Crying Iris
by Yuan Yuyao
About This Novel
[No need to read anymore, I'm out of the circle] Duanmu Difei first met him in the second grade of junior high school, and she poured coke on his head. The second time she saw him, she lost her first kiss. He once threatened: Even if all the women in the world died in this life, he would never fall in love with her! She said without hesitation: You fall in love with me, but I don't want you anymore! - Duanmu Difei, who was lovelorn at a certain time in a certain year, uttered the truth after drinking: It's all your fault for always hanging around in front of me. I'm a little in love with you now. What do you think I should do? ! He domineeringly pulled her into his arms and kissed her forehead: You finally admitted it.
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Official(14)Scraped 2mo ago
Hmm... The writing is smooth, but the sense of immersion is not strong. The whole thing is composed of dialogues. It would be better if it paid more attention to the description of the environment. It feels like it reads like a running account, the writing technique is not proficient, and the writing style still needs to be improved. However, this clear writing style is still good and suitable for sweet writing. If it is to be a sad writing, I recommend learning from Tang Qi. Also, is there something wrong with the social background? The heroine is only in her first year of junior high school. Is this really appropriate? I thought you had to be in high school at least to be in love, right? !
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He tossed and turned for her and couldn't sleep at night. He tried his best to marry her.
come on!
Wenwen's writing is great, keep up the good work! I will keep chasing! Mo Mo Mo Mo
Damn, why don't you update?
Is this your first time writing a novel? I feel that the writing is not very good. The writing style of Dada is very good, but the connection between the upper and lower sentences is not very good. There are too many dialogues, and some environmental descriptions and narration are missing. But it's still great. Come on, I'll add this novel to my bookshelf, and why don't you update it?
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Dear friends, good morning! ! Today is another day without updates.
Can you play guitar?
If not, how do you tug at my heartstrings?
The writing is beautiful, and it's a beautiful book. I hope you'll do more!
Hello!
I want to see you, I just want to see you, I just want to see you in the future and in the past.
! ! !
Today is another day without updates!
I love you.
Today is another day without updates.
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Official(14)Scraped 2mo ago
Hmm... The writing is smooth, but the sense of immersion is not strong. The whole thing is composed of dialogues. It would be better if it paid more attention to the description of the environment. It feels like it reads like a running account, the writing technique is not proficient, and the writing style still needs to be improved. However, this clear writing style is still good and suitable for sweet writing. If it is to be a sad writing, I recommend learning from Tang Qi. Also, is there something wrong with the social background? The heroine is only in her first year of junior high school. Is this really appropriate? I thought you had to be in high school at least to be in love, right? !
&
He tossed and turned for her and couldn't sleep at night. He tried his best to marry her.
come on!
Wenwen's writing is great, keep up the good work! I will keep chasing! Mo Mo Mo Mo
Damn, why don't you update?
Is this your first time writing a novel? I feel that the writing is not very good. The writing style of Dada is very good, but the connection between the upper and lower sentences is not very good. There are too many dialogues, and some environmental descriptions and narration are missing. But it's still great. Come on, I'll add this novel to my bookshelf, and why don't you update it?
Check in
Dear friends, good morning! ! Today is another day without updates.
Can you play guitar?
If not, how do you tug at my heartstrings?
The writing is beautiful, and it's a beautiful book. I hope you'll do more!
Hello!
I want to see you, I just want to see you, I just want to see you in the future and in the past.
! ! !
Today is another day without updates!
I love you.
Today is another day without updates.
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