The Glory of Noxus
by The Sword Under The Cherry Blossoms
About This Novel
The once-famous Noxus Empire was struggling and scarred by battles. The defeat of the Ionian War. The deterioration of the Demacia battlefield. And the undercurrents in the Shurima continent silently tell the weakness behind the giants. Within the empire, there are also insatiable desires and many shadows. The former glory of the empire is buried in the dust, waiting to emerge from its cocoon and become a butterfly... On this occasion, Huo Jixing accidentally became a Noxian scout and participated in the Freljord invasion...
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Official(17)Scraped 2d ago
The name of the protagonist in a Western fantasy novel is Huo Jixing. Are you out of your mind?
The protagonist's name doesn't have any sense of substitution. Huo Xingji's name sounds strange in real life.
How did you manage to make the first ten chapters so boring, full of useless scenery, actions, divine commentary, and verbal descriptions. The background and story are explained in too detail, and the desire to read further is completely wiped out in the opening chapters. It doesn't feel like it's slowing down anymore. There's almost no advancement in the main plot. I've written a lot and ended up just entering the map. Your reading strip is too long. At least it gives readers a reason to want to read on! For example, the way to gain strength, the path to take in the future, etc. It would be too difficult to simply let readers go through an ordinary soldier's preparations for war and the journey before the battle. Let's not talk about the golden three chapters and so on. At least the plot should be on track within 10 chapters, right? After reading the beginning, I felt like I was reading a rhetorical work diary, but there was really no sense of immersion. The fun part of reading fan fiction and traveling through novels lies in the interaction with the original characters, the introduction and changes of the original plot, and the acquisition of the corresponding abilities in the original work. You must have at least one of these three points in the beginning, right? Otherwise, the motivation of readers to continue reading is really lacking. The plot progresses too slowly, and the writing is not a daily novel. Slowing down the pace will wear away your patience.
There are really few novels in the League of Legends universe, and I think they're okay.
Very nice!
Very consistent with the League of Legends universe, invincible!
On the battlefield, you wrote a fairy knight, you might as well write Yasuo.
Hey, old guy, you're still alive. Do you know how long I've been waiting for you?
There is good writing style, but it seems to be superfluous rather than striving for excellence.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
There are flaws but it's okay. The main reason is that it's too dramatic in the early stages.
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Official(17)Scraped 2d ago
The name of the protagonist in a Western fantasy novel is Huo Jixing. Are you out of your mind?
The protagonist's name doesn't have any sense of substitution. Huo Xingji's name sounds strange in real life.
How did you manage to make the first ten chapters so boring, full of useless scenery, actions, divine commentary, and verbal descriptions. The background and story are explained in too detail, and the desire to read further is completely wiped out in the opening chapters. It doesn't feel like it's slowing down anymore. There's almost no advancement in the main plot. I've written a lot and ended up just entering the map. Your reading strip is too long. At least it gives readers a reason to want to read on! For example, the way to gain strength, the path to take in the future, etc. It would be too difficult to simply let readers go through an ordinary soldier's preparations for war and the journey before the battle. Let's not talk about the golden three chapters and so on. At least the plot should be on track within 10 chapters, right? After reading the beginning, I felt like I was reading a rhetorical work diary, but there was really no sense of immersion. The fun part of reading fan fiction and traveling through novels lies in the interaction with the original characters, the introduction and changes of the original plot, and the acquisition of the corresponding abilities in the original work. You must have at least one of these three points in the beginning, right? Otherwise, the motivation of readers to continue reading is really lacking. The plot progresses too slowly, and the writing is not a daily novel. Slowing down the pace will wear away your patience.
There are really few novels in the League of Legends universe, and I think they're okay.
Very nice!
Very consistent with the League of Legends universe, invincible!
On the battlefield, you wrote a fairy knight, you might as well write Yasuo.
Hey, old guy, you're still alive. Do you know how long I've been waiting for you?
There is good writing style, but it seems to be superfluous rather than striving for excellence.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
There are flaws but it's okay. The main reason is that it's too dramatic in the early stages.
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