
I'm Just a Commentator in Elf
About This Novel
Lin Xuan, who had just entered college, woke up and found that she was in a world where Pokémon and reality merged. Elf evolution? What subject is this? Forget it, this has nothing to do with me being a commentator, right? ---- "Kyogre used Root Wave on Groudon... And missed, so the skill with a dissatisfied hit rate is a trap!" "Now it's Groudon's turn to counterattack. It's like a cliff sword! But Kyogre can fly, but it still caused a minor damage." Just when Lin Xuan was explaining very passionately, he found that everyone was looking at him. Everyone: "What a hammer to explain!! Why don't you stop these two idiots!!" Lin Xuan had no choice but to take out the elf ball and sigh at the Fengyuan fool not far away. "Obviously my job is to be a commentator, why do you always want me to fight?"
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Official(17)Scraped 2d ago
The author is an accidental character
She has always dreamed of becoming Rose Redo, a female Kirulian, pure white, who teaches the protagonist's Pokémon and the protagonist some fighting knowledge. The older one, its mirror reflection is somewhat similar to the characteristics of the XY film crystal cave.
The battle writing is not good.
The protagonist is set as a narrator, but the battle writing is very awkward, which directly makes it unwatchable. Apart from anything else, Pokémon battles are actually pretty average, and the performance of many characteristics and skills in reality should be very different from those in the game. The author may have limited ability to use the game's settings for battles, which makes the battles less exciting and a bit awkward. For example, the skill hit rate is set in the game for balance, but it would be obviously awkward to directly bring it to reality. In reality, the hit rate should be judged based on skill proficiency.
come on.
This is my favorite type. The protagonist has a good personality and is not so brainless.
Come on, your writing is pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
Come on, your writing is pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
Can Eevee evolve into ice cloth?
I feel that Bingbu's appearance is quite high, but he is so unpopular and his evasion rate is quite good.
generally
I really don't know what to say, it feels just average, covert, and without any sense of participation.
I like the author's novels very much
I hope there will be more in the future, with the protagonist explaining other people's matches.
Anyone who has watched the anime knows that in addition to intimacy, the evolution of Fairy Eevee also requires Fairy-type spirits.
I'm giving you a five-star review for free, and a five-star encouragement for free.
The author's last chapter has been a fake update for several months
It's not particularly good in the first place, but it's just a little trick for the sake of perfect attendance. The last two chapters are exactly the same every time the author updates them. At first, he planned to make up for it, but after being told, he still apologized, but then it was completely ruined. Now he won't update it, and there is no notice. It's not over yet. I updated it for two days and then started to do small things again. Each time I updated it, I only updated half of it. I copied the same thing again in this chapter and added it back the next day. 2023.11.19 Okay, now in the last four chapters, the first 100 words are true updates, and the rest are all fake.
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Community(0)
Official(17)Scraped 2d ago
The author is an accidental character
She has always dreamed of becoming Rose Redo, a female Kirulian, pure white, who teaches the protagonist's Pokémon and the protagonist some fighting knowledge. The older one, its mirror reflection is somewhat similar to the characteristics of the XY film crystal cave.
The battle writing is not good.
The protagonist is set as a narrator, but the battle writing is very awkward, which directly makes it unwatchable. Apart from anything else, Pokémon battles are actually pretty average, and the performance of many characteristics and skills in reality should be very different from those in the game. The author may have limited ability to use the game's settings for battles, which makes the battles less exciting and a bit awkward. For example, the skill hit rate is set in the game for balance, but it would be obviously awkward to directly bring it to reality. In reality, the hit rate should be judged based on skill proficiency.
come on.
This is my favorite type. The protagonist has a good personality and is not so brainless.
Come on, your writing is pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
Come on, your writing is pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
Can Eevee evolve into ice cloth?
I feel that Bingbu's appearance is quite high, but he is so unpopular and his evasion rate is quite good.
generally
I really don't know what to say, it feels just average, covert, and without any sense of participation.
I like the author's novels very much
I hope there will be more in the future, with the protagonist explaining other people's matches.
Anyone who has watched the anime knows that in addition to intimacy, the evolution of Fairy Eevee also requires Fairy-type spirits.
I'm giving you a five-star review for free, and a five-star encouragement for free.
The author's last chapter has been a fake update for several months
It's not particularly good in the first place, but it's just a little trick for the sake of perfect attendance. The last two chapters are exactly the same every time the author updates them. At first, he planned to make up for it, but after being told, he still apologized, but then it was completely ruined. Now he won't update it, and there is no notice. It's not over yet. I updated it for two days and then started to do small things again. Each time I updated it, I only updated half of it. I copied the same thing again in this chapter and added it back the next day. 2023.11.19 Okay, now in the last four chapters, the first 100 words are true updates, and the rest are all fake.













