The Doomsday Cook Takes Over

Interested friends can check in here every day ~ Chongya

First of all, the cause of the apocalypse is ridiculous. Such a large meteorite flying over would have been visible through astronomical telescopes more than ten years ago! What's more, do you think that so many countries around the world that have astronomical telescopes choose not to announce it? ! Even if the official didn't say it, no matter how big it is and how many months away, ordinary unofficial astronomy enthusiasts can still see it with their telescopes, but no one said anything? What's more, even if it's a week or two away, it can be observed with the naked eye! Although it is a novel and fictitious, even if you say that when you open your eyes and don't know why, it turns dark, it's the end of the world, it's zombies, and you don't know what's going on in the end, it's still better than writing blindly! It's just annoying that I have no relevant knowledge and didn't check the information, so I just wrote it casually. The following content also has similar problems, and the writing is too weak, the characters cannot be drawn, the pace is slow, and the plot is not well followed. I can't stand it anymore!

It is true that the writing is not good enough for my first time writing. I don't expect to cater to everyone's tastes and I don't expect to achieve great results. Some of the foreshadowings I discovered in the early stage will be filled in later. Please don't read a few chapters and feel that you have control of the overall situation. Please complain appropriately. I will take your suggestions seriously, but don't be too insulting. The things you don't like are also things I spend hours coding out every day. Bow(つД`)ノ By the way, Ye Lei is just cannon fodder. Don't expect to survive being devoured by zombies underground. This is not a mutation after a bite ~ it's just left with bone residue ε-(´∀｀; )

It's pretty good-looking at the front, but it gets messier as you go towards the back, and it feels a bit like a perverted male lead. It also makes the male protagonist lose his memory. It's so annoying.

This is a new post, so please forgive me if my writing style is unfamiliar. You don't have to love me, please don't hurt me (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵) If you like it, you can make a recommendation and leave a comment, I will read it all Regarding updates: I have been very busy recently, and the daily update time is variable. It is usually updated before 8pm. (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) Bow

The most annoying thing is that the heroine's daughter is with the male lead, and they call it redemption. I really can't accept it.

I just encountered a robbery on the way to buy candles and stabbed someone with a knife. When I returned home, Lu Chen helped you catch the thief who broke into the house. He wanted to help you solve the problem, but you said it was illegal. Hahaha, is this a double...

I really don't understand. I read the comments and ended up with the male and female protagonist's child? Redemption? I'm really speechless if this is the case. No matter what this person has been through, I felt disgusted by her abuse of innocent women from the beginning. It was even more disgusting when I saw the old boatman on the boat where the male and female protagonists were killed after going to the island. You can be cold and ruthless, but you must have a bottom line. I think this is a pervert. In reality, the kind of serial murder perverts take a look. Don't all the stories in the story have a bad childhood, so we have to sympathize with them? And redemption? Only those who were killed by him want to be redeemed. If the victim is bad or has hurt you before, I won't say anything, but this kind of pure perverted murderer still plays the yandere redemption trick. I am really disgusted.

I initially read the synopsis and thought it was pretty good. Although the male and female protagonists have too many names that are a little over-the-top, which is a bit of a drama, you can probably ignore it later and focus on the plot. However, the heroine scratched her calf in order to save the hero's aunt at the beginning. As a result, the hero spanked her on the way home and spanked her for the first time when they met... I really felt that it was very gangster and completely opposite to the hero's character (soldier, rational, indifferent, and a bit cold). It's not like the two of them were already in love and having fun 😂! After sending it back, he didn't care about the heroine's wounds. If the heroine hadn't called the hero by mistake, the hero wouldn't have come down to check on the heroine's wounds and bandage them... Indifference is not an excuse for being rude. Also, whose door is broken in half by kicking it a few times, and it's not made of paper😣. Does it have super powers? This is the first time the author has written an article, so it is understandable and I hope it can be gradually improved to make it logically smooth. Again, the beginning is really important! Keep the most direct chapters for readers! Only when interest comes can attract readers to read on!

I've said it dozens of times and it's really not thoughtful when I write it for the first time. Can you please forgive me? Really, a negative review can make me feel uncomfortable for a long time and it's very depressing. I don't like the comments and I will delete the comments that I feel I don't approve of. Don't try to bully me. I'm really annoyed that you guys read pirated books or read them and give bad reviews without thinking at the beginning. If you don't like it, just block me. I can't make everyone like it. Thanks.