
Ancestors of the Wilderness
by Wild Form
About This Novel
When the tribe was on the verge of extinction due to the snow season, Xia Yan traveled across time carrying a system that could query modern knowledge. Fishing, anti-inflammatory, shipbuilding, farming, weaving, domestication... Starting from the most basic survival skills, impart knowledge, develop technology, strengthen the tribe, and resist invasion. For the simple ideal of "making his life more comfortable", he built his own glorious civilization bit by bit in this barbaric era.
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Official(3)Scraped 11d ago
My mother died at the beginning
I hope that readers who love reading this kind of articles will also die like their own mothers, hahaha
There is a game also called this name
There seems to be a game on Steam with this name. Does the author have any connection with that game studio or did he just use it because he thought the name sounded good? The quality of this work is uncertain, let's take another look.
Bad review
I read a few chapters and it was boring The first point: In order to save the dying protagonist, the mother of the protagonist shared her own food with the protagonist and persisted in rescuing the protagonist regardless of dissuasion. She created an image of a strong mother and brought the character to life. As a result, the next chapter was written to death and was incomprehensible. You can definitely write about capturing more food and sharing it with your mother. At least the readers will be moved and feel better. Writing about the filial side can also create the protagonist's glorious side. Second: Common sense errors. The sudden arrival of the snow season in Chapter 1 means that it is snowing. When it snows in winter, the air is dry and the trees are basically not wet. It is also written that the tribesmen failed to drill wood to make fire because the wood was tidal. This is very deliberate. It is obviously to pave the way for using ice cubes to make fire later. It is pure random writing.
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 11d ago
My mother died at the beginning
I hope that readers who love reading this kind of articles will also die like their own mothers, hahaha
There is a game also called this name
There seems to be a game on Steam with this name. Does the author have any connection with that game studio or did he just use it because he thought the name sounded good? The quality of this work is uncertain, let's take another look.
Bad review
I read a few chapters and it was boring The first point: In order to save the dying protagonist, the mother of the protagonist shared her own food with the protagonist and persisted in rescuing the protagonist regardless of dissuasion. She created an image of a strong mother and brought the character to life. As a result, the next chapter was written to death and was incomprehensible. You can definitely write about capturing more food and sharing it with your mother. At least the readers will be moved and feel better. Writing about the filial side can also create the protagonist's glorious side. Second: Common sense errors. The sudden arrival of the snow season in Chapter 1 means that it is snowing. When it snows in winter, the air is dry and the trees are basically not wet. It is also written that the tribesmen failed to drill wood to make fire because the wood was tidal. This is very deliberate. It is obviously to pave the way for using ice cubes to make fire later. It is pure random writing.









