I Can Hear the Voiceover
About This Novel
1. [The coquettish movement angered the enemy, who emptied the entire magazine in frustration. ] Lu Huaiqiu: "I bet there are no bullets in your gun." 2. [The demon squatted behind the door, licking his claws, waiting for his defenseless prey to step in. ] Lu Huaiqiu calmly threw a high-explosive grenade into the house and locked the door with his backhand. 3. [The little deer in the girl's heart is running wildly, eagerly waiting for the other person's confession. ] Lu Huaiqiu: "Drinking more hot water is good for your health." * * If the story is like a grand movie, then Lu Huaiqiu is an innocent God. Because-- He could hear the voiceover of the world.
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See less comments I'll come, water, water, water, water, water. Ask a question Do you like Milon? The Legend of Miron - Sword Cutting Sword Kill all enemies without stopping, the golden skyline
Isn't the protagonist too much of a virgin? She works so hard and then gives most of her income to the orphanage? Ken wants to be a saint?
I am not against innovation
As the title states, I am not opposed to innovative writing methods. But to be honest, childish and innovative writing methods should not be used in online articles. The Japanese speaking style is really yours. I suggest you try speaking like this with the people around you in the future? It doesn't mean that Internet articles are not grounded. After all, there are so many fantasy and science fiction aspects. But it would be strange if your writing style is not down to earth.
I don't know why I feel a little unnatural while reading it.
Maybe it's because of the lack of emotional description...
good health
It's pretty good-looking, but it's just a bit lacking for my taste.
Just comment and give some suggestions
The writing style is immature and childish. I only read and commented on the beginning. It is very fancy and does not get into the theme. How could a guardian in the middle of the night and a team leader be written in such a childish way?
water experience
I personally think it's good If anyone has a picture like this, send me a private message
Liu Shui Wen
Apart from the nice setting and world view, the other plot characters are really not worth mentioning. Picking up the cat in the middle will obviously lower the reader's IQ.
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Warm ✘ Write 800 words below, thank you dad
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Community(0)
Official(49)
Crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame crystal flame
water
See less comments I'll come, water, water, water, water, water. Ask a question Do you like Milon? The Legend of Miron - Sword Cutting Sword Kill all enemies without stopping, the golden skyline
Isn't the protagonist too much of a virgin? She works so hard and then gives most of her income to the orphanage? Ken wants to be a saint?
I am not against innovation
As the title states, I am not opposed to innovative writing methods. But to be honest, childish and innovative writing methods should not be used in online articles. The Japanese speaking style is really yours. I suggest you try speaking like this with the people around you in the future? It doesn't mean that Internet articles are not grounded. After all, there are so many fantasy and science fiction aspects. But it would be strange if your writing style is not down to earth.
I don't know why I feel a little unnatural while reading it.
Maybe it's because of the lack of emotional description...
good health
It's pretty good-looking, but it's just a bit lacking for my taste.
Just comment and give some suggestions
The writing style is immature and childish. I only read and commented on the beginning. It is very fancy and does not get into the theme. How could a guardian in the middle of the night and a team leader be written in such a childish way?
water experience
I personally think it's good If anyone has a picture like this, send me a private message
Liu Shui Wen
Apart from the nice setting and world view, the other plot characters are really not worth mentioning. Picking up the cat in the middle will obviously lower the reader's IQ.
an essay
Warm ✘ Write 800 words below, thank you dad
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1. [The coquettish movement angered the enemy, who emptied the entire magazine in frustration. ] Lu Huaiqiu: "I bet there are no bullets in your gun." 2. [The demon squatted behind the door, licking his claws, waiting for his defenseless prey to step in. ] Lu Huaiqiu calmly threw a high-explosive grenade into the house and locked the door with his backhand. 3. [The little deer in the girl's heart is running wildly, eagerly waiting for the other person's confession. ] Lu Huaiqiu: "Drinking more hot water is good for your health." * * If the story is like a grand movie, then Lu Huaiqiu is an innocent God. Because-- He could hear the voiceover of the world.
1. [The coquettish movement angered the enemy, who emptied the entire magazine in frustration. ] Lu Huaiqiu: "I bet there are no bullets in your gun." 2. [The demon squatted behind the door, licking his claws, waiting for his defenseless prey to step in. ] Lu Huaiqiu calmly threw a high-explosive grenade into the house and locked the door with his backhand. 3. [The little deer in the girl's heart is running wildly, eagerly waiting for the other person's confession. ] Lu Huaiqiu: "Drinking more hot water is good for your health." * * If the story is like a grand movie, then Lu Huaiqiu is an innocent God. Because-- He could hear the voiceover of the world.
[Male Video Game] Although it is a game, it is not really a game, but life is like a play. The cheating protagonist is just different. I really like the character of the protagonist, the description is great, please support me!
1. [The coquettish movement angered the enemy, who emptied the entire magazine in frustration. ] Lu Huaiqiu: "I bet there are no bullets in your gun." 2. [The demon squatted behind the door, licking his claws, waiting for his defenseless prey to step in. ] Lu Huaiqiu calmly threw a high-explosive grenade into the house and locked the door with his backhand. 3. [The little deer in the girl's heart is running wildly, eagerly waiting for the other person's confession. ] Lu Huaiqiu: "Drinking more hot water is good for your health." * * If the story is like a grand movie, then Lu Huaiqiu is an innocent God. Because-- He could hear the voiceover of the world.
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