I Have to Take Care of My Baby Until the End of the World

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I don't know if the author has discovered that the male and female protagonists themselves have incorrect views. The male protagonist is a complete scumbag, and the female protagonist has a bit of homicidal tendencies, and it has nothing to do with the end of the world. From the article, I think this apocalypse is just a dream of a heroine who has homicidal tendencies, some mental illness, etc. There are also many things in the article that are unreasonable and unexplained. If it is impossible for a normal person to recognize the person in the novel at once, and I am standing in the shoes of a woman when she faces a man for the first time. Even if the man is very powerful, but in the end of the world, the male protagonist uses a woman he has just met to do voluntary work for him, which is really scumbag. Without any thanks, the heroine hugged her legs without thinking. There is also the first time the heroine goes to the villa to steal a car. The servant is not the owner. The heroine seems to beheading the heroine as a common thing that has been done many times. In the end, I comforted myself because I wanted to be a servant. It was really because I just told the security guard that some people became superpowers after they survived. It was such a slap in the face too fast! Also, if Zhang Xin is the character, the first time I see her, I would think of introducing the character, and then follow the heroine when the end of the world comes. But when Zhang Xin was helping the original heroine, I always thought she was just an ordinary woman. When she came back, Zhang Xin's identity was like being forced onto that woman for the plot. Zhang Xin's name is very similar to mine, so I pay more attention to this character. I just want to give the author some attention. In fact, in terms of description, there is a lot missing. Scenery description and psychological description are very important. The psychological description of the male protagonist's first appearance is just a classic psychology of a domineering president who thinks the female protagonist is interesting. If the male protagonist's psychological description were changed, it would still be the same thing. The male protagonist thought: I didn't expect that there was someone who woke up at the same time as me, and she was a stupid-looking woman. It seems to be quite fun. I wonder what it feels like to tease her. Her expression will be wonderful! The psychological description would be better if it had one more level. When the heroine chops off the heroine's head, the heroine's deteriorating condition is added, such as exposed teeth, crazy long nails, etc., And the heroine is a little hesitant. For example, the first time, the heroine closed her eyes, sprayed blood on her face, etc., And then deal with the mutated Tibetan Mastiff. Writing about collecting supplies and stuff (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑) is a bit like these are all prepared for the heroine. (Although these are all prepared for the heroine) It's better to write a little bit about the heroine's inner struggle, and it can still be combined. The number of words, for example, the heroine thought that although the end of the world is coming, it would be immoral to do so, but the heroine shook her head and thought about it, the end of the world is coming, she must become stronger, she must protect the people she loves, and the people who love herself. Ten thousand words are omitted here Not only can the word count be reduced, but the plot can also be made reasonably vivid. The author's description of scenery really has a lot of room for improvement, because it is a plot and a transition and transition of the characters' psychology. For example: The weather outside is beautiful and sunny. But so-and-so couldn't feel the warmth in her heart at all. She recalled in her mind what the scumbag and the bitch had just done in front of her. Her hands tightened involuntarily, and her nails dug into the flesh of her palms without feeling anything. The bitterness in her heart was suffocating. This weather seemed to be mocking her for being sentimental. Omit 10,000 words. Ganbadie author=￣ω￣=

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There is something about this book that I am not particularly satisfied with. I feel that the progress between the heroine and the hero is a bit fast, and the heroine also needs to be tempered, but it is not bad, keep up the hard work!

Haha😄 I don't like this kind of female protagonist very much. I feel a bit silly. Personally, I prefer strong female characters, but other than that, the writing is good.

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