The End of the World Begins with a Scalpel
by Seven Nights On The Left Bank
About This Novel
He transformed a Chinese pastoral dog into a beast king, advanced a lizard into a giant dragon, and combined the genes of a beautiful woman and a fish to create a new race - the mermaid tribe! He also personally created a goddess of life. In the apocalypse, he is a surgeon and a great genetic modifier! New book: "Ninth Grade Jailer: A blind date with the leader of the Demon Cult at the beginning" has been released. We hope you will support it.
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Official(397)Scraped 4d ago
Overall this book is good. But I feel good if I change my name. This name doesn't look very good. It's too long and too earthy. For example, the pictures are nice and the content is nice, but after reading the title of the book, I feel like I don't want to read it.
Now I guess it will be a bit cruel later on
If the engagement is successfully broken off, the protagonist will run away with Tang Yan. The Gu family will not agree, or they may beat his grandfather and kill his cousin. In short, most readers will not like this ending too much. There is also a marriage story that lasts almost 30 chapters, which is a bit slow.
23333
It feels like the author has responded to every comment. Author, listen to me, you can listen to good suggestions. If there are no shortcomings, there is no need to criticize those people, and there is no need to waste time... It is better to write and save the manuscript, refine the outline, etc... First, let's do five things.
two! indivual! female! host! At once! enough! Got it!
Two heroines are enough, no need for so many! ! The protagonist is not an animal (Trolls are not welcome in my comments)
It's not what I want to see. It's not cold-blooded at all.
When you see a woman, you can't walk. For example, that one named Tang Yun. She kicked you till you vomited blood and you saved her. Accept it. Holy Mother, what I want to see is whether it's a man or a woman, as long as he hurts you, you have to fight him back immediately.
The system is an auxiliary
System tasks will kill the book! How many books have been written on this, I hope it can be useful to you! The system just needs to be capable! Shut him up! It would be better to remove the task
farewell
I've read You? It's over thirty chapters. The protagonists are all weaklings. In the early stage, their own strength is similar to that of ordinary people, which makes labor and management upset. Even if you have a pet, you must at least have some strength. The protagonist is made to look like a supporting character, and there is a female protagonist in chapter 30. Abandoned the book, bye bye to the author, just keep digging.
The author actually writes that the protagonist treats the system as a superpower. Does he not know that there is such a thing as a system? Or is there no such thing as novels in that world? If you write like this, it will only make readers think that the protagonist is crazy. It is 2019. If you write a system, either the protagonist knows the existence of the system, or you write that it is just a superpower. Don't give him a title of system. This will only make the protagonist ignorant. If there is no novel in that world, explain it clearly. Don't act so silly, it's really boring, otherwise you will really want to **** when you see it, and there are those skills and characteristics, it should be considered instinctive, right? If you have such a skill, wouldn't you know how to use it? If not, how could those awakened people use it? You want to say that what is integrated does not count as one's own, then since it is integrated, shouldn't it be integrated into the cost energy? If you need to pay once to fuse one, when will you pay? Are you going to write about fusion and teach animals how to use it, and then fuse it and teach how to use it again? If you write about animals that lack intelligence and cannot be understood, then I can accept it. But if you want to teach how to use this skill, then it is not acceptable. So there is something wrong with your setting.
The writing is not satisfactory. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist is still confused, without goals or plans!
Three people went to stay, 30 yuan a night. The three people each paid 10 yuan and collected 30 yuan and gave it to the boss. Later, the boss said that today's discount is only 25 yuan. Take out 5 yuan and order the waiter to return it to them. The waiter secretly hid 2 yuan, Then, Divided the remaining 3 yuan among the three people, Each person received 1 yuan. In this way, At the beginning, each person paid 10 yuan. Now I get another 1 yuan back, That is, 10-1=9, It only cost 9 yuan per person. 9 Yuan each for 3 people, 3 X 9 = 27 yuan + 2 yuan hidden by the waiter = 29 yuan, Where did the other dollar go? ? ? Does anyone know?
After reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still a loser, the kind who can't walk when he sees a woman.
After reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still a loser, the kind who can't walk when he sees a woman.
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Official(397)Scraped 4d ago
Overall this book is good. But I feel good if I change my name. This name doesn't look very good. It's too long and too earthy. For example, the pictures are nice and the content is nice, but after reading the title of the book, I feel like I don't want to read it.
Now I guess it will be a bit cruel later on
If the engagement is successfully broken off, the protagonist will run away with Tang Yan. The Gu family will not agree, or they may beat his grandfather and kill his cousin. In short, most readers will not like this ending too much. There is also a marriage story that lasts almost 30 chapters, which is a bit slow.
23333
It feels like the author has responded to every comment. Author, listen to me, you can listen to good suggestions. If there are no shortcomings, there is no need to criticize those people, and there is no need to waste time... It is better to write and save the manuscript, refine the outline, etc... First, let's do five things.
two! indivual! female! host! At once! enough! Got it!
Two heroines are enough, no need for so many! ! The protagonist is not an animal (Trolls are not welcome in my comments)
It's not what I want to see. It's not cold-blooded at all.
When you see a woman, you can't walk. For example, that one named Tang Yun. She kicked you till you vomited blood and you saved her. Accept it. Holy Mother, what I want to see is whether it's a man or a woman, as long as he hurts you, you have to fight him back immediately.
The system is an auxiliary
System tasks will kill the book! How many books have been written on this, I hope it can be useful to you! The system just needs to be capable! Shut him up! It would be better to remove the task
farewell
I've read You? It's over thirty chapters. The protagonists are all weaklings. In the early stage, their own strength is similar to that of ordinary people, which makes labor and management upset. Even if you have a pet, you must at least have some strength. The protagonist is made to look like a supporting character, and there is a female protagonist in chapter 30. Abandoned the book, bye bye to the author, just keep digging.
The author actually writes that the protagonist treats the system as a superpower. Does he not know that there is such a thing as a system? Or is there no such thing as novels in that world? If you write like this, it will only make readers think that the protagonist is crazy. It is 2019. If you write a system, either the protagonist knows the existence of the system, or you write that it is just a superpower. Don't give him a title of system. This will only make the protagonist ignorant. If there is no novel in that world, explain it clearly. Don't act so silly, it's really boring, otherwise you will really want to **** when you see it, and there are those skills and characteristics, it should be considered instinctive, right? If you have such a skill, wouldn't you know how to use it? If not, how could those awakened people use it? You want to say that what is integrated does not count as one's own, then since it is integrated, shouldn't it be integrated into the cost energy? If you need to pay once to fuse one, when will you pay? Are you going to write about fusion and teach animals how to use it, and then fuse it and teach how to use it again? If you write about animals that lack intelligence and cannot be understood, then I can accept it. But if you want to teach how to use this skill, then it is not acceptable. So there is something wrong with your setting.
The writing is not satisfactory. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist is still confused, without goals or plans!
Three people went to stay, 30 yuan a night. The three people each paid 10 yuan and collected 30 yuan and gave it to the boss. Later, the boss said that today's discount is only 25 yuan. Take out 5 yuan and order the waiter to return it to them. The waiter secretly hid 2 yuan, Then, Divided the remaining 3 yuan among the three people, Each person received 1 yuan. In this way, At the beginning, each person paid 10 yuan. Now I get another 1 yuan back, That is, 10-1=9, It only cost 9 yuan per person. 9 Yuan each for 3 people, 3 X 9 = 27 yuan + 2 yuan hidden by the waiter = 29 yuan, Where did the other dollar go? ? ? Does anyone know?
After reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still a loser, the kind who can't walk when he sees a woman.
After reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still a loser, the kind who can't walk when he sees a woman.
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