Budo: I Can See the Crisis Prompt!
About This Novel
"Brother, it's time to drink medicine." Lu Yuan looked at the delicate-looking junior sister holding the medicine bowl in front of him, and really didn't know whether he should drink the medicine or not. ... Lu Yuan, who traveled through time and entered the palace, found that the average person in the palace had 800 evil intentions. The maid who delivered the medicine wanted to kill herself for her lover. The royal martial artist wants to kill himself in order to take the credit. The eunuch of the palace was afraid that he would be too loyal and wanted to kill him. Even the princess thought she had discovered her dirty secret and wanted to kill her. Fortunately, Lu Yuan has a system. [Crisis warning has been generated! ] [Crisis 1: The fragrant powder in Cui Er's nails mixed with Kailuo Decoction will produce toxins. ] [Crisis 2, someone in the palace wants you to die! ] [Note: After surviving any crisis, you can receive rewards. The reward categories are divided into [Cultivating Level], [Item], [Talent], and [Information]] [Successfully survived crisis 1 and received the following rewards] [Cultivation]: Dalongzhuang has 10 years of hard training! [Item]: Top Kailuo Soup*1 [Talent]: Photographic memory (white) ... With the help of system rewards, Lu Yuan was in danger and dangerous places and received numerous rewards. Time passed by and when Lu Yuan looked up again, he found that no one in the world could pose a threat to him anymore.
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Official(5)Scraped 3d ago
This book makes two mistakes at the beginning!
Two problems: First, even if the two female characters, the princess and the sword slave, will not be emotionally entangled with the protagonist in the future, they are definitely not short-term supporting roles, and it is speculated that there is a high probability that they will be emotionally bound to the protagonist in the future. The biggest problem is that the two female characters at the beginning are very unflattering and even disgusting to readers. This is not a question of whether the character setting itself is reasonable, but if you want the second girl to become an important non-villain character, then you cannot make readers disgusted. On the other hand, if you want to create a villain, you have to point out the protagonist's dislike for these two women in advance, so that readers can resonate with them! Second, there is the issue of rewards after the crisis is over. The reward gap between crisis levels is too small. After passing the green crisis, you will be rewarded with one year of cultivation + one resource, and if you pass the orange crisis, you will be rewarded with two years of cultivation + one resource. Is this appropriate? Although there are still differences in talent reward levels, the physical rewards shouldn't be so different! The first impression given to readers is that the intention is very, very deliberately to suppress the protagonist's upgrade speed, and this is only written like this in the first few chapters. It is so inappropriate! This is also a big problem, very fatal! There are also some minor problems. In the world of military force, is it appropriate to promote low-level warriors (equal to soldiers) to become hundreds or thousands of households? This is inappropriate for any purpose! In a thousand-household institution, even if there are no innate masters, at least there will be no shortage of acquired top masters, right? Is it appropriate to arrange for the lowest martial artist to be a member of a thousand households? And how can the protagonist Xiaoqi (the team leader) compete with Qianhu and the manager in a battle of wits? Is this appropriate to write? Of course this is just a minor problem!
Why are the latest dozen or so chapters so messed up, like paragraph after paragraph?
Don't read the untitled stuff at the back, it's rubbish and eye-catching.
The chapters do not match the table of contents at all, and there are also repeated chapters interspersed. I really don't know if you plagiarized it wrongly or deliberately cheated the book money. Don't read the untitled chapters at the end. The writing is really rubbish. Especially after returning to Beijing, this dynasty can survive for 500 years, and the remnants of the previous dynasty can be so rampant. I am really speechless.
Were these 127 chapters moved in the wrong way?
Rain, rain, rainbow, you still think so far. I'm not sure whether I can write it until the time you mentioned.
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Official(5)Scraped 3d ago
This book makes two mistakes at the beginning!
Two problems: First, even if the two female characters, the princess and the sword slave, will not be emotionally entangled with the protagonist in the future, they are definitely not short-term supporting roles, and it is speculated that there is a high probability that they will be emotionally bound to the protagonist in the future. The biggest problem is that the two female characters at the beginning are very unflattering and even disgusting to readers. This is not a question of whether the character setting itself is reasonable, but if you want the second girl to become an important non-villain character, then you cannot make readers disgusted. On the other hand, if you want to create a villain, you have to point out the protagonist's dislike for these two women in advance, so that readers can resonate with them! Second, there is the issue of rewards after the crisis is over. The reward gap between crisis levels is too small. After passing the green crisis, you will be rewarded with one year of cultivation + one resource, and if you pass the orange crisis, you will be rewarded with two years of cultivation + one resource. Is this appropriate? Although there are still differences in talent reward levels, the physical rewards shouldn't be so different! The first impression given to readers is that the intention is very, very deliberately to suppress the protagonist's upgrade speed, and this is only written like this in the first few chapters. It is so inappropriate! This is also a big problem, very fatal! There are also some minor problems. In the world of military force, is it appropriate to promote low-level warriors (equal to soldiers) to become hundreds or thousands of households? This is inappropriate for any purpose! In a thousand-household institution, even if there are no innate masters, at least there will be no shortage of acquired top masters, right? Is it appropriate to arrange for the lowest martial artist to be a member of a thousand households? And how can the protagonist Xiaoqi (the team leader) compete with Qianhu and the manager in a battle of wits? Is this appropriate to write? Of course this is just a minor problem!
Why are the latest dozen or so chapters so messed up, like paragraph after paragraph?
Don't read the untitled stuff at the back, it's rubbish and eye-catching.
The chapters do not match the table of contents at all, and there are also repeated chapters interspersed. I really don't know if you plagiarized it wrongly or deliberately cheated the book money. Don't read the untitled chapters at the end. The writing is really rubbish. Especially after returning to Beijing, this dynasty can survive for 500 years, and the remnants of the previous dynasty can be so rampant. I am really speechless.
Were these 127 chapters moved in the wrong way?
Rain, rain, rainbow, you still think so far. I'm not sure whether I can write it until the time you mentioned.
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