
American Comics Start with Omega-level Abilities
About This Novel
Li Si passed through, traveled to the Marvel world, and became a mutant who was caught for experimentation. Seeing that the experiment failed and would be wiped out soon, fortunately the system woke up at the critical moment. "What?" "I gained Uncle Wolf's super self-healing ability and control abilities similar to Ebony Maw." And slowly as his abilities were explored, the door to the microscopic world opened in front of him. Matter, molecules, atoms... Professor X: "Who said he can only control metals? We must find him as soon as possible to avoid causing irreparable disasters!" Wolverine: "You are the son of me and Magneto??" ...
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Official(18)Scraped 6d ago
Let others call him Mr. Li one by one, and the protagonist's surname is not Li. They say they want to find a Chinese presence, but they always mention that it's a white man's miserable start, the system awakens and escapes, and then he's hunted down in waves (an old routine) Finally got up and destroyed the research institute, and then started a company? And let a gangster manage the company. (It feels like having the strength of a lion but the heart of a sheep) Being hunted again and going to destroy the White House was a great feeling, but it was very unreasonable. For a person who can destroy the city at will, how can those politicians casually provoke him without fear of death? Also, does the president have too much power? The United States is a capitalist country and it is not the president who has the final say. Then after defeating the American army, he returned to his base. . . It's really speechless. You defeated the army with war. Instead of occupying the country and using the power of the country to help you become stronger, you went back by yourself and let the enemy consolidate their strength again to attack you.
The protagonist is like a fool, he is very good at speaking, but he behaves like a stupid child.
He has been emphasizing that the protagonist is white, and even asked people to call him Mr. Li.
There are a lot of poisonous points, and there are too many others that I won't go into. I'll just talk about the dialogue! This dialogue is quite terrible. Asgardians, my life is at risk at every turn. If you give me a hammer, I still think you are proud of me! This author's writing skills are really bad, there are only dialogues like this in the whole book!
How should I put it? It feels a bit tasteless and a pity to throw away.
The plot is too complicated and confusing, DC and Marvel are making a mess, I feel dizzy when I look at it, and my strength is also messed up...
When writing about Omega Ability, you have to add a system. Once the system is in place, it doesn't matter whether it has Omega Ability or not.
Come on, author, it's very good, don't stop being more awesome.
Xiao Shuangwen, the plot arrangement is reasonable and the plot development is reasonable
To be honest, at the beginning, with the ability of the protagonist, he can do whatever he wants, but he won't kill anyone because he finds it troublesome. Moreover, according to the configuration given by the author to the protagonist, the more he uses the ability, the more injuries he suffers, and the stronger his ability becomes. The protagonist actually wants to stay in one place comfortably, isn't that why? What are you afraid of? In ancient times, one cared about the earth. As long as you didn't kill more than 100 million people, who cared about you? Those who can control you are not as strong as you, and those who are stronger than you can't control you. Wolverine's self-healing power, control ability and mental immunity are all there. Learn from Marvel's invincible stories, kill Kingpin and become the big boss yourself. You can develop your own power without looking for anyone to cooperate, or you don't develop your power. The protagonist is alone and can get away with it, but he still has to hide and hide. Why, don't mention the creation of his own power in the future. The frustration in the front has already persuaded many people to quit.
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Official(18)Scraped 6d ago
Let others call him Mr. Li one by one, and the protagonist's surname is not Li. They say they want to find a Chinese presence, but they always mention that it's a white man's miserable start, the system awakens and escapes, and then he's hunted down in waves (an old routine) Finally got up and destroyed the research institute, and then started a company? And let a gangster manage the company. (It feels like having the strength of a lion but the heart of a sheep) Being hunted again and going to destroy the White House was a great feeling, but it was very unreasonable. For a person who can destroy the city at will, how can those politicians casually provoke him without fear of death? Also, does the president have too much power? The United States is a capitalist country and it is not the president who has the final say. Then after defeating the American army, he returned to his base. . . It's really speechless. You defeated the army with war. Instead of occupying the country and using the power of the country to help you become stronger, you went back by yourself and let the enemy consolidate their strength again to attack you.
The protagonist is like a fool, he is very good at speaking, but he behaves like a stupid child.
He has been emphasizing that the protagonist is white, and even asked people to call him Mr. Li.
There are a lot of poisonous points, and there are too many others that I won't go into. I'll just talk about the dialogue! This dialogue is quite terrible. Asgardians, my life is at risk at every turn. If you give me a hammer, I still think you are proud of me! This author's writing skills are really bad, there are only dialogues like this in the whole book!
How should I put it? It feels a bit tasteless and a pity to throw away.
The plot is too complicated and confusing, DC and Marvel are making a mess, I feel dizzy when I look at it, and my strength is also messed up...
When writing about Omega Ability, you have to add a system. Once the system is in place, it doesn't matter whether it has Omega Ability or not.
Come on, author, it's very good, don't stop being more awesome.
Xiao Shuangwen, the plot arrangement is reasonable and the plot development is reasonable
To be honest, at the beginning, with the ability of the protagonist, he can do whatever he wants, but he won't kill anyone because he finds it troublesome. Moreover, according to the configuration given by the author to the protagonist, the more he uses the ability, the more injuries he suffers, and the stronger his ability becomes. The protagonist actually wants to stay in one place comfortably, isn't that why? What are you afraid of? In ancient times, one cared about the earth. As long as you didn't kill more than 100 million people, who cared about you? Those who can control you are not as strong as you, and those who are stronger than you can't control you. Wolverine's self-healing power, control ability and mental immunity are all there. Learn from Marvel's invincible stories, kill Kingpin and become the big boss yourself. You can develop your own power without looking for anyone to cooperate, or you don't develop your power. The protagonist is alone and can get away with it, but he still has to hide and hide. Why, don't mention the creation of his own power in the future. The frustration in the front has already persuaded many people to quit.













