Heroic Mecha Master

The comment I took so much trouble to write has been deleted again. As expected, I am still suitable for Crystal Flame.

How to say it? This is a post-apocalyptic novel, brother. Wherever you go, you also need a sense of modern technology, right? What the hell is a musket? There are only two bullets issued. Do you have to stop and ask the other party to stop while you are out of bullets while you are firing? There is something even more amazing later, the mecha also wears black boots. What, are you afraid of wear and tear? You also need to wear a red tassel on your head... Why don't you wear a straw hat?

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Can you please stop insisting on the Water Margin? Personally, I feel that I am always being persuaded to give up! If I didn't think the subject matter was more interesting, I would have said goodbye! How many generals in ancient China could not write about Water Margin but had to write about it?

Apocalypse, mecha, the two themes are quite conflicting when combined. The society is dark and chaotic due to the lack of technology. It is difficult for mecha fans to accept the mecha theme under such conditions. At the same time, the preparation for mecha battles is also quite poor. In the early development period, these people used mechas. When fighting, they were just stupid. When beaten, they were in a daze, and their reactions were inferior. When I got to the other side, my brain was not flexible and my knowledge was short. MD, I couldn't figure it out. There were so many problems in every detail. Let me summarize the biggest problems. The main theme was confusing. I couldn't figure out which direction the author was focusing on. I didn't write well, and I didn't have much sense of technology. As a result, the rhythm of the whole text collapsed and was a mess. Secondly, the subject matter is misplaced. The apocalypse and mechas can be paired, but at least it should be paired with a cyberpunk style. The social style of low living standards and highly developed technological levels, and finally the rhythm of collapse. No matter how written it is, it will be like a running account. Storytelling Things must be grand, twists and turns, and there must be a rhythm to be called a good story. The author said, "Farm, farm, get beaten, I can't beat it, leave, run away, get beaten, and the day will come, and I really hate that there aren't enough readers to start this story." In addition, in any mecha story, if the protagonist is not the one who activates the mecha, my suggestion is /remake

But the author has no writing skills. When writing about the protagonist, he always writes about battles. Are you a mecha builder or a fighting maniac? The main character in the story didn't do his job well. From the beginning to the end, he didn't build a few mechas, but he was fighting every day. The protagonist is described as a weakling who makes no effort to build a mecha, and goes to write about other people's battles every day. This book is completely written as a war article by the author. It's such a pity that such a good subject is poorly written.

He doesn't have any ability to protect himself, but he still likes to watch strong men fight. This kind of seeking death is because the pig's feet are killed, and someone comes to save him at the last moment.

I think there can be a few more combos. In addition to the Seven Stars Juyi of Water Margin, the Five Tigers of the Three Kingdoms or other dynasties can also be combined. Later upgraded high-generation mechas can be equipped with accessories to show their superiority. Of course, this is also a manifestation of strength. For example: the two major components of the operating system and energy core The branch of the operating system - neuron system (this system can use micro-control to hit combos that are difficult to appear in reality to achieve greater destructive power) can be matched with the King of Fighters series mechas (I will not make up the name of the mecha series) The energy core branch can be divided into four cores: strength, defense, dodge, and skill. Of course, it can also be further subdivided. Dodge-Speed, Defense-Confrontation, Skill-Combo, etc. Different cores affect different attributes and respond to different combat needs. I feel that there is still a lot of room for improvement in this book. I suggest the author to open a post to collect the wonderful suggestions from miraculous people to pave the way for the success of this book. In short, I hope that the writing will get better and better, so go for it!

It takes less than a few days to make a mecha. It's as fast as making a model and it only takes less than 5 people to make it. It's awesome.

It looked okay from the front but it's so messed up...