Heaven-defying Yunhuang
by Flowers From The Other Shore Bloom And Return
About This Novel
As for this book, the first few hundred pictures are the author's dark history. The author is still working hard to learn how to write. When she became conscious again: she found that she had become a fetus! And she is still one of the twins, no matter she wants to be a sister, a sister, a sister! Say important things three times! But what happened when he was struck by lightning at birth? And because of this she became a younger sister. All right! Just be a sister! Mom is gone! She wants to embark on the path of becoming strong with her brother. She must protect her brother, uncle, sisters and uncles! But what's going on with this extremely beautiful boy next to him? Why wouldn't Mao Lai leave by her side? Forget it, leave him alone! A certain beautiful boy: Mainland China is so boring! It's not easy to meet such a cute and interesting little guy! How could he let it go! Where are the two subordinates, their noble, elegant, domineering, indifferent and ruthless Highness? Is this guy in front of me really His Highness?
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Official(399)Scraped 3d ago
It's not easy to be a novelist, and it's even harder to finish writing a book. I hope you can keep your original intention! The road of writing is very hard, but if this is the author's dream, I still recommend that the author stick to it!
Needless to say, Di Yunjing should be an invisible sister-controlling brother! (∩•̀Ω•́)⊃-* Monster, let's see if I don't accept you!
Happy New Year!
Happy New Year to all my cuties! I wish you peace, health and happiness this year! Study and improve every day! A scumbag will become a top student, and a top student will become a god! I wish you all the best in everything you wish for! Also, I want to say sorry to you here! This book has many shortcomings both in the early stage and now, and I don't want to revise anything in the early stage. At that time I didn't know anything! So the things written are very eye-catching! In the future, I will work hard to write articles and improve my level, okay! I don't have any level to speak of. Anyway, I will try my best to write better! Thank you for your support! Come on 2021!
question
Do you think I should add some drama to Emperor Yunjing, Emperor Xiechen?
Let me express myself
If you like the story of fetal penetration genius, you can read on. How should I put it? This one is just a bit short on word count. The first few pictures are a bit stiff after that.
fine
It's a good adjective to describe a character, but it's a bit exaggerated. The same goes for the background and characteristics of the characters. I feel like the golden finger is too big and very exaggerated. Although the heroine had no family ties in her previous life and longed to have parents, it felt a bit inconsistent for a killer to accept her mother so quickly and place such a strong emphasis on feelings. Starting to practice in the womb is barely acceptable. After all, there are inherited memories, but when you come out and get struck by more than 100 thunders, will you really not be struck to death? There are not so many Dao Lei in the Nascent Soul stage. Then because you trust your loved ones, you directly bring your loved ones into the space? ? Is the Killer King really not defensive at all, without any consideration? 🤔 As for the heroine's brother, as a baby with no memory of his previous life, why can he talk? ? Then I stopped reading. I could accept the golden finger, but this golden finger really made me unable to accept it. It was unnatural right after I was born.
I feel like the description is too cumbersome!
Regardless of whether it describes a place or a person, adding too many words makes me feel like I am trying to make up the same number of words. If I don't talk about the key points for a long time, I am a little impatient to read!
It's okay, but the first six chapters occasionally describe how beautiful and elegant the siblings are, which seems to be a small number of words. In the seventh chapter, there are three or four more bland ones in a row. From the eighth chapter, it seems more compact.
It's only chapter 45. Can the author speed it up?
Very nice
It's very beautiful. I like this kind of heroine. It's great. I hope it will be updated soon.
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Official(399)Scraped 3d ago
It's not easy to be a novelist, and it's even harder to finish writing a book. I hope you can keep your original intention! The road of writing is very hard, but if this is the author's dream, I still recommend that the author stick to it!
Needless to say, Di Yunjing should be an invisible sister-controlling brother! (∩•̀Ω•́)⊃-* Monster, let's see if I don't accept you!
Happy New Year!
Happy New Year to all my cuties! I wish you peace, health and happiness this year! Study and improve every day! A scumbag will become a top student, and a top student will become a god! I wish you all the best in everything you wish for! Also, I want to say sorry to you here! This book has many shortcomings both in the early stage and now, and I don't want to revise anything in the early stage. At that time I didn't know anything! So the things written are very eye-catching! In the future, I will work hard to write articles and improve my level, okay! I don't have any level to speak of. Anyway, I will try my best to write better! Thank you for your support! Come on 2021!
question
Do you think I should add some drama to Emperor Yunjing, Emperor Xiechen?
Let me express myself
If you like the story of fetal penetration genius, you can read on. How should I put it? This one is just a bit short on word count. The first few pictures are a bit stiff after that.
fine
It's a good adjective to describe a character, but it's a bit exaggerated. The same goes for the background and characteristics of the characters. I feel like the golden finger is too big and very exaggerated. Although the heroine had no family ties in her previous life and longed to have parents, it felt a bit inconsistent for a killer to accept her mother so quickly and place such a strong emphasis on feelings. Starting to practice in the womb is barely acceptable. After all, there are inherited memories, but when you come out and get struck by more than 100 thunders, will you really not be struck to death? There are not so many Dao Lei in the Nascent Soul stage. Then because you trust your loved ones, you directly bring your loved ones into the space? ? Is the Killer King really not defensive at all, without any consideration? 🤔 As for the heroine's brother, as a baby with no memory of his previous life, why can he talk? ? Then I stopped reading. I could accept the golden finger, but this golden finger really made me unable to accept it. It was unnatural right after I was born.
I feel like the description is too cumbersome!
Regardless of whether it describes a place or a person, adding too many words makes me feel like I am trying to make up the same number of words. If I don't talk about the key points for a long time, I am a little impatient to read!
It's okay, but the first six chapters occasionally describe how beautiful and elegant the siblings are, which seems to be a small number of words. In the seventh chapter, there are three or four more bland ones in a row. From the eighth chapter, it seems more compact.
It's only chapter 45. Can the author speed it up?
Very nice
It's very beautiful. I like this kind of heroine. It's great. I hope it will be updated soon.
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