Beast Control Starts with the Contracted Little Ghost
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Fang Qingyan quietly tried out the closed beta game, but unexpectedly her soul was shattered. When he opened his eyes, he saw a chase scene filled with bullets and bullets, and he was also bared by a monster like a giant monkey. Newbie protection period? Doesn't exist! Various skills to smash your face like crazy! At the critical moment of life and death, she released the forbidden spiritual beast, so... Others started with a contract with a cute puppy and rabbit, while Fang Qingyan started with a strange little ghost. "By the way, will this thing swallow me up first?" I can't control that much anymore! Since you can't go back, then go crazy in this world! [Beast Control + Strong Female + Cool Writing + Battle + No CP]
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After reading the book for so long, this is the first time I am writing a review. I read it for the ghost series of the female channel and the Green Blade Demon. I finally found a story in the female channel in which the spiritual beast that the Cang Yan Ninja met was the protagonist! The writing style is both realistic and dark but also abstract and lively, making it not depressing to read. The early plot is well-written in connecting the rationality and combat! The heroine is not invincible from the beginning. She comes to a dangerous world with the moral values of a rich girl who has lived in a peaceful socialist environment for 20 years. She has the kind of ordinary people with very upright views who are suddenly faced with the danger of their lives, and the sense of bewilderment and excitement of human evil. The heroine adapts quickly and does not break through the bottom line just because she is in a desperate situation. She also has good qualities in her own right. The force value and on-the-spot performance are also excellent; Qingfeng Ninja also started from the time when the king returned to the little ghost period, and the combat experience reset the character and became childish and arrogant. Moreover, the master and the spirit beast both faced danger and the battlefield. It was not a traditional beast-control story where the master commanded the spirit beasts to fight, which increased the excitement and sense of substitution. It can be regarded as a story of the master and the spirit beast growing up together. Emotionally, don't compare to other novels. Qingfeng Ninja has her own personality and experience. She is very strong and assertive. The heroine can only go along with it at first, relying on the guarantee of goodwill to be coaxed and deceived. Later, she experienced a lot of common daily life and battles, from being ruthless to slowly integrating into human society and showing tenderness. The bond with the heroine has evolved from the 80% guarantee given by the system to mutual trust. Fighting side by side, it is also very moving to read. But there are also some things in the article that feel very abrupt to me. When describing the appearance and temperament of female characters, the author feels that he is using descriptions from ancient romance novels. This is very abrupt and dramatic for a young reader like me. I feel like I want to write about female warriors, but I can't get away from the stereotype that girls should be ladies and serve in the beautiful service. (I feel that the heroine and her mother are described as charming so many times that I thought the author would only use this adjective, which was very abrupt). Why is the word "jiaohe" used in battle🙃! This is fighting! Can Nuhe or many other words be used instead? Is the heroine some kind of delicate warrior? Funny. In the emotional line, Aye gradually changes from being cold and ruthless to showing a soft and gentle side, but the transition feels very abrupt. As long as he is giving the life essence to the sick children in the hospital, there is nothing wrong with it and it is also very heartwarming. But the premise is that when the heroine has 90 favorability and the injury is aggravated, while waiting for follow-up rescue, he ran to the wetland forest to play somewhere. While the heroine was lying in the hospital to recuperate, he also wandered around. In the end, the heroine recovered from the injury and found it. Then you told me that it got involved with the children, and then the little boy asked if it could be cured, so he separated the life essence? Or does every child have it? Huh? No? Originally this thing was so easy to give? Isn't it the key to your survival? Aren't you going to protect the heroine? Isn't the heroine your only tie in this world (it says so)? There is still a 90-point favorability bonus between you. The heroine was seriously injured and you didn't give her any help. Can you treat her? Later in the game at the amusement park, the opponent Phantom Mink fought tooth and nail and suffered bleeding. How many times has the heroine been injured? The heroine is really not good anymore. If you want to show her gentleness, you can't be so blunt. Give your gentleness to others and give your strength to the heroine? That's very impressive. Also, after entering college, the heroine's own growth line has been very blurry. As a time traveler, her knowledge of beast control only ranges from mid- to low-level skills. She can clearly check some of the skills of the opponent's spirit beasts and the ability of the weak team. However, the heroine actually needs the Bears to remind the weak team before the game to start arranging tactics? No? He didn't say. Don't you know? We spent more than 18 days sparring together and didn't look at the