I'm Just a Commentator in Elf

I'm Just a Commentator in Elf

by The Lost Rabbit

Length:
2.7Mwords723chapters
Latest:
Ch. 723美术课
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6.8QD Score

About This Novel

Lin Xuan, who had just entered college, woke up and found that she was in a world where Pokémon and reality merged. Elf evolution? What subject is this? Forget it, this has nothing to do with me being a commentator, right? ---- "Kyogre used Root Wave on Groudon... And missed, so the skill with a dissatisfied hit rate is a trap!" "Now it's Groudon's turn to counterattack. It's like a cliff sword! But Kyogre can fly, but it still caused a minor damage." Just when Lin Xuan was explaining very passionately, he found that everyone was looking at him. Everyone: "What a hammer to explain!! Why don't you stop these two idiots!!" Lin Xuan had no choice but to take out the elf ball and sigh at the Fengyuan fool not far away. "Obviously my job is to be a commentator, why do you always want me to fight?"

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Snack Food_ae43mo ago

The author is an accidental character

She has always dreamed of becoming Rose Redo, a female Kirulian, pure white, who teaches the protagonist's Pokémon and the protagonist some fighting knowledge. The older one, its mirror reflection is somewhat similar to the characteristics of the XY film crystal cave.

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Forever Blue26mo ago

The battle writing is not good.

The protagonist is set as a narrator, but the battle writing is very awkward, which directly makes it unwatchable. Apart from anything else, Pokémon battles are actually pretty average, and the performance of many characteristics and skills in reality should be very different from those in the game. The author may have limited ability to use the game's settings for battles, which makes the battles less exciting and a bit awkward. For example, the skill hit rate is set in the game for balance, but it would be obviously awkward to directly bring it to reality. In reality, the hit rate should be judged based on skill proficiency.

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I Have a Good Idea43mo ago

come on.

This is my favorite type. The protagonist has a good personality and is not so brainless.

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Dionysus_ad44mo ago

Come on, your writing is pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

Come on, your writing is pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

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Dawn43mo ago

Can Eevee evolve into ice cloth?

I feel that Bingbu's appearance is quite high, but he is so unpopular and his evasion rate is quite good.

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Tall Coat40mo ago

generally

I really don't know what to say, it feels just average, covert, and without any sense of participation.

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Snack Food_ae43mo ago

I like the author's novels very much

I hope there will be more in the future, with the protagonist explaining other people's matches.

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Lice_da22mo ago

Anyone who has watched the anime knows that in addition to intimacy, the evolution of Fairy Eevee also requires Fairy-type spirits.

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Book Friends 20250518428821mo ago

I'm giving you a five-star review for free, and a five-star encouragement for free.

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Xuanyuan Xiaoyao30mo ago

The author's last chapter has been a fake update for several months

It's not particularly good in the first place, but it's just a little trick for the sake of perfect attendance. The last two chapters are exactly the same every time the author updates them. At first, he planned to make up for it, but after being told, he still apologized, but then it was completely ruined. Now he won't update it, and there is no notice. It's not over yet. I updated it for two days and then started to do small things again. Each time I updated it, I only updated half of it. I copied the same thing again in this chapter and added it back the next day. 2023.11.19 Okay, now in the last four chapters, the first 100 words are true updates, and the rest are all fake.

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