The Quickest Way to Grab Red Envelopes in the Apocalypse

Even if you save the child, you still tell me it's a space ring? ! Your brain is crazy, you think everyone has a space ring?

This is my first time writing an article. I hope you can give me more opinions. The encouragement and support from my book friends are the motivation for my writing!

I don't mind rescuing people too much. After all, the heroine comes from a peaceful age. Although she takes precautions, she probably doesn't take much precautions against little girls. But the space ring is a bit awkward. You said that a space power is better than a space ring, and you just said it. If the little girl is unable to handle the news, then the heroine will be game over. Moreover, the ring is not invisible, and it has not been shown that it is only bound to the heroine. This is too arrogant.

I would like to make a small suggestion. Don't make the text paragraphs so compact. It would be better if you arrange short paragraphs and small paragraphs on alternate lines! 😍

Very pretty! The writing is fluent, this is my first time writing, very good! 👍👍

I'm so stuck in updating.,,,. . . . .

It can be seen that the writing style is very unfamiliar. Is this your first time writing? In fact, if you don't mind some details, you can still read it. I just read a few chapters and the description of fighting zombies is too much. I can't remember what kind of graceful posture it is. When faced with disgusting things, forgive me for not being able to imagine any graceful posture.