opponent's information at all? The heroine has this kind of golden finger but can't use it at all. The early stage command is already weak, and the weakness information is not shared with the spirit beasts. It is all up to the spirit beasts to explore on their own. In the end, they were seriously injured and felt distressed. I feel that they are not on the same line as the early stage brains. It is completely weakening the female identity. Regarding the use of skills and the development of combos, most of them were developed by Beastmaster himself. I just sighed when I saw others using combination skills ingeniously (it feels like I have never been exposed to games such as Beastmaster Battle in modern society before). In the later stages of the battle, it feels like you have to rely on the protagonist's halo spirit beast to finally explode on his own to win. The heroine has become a complete accessory. Although they are on stage to fight together, their presence is not as strong as directing from outside. The heroine's strength level is also a mystery. Before entering college, she was very fierce in fights, and her melee sword and gun skills were very good. After entering college, they have been emphasizing that the heroine has an intermediate talent for combat proficiency. Others only have strength but don't know how to use it. The heroine shows that she is particularly confident in her own force. It made me think that the heroine was at least at the forefront among the 12 people, but after three games, I only narrowly won against the girls. When fighting against men, you will either be kicked out directly or draw. This is the case even after defeating the Bears. The heroine still firmly believes that her strength value is particularly high?😓I know that in the early stage, you want to write a slap-in-the-face and the opponent is weak and cannot compare with the heroine, but you want to write about the difficulty of the game later, which shows that the heroine's strength value cannot keep up with her confidence level. In the later stage, it was all up to Aye to lead him. And when I first started fighting with the social crocodile, I obviously felt that they were both very arrogant. It was obvious that he had just been tricked by the three-headed evil dragon, so he had no memory at all and almost overturned in the end. Each of the last three games gave me the feeling that because you are the protagonist, you can always narrowly defeat your opponent. There is no highlight of the heroine at all, just the halo of the protagonist. There is also the matter of the author's abstraction. After Aye evolved into Shadow Blade, those classmates didn't know him, but admired him very much, so they just called him Gui Bao? No? Does the image you described of Shadow Blade have anything to do with Po? Why do you have to bundle it with Bao? It was very dramatic when I saw it, and I felt very ghostly. Overall, this book has good and bad points. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing long articles. The setting is very interesting and attractive, and the rhythm in the early stage is also well grasped. However, the writing power in the later stage is limited. I can only say that the author should work hard!
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Official(1)Scraped 1d ago
After reading the book for so long, this is the first time I am writing a review. I read it for the ghost series of the female channel and the Green Blade Demon. I finally found a story in the female channel in which the spiritual beast that the Cang Yan Ninja met was the protagonist! The writing style is both realistic and dark but also abstract and lively, making it not depressing to read. The early plot is well-written in connecting the rationality and combat! The heroine is not invincible from the beginning. She comes to a dangerous world with the moral values of a rich girl who has lived in a peaceful socialist environment for 20 years. She has the kind of ordinary people with very upright views who are suddenly faced with the danger of their lives, and the sense of bewilderment and excitement of human evil. The heroine adapts quickly and does not break through the bottom line just because she is in a desperate situation. She also has good qualities in her own right. The force value and on-the-spot performance are also excellent; Qingfeng Ninja also started from the time when the king returned to the little ghost period, and the combat experience reset the character and became childish and arrogant. Moreover, the master and the spirit beast both faced danger and the battlefield. It was not a traditional beast-control story where the master commanded the spirit beasts to fight, which increased the excitement and sense of substitution. It can be regarded as a story of the master and the spirit beast growing up together. Emotionally, don't compare to other novels. Qingfeng Ninja has her own personality and experience. She is very strong and assertive. The heroine can only go along with it at first, relying on the guarantee of goodwill to be coaxed and deceived. Later, she experienced a lot of common daily life and battles, from being ruthless to slowly integrating into human society and showing tenderness. The bond with the heroine has evolved from the 80% guarantee given by the system to mutual trust. Fighting side by side, it is also very moving to read. But there are also some things in the article that feel very abrupt to me. When describing the appearance and temperament of female characters, the author feels that he is using descriptions from ancient romance novels. This is very abrupt and dramatic for a young reader like