Redemption

Thank you babies for your support and tolerance. I am very grateful and take a bow! Throw flowers! Mwah!

It's so fun to watch! Directly crazy Amway! ! !

Hey, why have I finished reading it again? The plot is quite interesting, but later on it is a bit unclear whether the male protagonist loves the female protagonist more, or is more curious and wants to solve the mystery of the female protagonist. If the male protagonist simply follows his savior, he will discover all kinds of strange things while following, so he will be more interested in the female protagonist. And because I haven't received any love, I mistook dependence for love. Well, this entry point feels good. Does the male protagonist like the female protagonist because she took him home and gave him the only love in the world? You can write it like this, but I think the causal relationship supporting the male protagonist's liking is a bit thin. Well, no, I have emphasized many times before that it is strange for the male protagonist to see the female protagonist through him and see another person. Even so, does the male protagonist still love the female protagonist so deeply? That's really morbid. I feel that if this is not explained clearly, it will be difficult for their previous relationship to stabilize. Besides! I hope that the heroine will not be described as a little spoiled wife in the back. The heroine is described in the front as how powerful she is. She is a shrewd businessman with means and strategies. She has made a name for herself in such a mixed environment in Hong Kong City. Anyway, it describes the heroine as very independent and capable. What happened next actually did not highlight the heroine's abilities. I felt it was a bit like the author just talking about the character. If the male protagonist does not arrive in time and the female protagonist is kidnapped and drugged, how will she choose to escape. You can write about the various situations the heroine faces, and there are plot trends that can promote the emotional development of the male and female protagonists, and there are also plots where the heroine faces and solves problems alone. When it comes to the subsequent plot where the relationship heats up, there is basically no content where the heroine faces problems alone and solves them entirely by her own abilities. This can easily lead to the heroine being weak and unable to support herself. Reading the last paragraph of the introduction, I really thought that the male protagonist stabbed the female protagonist, and then the female protagonist sighed helplessly and tenderly, "I'm afraid of you, but it's not that I don't love you." This is also very touching, isn't it? It can be stabbed by the male protagonist, or it can be stabbed by the female protagonist because of the male protagonist. The male protagonist feels guilty and paranoid, and feels the fear of the female protagonist. The male protagonist is shaken by the relationship, extremely unsure of himself, thinking that the female protagonist doesn't like him at all, and then the male protagonist goes crazy or something. Blah blah blah, if the female protagonist says this again, I feel it will be a killer! Does the author really not consider writing? Very touching. I hope that the male and female protagonists are equal emotionally, or that the female protagonist is slightly dominant. It just feels like the female protagonist is now completely forced to choose among the options given by the male protagonist, but without the male protagonist, she could have had more choices. Yeah, but since this is a mandatory article, it shouldn't be possible to do this. If the author doesn't like this, he can ignore it completely. I'm so sleepy, my whole head is dizzy, and I feel like my words have no logic. Briefly summarize my questions/suggestions 1. Does the male protagonist know clearly what he likes? 2. The heroine design is very good, but it is a bit thin in the book, not realistic and three-dimensional enough, and needs to be strengthened. 3. When the heroine faces matters related to their relationship, she hopes that the heroine can be freer and more spontaneous. The relationship between the two parties should not make the heroine humble due to the large status gap (the mandatory article does not consider this) 4. Do you really not want to try what I said about the introduction? Very touching.

Xu Si pressed 🔪 on 🌚's fatal waist⬆️😍 and said: Be my lover („ಡωಡ„)

Wow, this is a redemption-type book, 😍😍😍😍

Wenwen has been tested and recommended, but there is still a little bit of follow-up reading. Please don't worry, dear ones~ Come and visit often if you can! I'm so scared.

From my point of view, after reading the introduction, I feel a little paranoid, which is very interesting. Then I watched it with this mentality, and I liked it. Looking at it, the plot is not sluggish, the pace is OK, and the characters have distinct personalities. There is no plot that is just for the sake of being bloody, everything is just right. There are also some Cantonese and other things in it (not a lot! Just a few, which can better express the humorous feeling), which makes people feel a bit friendly. As for Pei Chen and Xu Si, I just love them! ! ! ! ! ! They are all very likable. Personally, I like the writing style and plot! ! ! Super touching! I like it, I love it so much, okay?

I like it very much. I wanted to buy a physical book to collect, but I found that there is no physical book😊

I like the book "Moon" very much. I like the writing of Zhaozhao. I hope Zhaozhao will get better and better~

It's super good-looking. The author will update it more. I hope the heroine and hero can resolve their misunderstanding soon.