this one. For example, he is also a ghost hunter, but his character can be cold and iron-faced. He was born with a cold body, because he had a pair of different glasses since he was a child, one yellow and one red. The villagers thought it was unknown. His mother died in childbirth and his father went crazy. It was better to escape from the village and go to the county town. Then he lived there, saw the harshness of the world, and saw too many magical things. Because he mistakenly entered the ghost market and was cut into pieces, his soul remained and entered the underworld. Later, because his mother was a ghost, the underworld gave him a half-job, so that he would not suffer the pain of reincarnation. This is the first one, from ancient times. I have mentioned a few sentences about catching ghosts in ancient times, because this is the third part and a sequel. The second part is modern. It's just that there are some things here why they need to be done. Why should you help some people. Commitment for what. This is the pitfall of the third part. You need to write it yourself. And then each of these three is a book. Each book does not need to be 500,000 words long. But the content of each book must be fully thought out. The idea must be good Every foreshadowing must be well laid. Believe that you can do it. Come on^ 0 ^~
Be careful not to get exhausted from writing a book
The author must take care of himself. If you fall ill, you book friends will not be able to read such a good novel.













