Douluo Jueshi: Prepare to Moisturize the Sun and the Moon, the System is Here

The plot has always been the author's conspiracy theory about the original work. There is no main line and a lot of nonsense. It is worse than the original work.

See Chapter 54 This book actually starts well, but the explanation keeps dragging on and on. It feels like I saw something weird and then stepped on it again and again, and then I felt so angry that I squatted on it and pooped on it. In fact, the explanation is very reasonable, but when I kept explaining, I suddenly said that she was in love in the mainland, and suddenly Nan Nan liked the protagonist, and also the Golden Crow Saint in front of me. I liked it for no reason. There was a plot that took less than a day, and then I was paired with a female partner, and then I suddenly blushed and the plot and so on. There are also nobles and sects who have been talking about how they see this, and I know that the protagonist wants to unify the continent and so on, and they have been laying out the legitimacy of the protagonist, and then made the sect academy and the nobles of the aristocratic families to be more disgusting, more sick, more perverted, more perverted, more conspiracies, more conspiracies, there is no increase in soul power through cultivation, and there is only a piece of gold of life along the way. I haven't written yet because it cleanses the tendons and cuts the marrow, so I started with elixirs and Nannan, and then Shura Sword, and then a character was mixed in and it was a bit unbearable. First of all, according to logic, the protagonist should leave Star Dou first, so either Shrek or asking them to take them to a nearby city. Tian Meng knew that the protagonist was unwilling to go to Shrek, but Tian Meng would not cross the Star Dou Forest, but would take a detour. Then, according to the setting of Mandala Snake and Mandala Flower, you can buy a lot of money, open a room, and use the gold of living things to cleanse the muscles and cut the marrow. According to the setting that ordinary people in Douluo Continent spend 1 gold soul coin a year, you can stay for a few months, and then go to the far north to obtain the Ice Emperor. Finally, there is the completion of the noumenon sect or the development of martial arts or technology, plus some jokes and daily plots. According to the plots in the first few chapters, it is very good and interesting. After all, the tough-talking system and the protagonist who is familiar with the plot but runs according to his own thinking are very good, popular and interesting. It would be more interesting if some jokes and the protagonist's personality are made more interesting. Even if the plot of the harem is reasonable later, it will be good. But, parting ways with Beibei and the others in the Star Dou Forest? And then run to the mixed zone by yourself? Where did the protagonist come from when he said this was for me? Author, what did you do to me?

The subject matter seemed pretty good at the beginning, but when I got to the back, I suddenly wrote a space-time chaos, just like **💩💩, 😐😐 Also, although life helps turtles three times, it is disgusting to be able to forcefully live like smoke🤢🤢🤢 Really unstoppable.

Analyzing Ni Ma, you are a little Karami, analyzing day by day, the author is Zhu Ba

Holding the sun and the moon in your hands to pick up the stars. There is no one like me in the world. You wrote that you are holding the sun and the moon in your hands and picking up the stars. You might as well have the power of a bow.

The first two were okay, but later on when I met the people from Shrek's inner courtyard, I started to BB. Did he think that the novel he wrote was dubbed by real people? Originally it is human-machine reading and reading word by word with your own eyes. It is really annoying for you to write a lot of nonsense. It would be fine if you could explain it well. Your explanation is wrong. Aren't your hands tired from writing so much nonsense? To be honest, I didn't remember a few words because you talked so much nonsense, because the human brain will subconsciously filter out some nonsense.

Rubbish, don't write nonsense if you don't have diamonds.

It's really ugly, the language is confusing and the plot is incomprehensible.

A history within a history, the timeline is not correct at all, it feels like the content was copied from a forum discussion about Dou Er

I'm speechless😅, the front is quite normal, but the back is bullshit