me. I feel like I want to write about female warriors, but I can't get away from the stereotype that girls should be ladies and serve in the beautiful service. (I feel that the heroine and her mother are described as charming so many times that I thought the author would only use this adjective, which was very abrupt). Why is the word "jiaohe" used in battle🙃! This is fighting! Can Nuhe or many other words be used instead? Is the heroine some kind of delicate warrior? Funny. In the emotional line, Aye gradually changes from being cold and ruthless to showing a soft and gentle side, but the transition feels very abrupt. As long as he is giving the life essence to the sick children in the hospital, there is nothing wrong with it and it is also very heartwarming. But the premise is that when the heroine has 90 favorability and the injury is aggravated, while waiting for follow-up rescue, he ran to the wetland forest to play somewhere. While the heroine was lying in the hospital to recuperate, he also wandered around. In the end, the heroine recovered from the injury and found it. Then you told me that it got involved with the children, and then the little boy asked if it could be cured, so he separated the life essence? Or does every child have it? Huh? No? Originally this thing was so easy to give? Isn't it the key to your survival? Aren't you going to protect the heroine? Isn't the heroine your only tie in this world (it says so)? There is still a 90-point favorability bonus between you. The heroine was seriously injured and you didn't give her any help. Can you treat her? Later in the game at the amusement park, the opponent Phantom Mink fought tooth and nail and suffered bleeding. How many times has the heroine been injured? The heroine is really not good anymore. If you want to show her gentleness, you can't be so blunt. Give your gentleness to others and give your strength to the heroine? That's very impressive. Also, after entering college, the heroine's own growth line has been very blurry. As a time traveler, her knowledge of beast control only ranges from mid- to low-level skills. She can clearly check some of the skills of the opponent's spirit beasts and the ability of the weak team. However, the heroine actually needs the Bears to remind the weak team before the game to start arranging tactics? No? He didn't say. Don't you know? We spent more than 18 days sparring together and didn't look at the opponent's information at all? The heroine has this kind of golden finger but can't use it at all. The early stage command is already weak, and the weakness information is not shared with the spirit beasts. It is all up to the spirit beasts to explore on their own. In the end, they were seriously injured and felt distressed. I feel that they are not on the same line as the early stage brains. It is completely weakening the female identity. Regarding the use of skills and the development of combos, most of them were developed by Beastmaster himself. I just sighed when I saw others using combination skills ingeniously (it feels like I have never been exposed to games such as Beastmaster Battle in modern society before). In the later stages of the battle, it feels like you have to rely on the protagonist's halo spirit beast to finally explode on his own to win. The heroine has become a complete accessory. Although they are on stage to fight together, their presence is not as strong as directing from outside. The heroine's strength level is also a mystery. Before entering college, she was very fierce in fights, and her melee sword and gun skills were very good. After entering college, they have been emphasizing that the heroine has an intermediate talent for combat proficiency. Others only have strength but don't know how to use it. The heroine shows that she is particularly confident in her own force. It made me think that the heroine was at least at the forefront among the 12 people, but after three games, I only narrowly won against the girls. When fighting against men, you will either be kicked out directly or draw. This is the case even after defeating the Bears. The heroine still firmly believes that her strength value is particularly high?😓I know that in the early stage, you want to write a slap-in-the-face and the opponent is weak and cannot compare with the heroine, but you want to write about the difficulty of the game later, which shows that the heroine's strength value cannot keep up with her confidence level. In the later stage, it was all up to Aye to lead him. And when I first started fighting with the social crocodile, I obviously felt that they were both very arrogant. It was obvious that he had just been tricked by the three-headed evil dragon, so he had no memory at all and almost overturned in the end. Each of the last three games gave me the feeling that because you are the protagonist, you can always narrowly defeat your opponent. There is no highlight of the heroine at all, just the halo of the protagonist. There is also the matter of the author's abstraction. After Aye evolved into Shadow Blade, those classmates didn't know him, but admired him very much, so they just called him Gui Bao? No? Does the image you described of Shadow Blade have anything to do with Po? Why do you have to bundle it with Bao? It was very dramatic when I saw it, and I felt very ghostly. Overall, this book has good and bad points. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing long articles. The setting is very interesting and attractive, and the rhythm in the early stage is also well grasped. However, the writing power in the later stage is limited. I can only say that the author should work hard!
