Rise in Calradia

It's a game novel set in a different world with the background of riding and slashing, which feels pretty good.

I'm finally back to update, but I can't praise the speed... It is a well-written novel about horse-and-blade combat, and it really has some flavor of horse-and-blade combat. Although it is a system flow, the author is basically based on reality. The plot and settings are relatively reasonable, and some elements that are a little bit abrupt due to the game system are not eye-catching. From the perspective of a fan, it is well done. There is room for improvement in the details of the writing, and some of the author's basic skills are not quite up to standard. Not to mention typos, the same word is used continuously in many places. For example, conjunctions such as "but" and "and" are often used continuously in a paragraph, which is very uncomfortable when reading. When narrating, the same person is often used monotonically. For example, when writing about the protagonist, only the name "Byron" is used. Especially in the battle part, three consecutive sentences use this person as the subject, which is very unpleasant to read. Of course, these are minor issues and there are some flaws in the writing, but they do not affect the entire book. What I appreciate more is the author's description of the heroes who ride and slash. The characters are basically written with flesh and blood and are relatively vivid. Of course, each character received different emphasis. For example, Bandak's role was far less than that of Jamila who joined the team at the same time, and even less than that of Crane later. That's not to say that this is a problem. It's normal for the characters to be detailed. However, the author still has room for improvement in this regard. The characters have flesh and blood, but the deeper inner emotions are worth exploring. For example, Crane breaks away from the flat feeling of NPCs in general system texts, and also has his own interests and considerations. Another thing that people appreciate is that this book embodies certain thoughts and thinking of the author. Although it is relatively fragmentary and brief, it is indeed reflected. This is also the good thing about this book. It has a developmental cognition and understanding of things, and slowly reaches a conclusion. Unlike other novels, which must dominate the world as soon as they are published, and make great ambitions without a valid reason. In this regard, this book does a pretty good job.

Riding and cutting.

Riding and slashing=￣ω￣=